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Evil within the wilderness (Young Goodman Brown)

Hawthorne uses references of “evil” to help create a visual aid for readers within the climax of the story, when Goodman maddened with despair deep within the forest, to set the setting and mood of the story. Hawthorne described the forest to be “peopled with frightful sounds; the creaking of the trees, the howling of wild beasts, and the yell of Indians; while sometimes the wind tolled like a distant church-bell giving a broad roar around the traveler.” His description of the forest gave us a better understanding of the scenario Goodman is in. Goodman in a way was hurting himself by running further into the forest. Originally Goodman kept his faith, he was determined that the devil had no chance of turning him. However he began losing himself when the voices began taunting him. Out of desperation he looked up to the sky, doubting whether there really was a heaven above him. At this point Goodman lost sight to what was real or not. The evil within the forest finally managed to crack Goodman, and at any point he can completely give in and lose himself.

This sort of reminds me of McCandless death from “Into the Wild”. Not necessary for evil with supernatural events, but more about the evil and dangers of ones environment when desperate measures are taken. McCandless similar to Goodman, was put in a scenario were he questioned his ability to survive and his faith of a greater power. Because McCandless was starving, he was forced to eat wild berries that later turned out to be poisonous. However if he had waited just a couple more days with proper conservation of his supplies, McCandless might have survived. This reminds me of Goodman because, Goodman is at a point in the story were any decisions he makes might mean freedom from the devil or completely for fitting to evil. Goodman needs to push himself forward and maintain his faith even if it may seem as if he has ran out of corners to turn or places to hide.

Evil of “Young Goodman Brown”

“Young Goodman Brown” by Nathaniel Hawthorne presents us with the struggle against, and eventual relenting of a “good Christian” to evil. The author takes an interesting approach to the word “evil” not only figuratively but it is also used like an indication to the reader that this is where the rising action begins.  Our first encounter is when Goodman Brown mentions his “evil purpose,” which is immediately followed by a description of his surroundings; “He had taken a dreary road, darkened by all the gloomiest trees of the forest…” with just one sentenced the author turned our setting from a quiet village to a dark and mysterious one. It builds suspense because it gives the reader a feeling that anything can happen. Along that path the protagonist is continually tested, that action is rising and so is our suspense, Brown seems to know what he is heading towards but is hesitant to move forwards, yet the reader is still clueless as to where this story is heading. Then we reach something akin to a minor climax, “My Faith is gone!” here, Brown, refers to his wife named Faith, an interesting choice of naming, because it can also be interpreted as Brown losing his faith in God.

Then we have our second mention of the word evil, again followed by another depressing description of the woods, “The whole forest was peopled with frightful sounds… as if all Nature were laughing him to scorn.” Again more mystery and building of suspense followed by more rising action, him seeming to “fly” through the forest, again hesitant when he reaches his goal, again leaving the reader to wonder if Goodman Brown will resist the evil. This brings us to the actual climax in the story, “Faith! Faith! … Look up to Heaven, and resist the Wicked One!”  But we never get a clear explanation of what this evil is, but we still understand that it certainly is some incredible evil that Goodman Brown is dealing with; it is the lack of explanations that makes this evil so powerful that it affected Goodman Brown to the end of his days.

This unexplainable but powerful evil reminds me of the play “Othello” by William Shakespeare specifically Iago, a character that does incredibly evil things but we can never tell why. He seems to be evil for evils sake, but as readers there are no doubt that he is evil, just like we do not see anything explicitly evil about the congregation but we understand that it is.

The Pathway of Evil “Young Goodman Brown

In the story Young Goodman Brown, Hawthorne mentions the word evil at the end of the story where Goodman is at the ceremony. The devil is welcoming his new followers which Goodman and Faith, the way Hawthorne uses the word evil to create suspense is at the part when the devil said ” Evil is the nature of mankind. Evil must be your only happiness. Welcome, again my children, to the communion of your race!” Also when Goodman said “Herein did the Shape of Evil dip his hand and prepare to lay the mark of baptism upon their forehead, that they might be partakers of the mystery of sin. I believe Hawthorne want to show the readers that evil is everywhere and the people you think are good in the outside are actually bad people in the inside. In the beginning of the story Goodman calls the person he travels with” friend” which I believe was the devil because the way he explains the staff that he caring and then the traveler knew his grandfather and father. The traveler said that he helped them both and they were his good friends. After that there was the minister and Deacon Gookin which are supposed to be religious man spreading the word of God but find out that they are walking the same dark pathway as Goodman, show they are follower of the devil. Meanwhile the next person Goodman see is the old Christian lady Goody Cloyse and he finds out that she is a witch and is friend’s with the devil, the more farther Goodman goes thought the dark forest the more evil people he sees that live in his village. The only thing that keeps from falling to darkness was his wife Faith, but once he saw her walking the same pathway everything change, he tried to call her to him but then she vanished into the forest. At that point Goodman gave up on God and his faith. Once Goodman made it the end of the  forest where the ceremony is located, you can see that God tries to save Goodman when it said ” His own dead father beckoned him to advance, looking downward from a smoke-wreath, while a woman with dim feathers of despair, threw out her hand to warn him back.” It was too late Goodman was trapped and he try help his wife and himself to resist mark of the devil but she was ready to be baptized with the mark.

The story that I find that is connected to Young Goodman Brown is the story of Adam and Eve. The similarities of Goodman Brown is Adam and Eve both did not follow the path of goodness, righteous, what god presented it to them and the devil walk them to the wrong path. God told Adam and Eve not to eat of the apple she listen to the devil saying that why god is not giving you this knowledge she was tempted to eat it and disobeyed and they were thrown out of the garden of Eden because not following or listening the right path. Young Goodman Brown follows the same purpose because Gods Warning was told in faiths dream to not go to the journey but to stay with her. Goodman does not listen at all so he get tempted by the devil the further into the forest. Adam one life line was Eve the moment he trusted her and ate the apple he committed sin. Goodman one life line to stay with God was to stay with his wife Faith the moment he saw Faith following the same path as he, he gave up on God and received the mark of the Devil. At the end of both stories Adam and Eve regretted what they both committed and they both got kicked out of the Garden of Eden. Goodman regretted what he did from that episode and he lost faith in everything from that he died alone.

 

 

Evil in “Young Goodman Brown”

In the short story “Young Goodman Brown”, the author Nathaniel Hawthorne frequently used the concept of evil to create suspense throughout the duration of the story. The most significant point in the story when Hawthorne does this is at the ceremony in the forest which appeared to be a witches Sabbath. At this point, with Goodman Brown and his wife Faith at the ceremony, the old man who I assume is the devil stated “Depending upon one another’s hearts, ye had still hoped that virtue were not all a dream! Now are ye undeceived! Evil is the nature of mankind. Evil must be your only happiness. Welcome again my children, to the communion of your race!”. The devil is basically saying that it is normal human nature to sin and find happiness in what you do without worrying about the repercussions of a higher power such as God. This point is emphasized by all the people that Goodman Brown knows at the ceremony such as Goody Cloyse, Deacon Gookin and his wife Faith. These people who he believed to be good Christians were embracing the devil in what he described as the communion of the human race.

I believe that the suspense that is created at this moment is whether or not Goodman Brown will turn towards the devil and evil, or keep his faith in his beliefs. With these people that he cared for and respected, at the ceremony, it became an easier choice for Goodman Brown to attend the ceremony. The thought of being with his wife was enough to make Goodman Brown betray his convictions. When his beliefs interfered with what he wanted, he chose to abandon them. In the beginning of his journey through the forest, Goodman Brown could not be persuaded by the devil to venture further into the depths of the forest. In the end, it was not the words of the devil that persuaded him, but rather the people around him that had succumbed to evil that changed his mind.

HW for September 14

Hi class,

Thanks for the illuminating class discussion.  Wish we could have talked more about the treatment of Rip’s wife – look out for depictions of female characters in future stories!

Before doing the HW, here’s an interesting exercise: listen to at least 30 seconds of these two different rap songs.  Beastie Boys, “Intergalactic” and MF Doom, “Vomitspit.”  How would you characterize the difference between each artist’s “flow”?  (E.g., how would you describe the rhythm of each rapper – do they overwhelm you with words, or favor short, snappy lines?)  Then, as you’re reading, ask yourself: does Hawthorne have a “flow” to his writing style?

 

HW

-Read “Young Goodman Brown” using reading questions (below) and taking notes (1.5-2 hrs).  Warning: this story is probably the most difficult of the stories we’ve read so far.  The good news is that you’ve already had it broken down, sort of, via the Charters reading.  It will take time, and effort, and a dictionary, and a pen for note-taking in the margins.  Use all four!

-Blog (if you’re in Group 3 – see prompts below) or comment (if you’re not) and use the remaining time to review your notes. (1-1.5 hrs).

Remember: blogging/comments aren’t summary, or just a record of your personal emotional reaction; also, both have to involve quotation.  Practicing quotes now means you have a better shot at the paper (take the A train).

-A lot of you haven’t done comments yet.  A reminder that, if you want your comments to count for any given week, you have to do them, by 10 am the morning of Wednesday’s class. Furthermore, doing comments, and staying engaged, is part of being on the A train.  Of course, if you do more than required, it will help you!

Reading questions:

  1. Charters defines “style” as “the characteristic way an author uses language.”  In musical terms, you might think of it as the difference between two rapper’s “flows.”  Look for phrases or sentences that you think showcase Hawthorne’s signature style.  How does his style affect your experience of the plot and narration?  Blog prompt: clue.  Pick one passage that helps you understand the author’s style better.  Describe his sentence structures (simple or complex?), descriptive patterns (lots of adjectives? Few adjectives), tone (emotional? unemotional?) DO NOT simply repeat what Ann Charters says about this story in “The Elements of Fiction.”  Your post must be your own content.

2. What connections do you see between “Young Goodman Brown” and “Rip Van Winkle”?  Think of common character types, setting choices, plot twists. Are there trends you can identify as characteristically “American” literature? In what ways might either of these stories be “about” America, either its history or its symbolic importance?  Blog Prompt: Create. Imagine that you are Young Goodman Brown.  Write a first person narrative in which you encounter Rip Van Winkle.  What would the two of you have to talk about?  As you create this narrative, refer to at least one quote from “Young Goodman Brown.

 

3. Pay attention to different places where Hawthorne mentions evil.  How does Hawthorne use references to “evil” to create suspense?  Do you think Hawthorne wants the reader to agree with the definition of “evil” given at the story’s climax?  (Hint: identify the climax first!)  Blog Prompt: Connect.  Think of another story that prompts you to think about the nature of evil.  It could be a novel, film, or even real-life event.  Compare that story to “Young Goodman Brown.”  Does the stories lead you to similar, or different, conclusions about the nature of evil?  Refer to at least one quote in the story as you connect it to other stories

best,

Professor Kwong