Analysis of Student Example –Stacey M

I am writing about Derek’s Ed Narrative

1. He uses vivid imagery: uses descriptive language to create a strong sense of place and emotion, such as detailing uniform and the atmosphere in the auditorium. I will incorporate similar imagery to immerse readers in my experiences.
2. Reflection: he shares his feelings of anxiety and disillusionment, allowing for a deeper emotional connection with the readers. I will want to be equally open and reflective in my writing.
3. Clear Structure: follows a clear progression from quarantine struggles to the first day of school and the realization of repeating a grade. I will focus on maintaining a logical flow in my writing to give clarity and engagement.