21) Research Essay – Paragraph #1

Jonathan Valencia

ENG 1121 –D465

04/11/2016

Assignment: Introduction

 

Holocaust survivor Elie Wiesel once said “You, who are so-called illegal aliens, must know that no human being is illegal. That is a contradiction in terms. Human beings can be beautiful or more beautiful, they can be fat or skinny, they can be right or wrong, but illegal? How can a human being be illegal?” In the United States there are a lot of immigrants who are here to have a better job for they can provide for family back home. They are here to work or get out of the country they once where to avoid violence. As some people are ok with immigrants being in the country there are some who aren’t dealing with them and prefer them to be deported. Deportation has a lot of risk as if we are really convince if a person is bad or not. While some people don’t know there is also violence inside walls in which we have never entered. Gangs trying to recruit the young to bring more violence into this world. Kids having to role models due to the fact there parents are here working for he can have a better life there or some being orphans. There are a lot of immigrants from various countries men, women, and children trying to make a better life for themselves but are always worrying about being deported and causes the separation of families, over populated camps, and a bigger issue is deporting children

20) Seven Points of Peer Review for Textual Analysis Essay

Jonathan Valencia

ENG1121-D465

March 28,2016

Partner Elbert Yan

Opener: Anna Hathway, a very famous actress of this time once said, “Loneliness is my least favorite thing about life. The thing am most worried about is just being alone without anybody to care for or someone who will care for me.”

Thesis w/ 3 subtopic: Loneliness in the poem is clearly shown by the feeling and the theme of being incomplete, loss of a close friend, and the usage of imagination and dreams to feel whole.

Subtopic paragraph w/ topic sentence

  1. The theme of the poem, incompleteness, is very important part in the poem, To E.T., because there are a couple of lines in the poem that expresses the sense of being incomplete or not being whole.
  2. The loss of a close friend is clearly shown throughout the whole poem.
  3. Lastly, Rober Frost uses imagination and dreams to feel whole

3 quotes from poem in each subtopic (theme)

  1. “Unsaid between us, brother, and this remained.”
  2. “The foe thrust back beyond the Rhine.”
  3. “If I was not to speak of it to you and see you pleased once more with words of mine?”

Transitional Words/ Phrases: some are used throughout the whole essay for example the first sentence of subtopic paragraph 3.

Grammer Convention: some word errors or wrong used in the sentence

Conclusion: writer does restate thesis sentence and does have lead out sentence

19) Textual Analysis Essay – Second Draft

Jonathan Valencia

April 13,2106

ENG 1121-D465

2nd Draft – Textual Analysis

 

The Road Not Taken

          “Never give up on a dream just because of the time it will take to accomplish it. The time will pass anyway,” Earl Nightingale said. Many of us wish we could stop time, but in reality have to accept the fact that no matter what we do it keeps going on. As many grow older, as humans we have to accept that time is limited, and the choices made in life will have an impact in our future. Even though time is limited and there’s nothing to do prevent it, that doesn’t give us a reason to make excuses for the things we love doing in life. Everyone dreams and hopes to have a better future or life but have a difficult path to achieve it, as we constantly make excuses that there is not enough time. Robert Frost’s poem, “The Road Not Taken” can be similar in our type of situations as to achieve something we always dreamed off. Not making up your mind can be very stressful in reality as it takes up time, brings up excuses, and delays to your dreams and hopes.

          Sadly time is a major issue within people’s lives as they don’t have enough to enjoy the things they love. In the poem, “The Road Not Taken,” a theme related to daily life and struggle is time. Time is a major point that can be discussed related to the traveler and day-to-day life. The traveler knows that time is limited, yet he wants to return someday to the woods hoping he can travel the path he didn’t chose. He says that he want to return, but knowing there won’t be a next time he says “Yet knowing how ways leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back.” This shows us that there won’t be another opportunity to travel the path he would have preferred. It relates to our day-to-day lives by time interfering with the things we love doing. We as humans want to have enough time for family, friends, and acquaintances but always have something interfering in the way and always tell ourselves that next time there will be time, as we know that there will be a next time but don’t know exactly when.

Surprisingly, excuses are used to cover up the truth in which people are hiding every day to avoid being in trouble or getting out of troublesome situations. In the poem, “The Road Not Taken,” by Frost the traveler makes excuses in his journey in the woods. The traveler’s first excuses are that one path is shorter than the other as he says, “Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim.” Another excuse he makes for taking the shorter path is “Because it was grassy and wanted wear.” The traveler is constantly making excuses for the path he would have loved to have traveled, but always insists that the shorter path will make him reach his destination quicker, even though both will lead the same way.

Excuses are used everyday but sometimes they are not structured good enough to convince the person your telling it to. In Frost’s poem the traveler always insists that he will return to the woods and that he will travel the path he choose not to on that day. Knowing that there will? be a next time, he will have to travel the same woods again at some other point. Another excuses he uses is that he is only one person who can only travel one road at a time when he says, “And sorry I could not travel both.” When stating that he will come back and return to take the other path the traveler says, “I kept the first for another day!” He also alludes to the idea that another day won’t be happening when he states, “doubted if I should ever come back.” Not having enough time might force people to deal with the decisions and actions the traveler and we as humans make. Excuses might be temporary and not permanent. Eventually people have to stop hiding and accept the fact that there will be time, and once that comes, take that opportunity, to reflect between good and bad, as humans make many mistakes in actions that they’ve taken.

Everyone dreams and hopes are big and want to achieve them but some fail on the way there. The traveler in “The Road Not Taken” has hopes for a moment in time in which he could take the path he would have wanted to travel. He wishes that he could go back in time and travel a specific the path or hopes that in another time he can travel the path he would of love to taken. He hopes and dreams that he will have a second chance to travel the woods again, but this time he will take his time to travel during his next journey. The traveler dreams that time doesn’t go by quick as he says “I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence” describing that time is making this impossible for him to travel both paths as there might not be another opportunity. Our dreams and hopes can shatter to pieces if we don’t make the proper decisions in life. Not doing the things we would have love to do in the past, like accomplishing something in life, will bring regret in the future and always second guessing yourself if you should or not do it.

Not making up your mind can be very stressful in reality as it takes up time, brings excuses, and delays to your dreams and hopes. Every action a person takes might have or not consequences in life. As in the poem the traveler might have regretted taken the path that was suppose shorter to him and not taken the path he would have like to travel making him might regret the choice he made during that time he was traveling in the woods. Time has a big part in our lives as it goes by quick and the choices we makemight have a positive or negative outcome in our lives and to enjoy every aspect of it or soon as we go old might regret it.

18) Textual Analysis Essay – First Draft

IMG_4595IMG_4596IMG_4597Jonathan Valencia

March 15, 2016

ENG 1121 – D465

1st Draft

 

The Road Not Taken

     “Never give up on a dream just because of the time it will take to accomplish it. The time will pass anyway,” Earl Nightingale said. Robert Frost poem The Road Not taken can be viewed in many different ways. Frost a renowned poet from the 80s and 90s poems are in my opinion about there will be another chance to go back on the decisions taken action by the character or who ever is involve in the poem. The poem The Road Not taken describes a journey of a traveler and the decisions he ends up making. When reading the poem it shows the reader the second guessing traveler if he made the proper choice upon traveling in the woods. Not making up your mind can be very stressful in reality as it takes up time, brings excuses, and delays to your dreams and hopes.

Many us wish we can stop time but in reality have to accept the fact no matter what they do it keeps going on. A major point that can be discuss about the poem The Road Not Taken is time as the traveler in the woods doesn’t know which of the two paths he should take at the end he chose a path that was much “shorter”. He said “Yet knowing how ways leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back” him thinking there would be another time in which he will be able to take the other path. But, in reality there wont be another time, as he might not come back to the woods. The traveler takes his time evaluating the roads that will lead him to his destination and describes each of them having their own characteristics and personalities.

Another point that can be made the poem that Frost wrote is that the traveler is that he his making excuses in which he couldn’t take the other path. Other excuses would be how he says that he is one person who can only travel one road at a time and says “ And sorry I could not travel both”. Traveler first excuses would be that one path is “shorter” than the other as he says “ Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim,” even tough it might be shorter as the traveler describes the path he chosen to take both will lead to his destination and doesn’t take up or waste his time and wants to reach his destination pick as possible.

Excuses are used to cover up the truth in which people are hiding everyday. In the poem The Road Not Taken by Frost you can see as the traveler makes excuses in his journey in the woods. Another noticeable excuse is how the traveler mentions that there will be another time in which he will take the other path some other day. It can be shown that time might have to deal with the decisions the actions the character takes as it might have quickly decided on the path he will take. The traveler says, “I kept the first for another day!” that another day wont be happening as he states “doubted if I should ever come back.” Knowing that there will be another time he decides not taking he road in which he would have preferred. As the traveler already made the decision he said that he road he was going to take and said, “Because it was grassy and wanted wear” another excuses for not taking the road he would have wanted to travel.

Every dreams and hopes are big and want to achieve them but some fail on the way their. The traveler in The Road Not Taken wish, dream, or hope for that there will another time in which he could take the path in which he would have wanted to travel. He dreams that he could go back and travel the path or hopes there will be another time in which he can travel the path he would of love to taken. He hopes and dreams that there will be a second chance in which he will have to travel to the woods again but this time to take up all the time he wants to travel during his next journey. He dreams that time doesn’t go by quick as he says “ I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence” describing that time is making this impossible for his to travel both paths as there might not be another opportunity. He also says another day or time he would go back and travel the path he should have travel back them, as he knows time goes by quickly and there might not be a next time or another opportunity and as a result of this might bring regrets in life.

Not making up your mind can be very stressful in reality as it takes up time, brings excuses, and delays to your dreams and hopes. Every action a person takes might have or not consequences in life. As in the poem the traveler might have regretted taken the path that was suppose shorter to him and not taken the path he would have like to travel making him might regret the choice he made during that time he was traveling in the woods. Time has a big part in our lives as it goes by quick and the choices we make might have a positive or negative outcome in our lives and to enjoy every aspect of it or soon as we go old might regret it.

17) Textual Analysis Essay – Paragraph #1

Jonathan Valencia

March 20,2106

ENG 1121-D465

Textual Analysis Essay – Paragraph #1

 

The Road Not Taken

     “Never give up on a dream just because of the time it will take to accomplish it. The time will pass anyway,” Earl Nightingale said. Many us wish we can stop time but in reality have to accept the fact no matter what they do it keeps going on. As we grow old we have to accept that time is limited and the choices we make in life will have an impact on us in the future. Even though time is limited and there’s nothing to do prevent it doesn’t give us a reason to excuse is for the things we love doing in life. Everyone dreams and hopes to have a better future or life but have a difficult path to achieve it as we constantly make excuses that there is not enough time. Robert Frost poem The Road Not Taken can be similar in our type of situations as to achieve something we always dreamed off. Not making up your mind can be very stressful in reality as it takes up time, brings up excuses, and delays to your dreams and hopes

 

16) Textual Analysis Essay – Outline

Jonathan Valencia

March 13, 2016

ENG 1121- D465

Assignment: Outline for textual analysis essay

 

Opener – “Never give up on a dream just because of the time it will take to accomplish it. The time will pass anyway” – Earl Nightingale

Thesis – Not making up your mind up your mind can be very stressful as it take up time, excuses, and ruin your dreams and hopes.

Subtopic Paragraph 1 – Time

  • How is time running out for the traveler/ speaker of the poem
  • Can make up his mind on with road or path to take.
  • Wondering if there will be another time

Subtopic Paragraph 2 – Excuses

  • Giving excuses on how the road the chose to travel was shorter
  • Traveler or speaker saying there will be another time he will take the road he didn’t choose.
  • Knows that there will be no next time so he is just saying it.

Subtopic Paragraph 3- Dreams and Hopes

  • Speaker/ Traveler wants to travel the path he choose not to travel once he has time
  • Hoping for another chance he wont ever get again

Conclusion- Restate thesis brief summary of poem The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost

15)Textual Analysis Essay – poem summary

Jonathan Valencia

ENG 1121 – D465

03/09/2016

Assignment: Summary of poem you chose

 

In the poem is taking place in the middle of the woods or forest where the author or speaker is in-between two road that’s are divided. He already chose the road in which he is going to travel and in his thought he would like to take the other side when he gets the chance. You can tell by reading the poem that the speaker is uncertain which road to take as he one he chose thinks its much shorter. Another way you can look at it is that there wont be another opportunity due to the fact that the speaker is trying to say that he will return and take the other road next time but is seem there wont be a next time. There are many ways you can look or describe this poem has it has plot twist.

14) Rhetorial Situation for Textual Analysis Essay (poem)

Jonathan Valencia

ENG 1121- D465

Assignment: Rhetorical Situation for your poem

 

 

  1. Audience – Whoever is reading the poem or poems written by Jack Frost
  2. Genre – Poetry
  3. Purpose – To inform the person reading that like is to short and live without any regrets
  4. Media/Design – Way of communicating is through her words and the Internet.
  5. Stance – In my opinion the poem that I read by Jack Frost didn’t teach me but gave me knowledge about how most people are really living life with regrets and not enjoying it to the fullest due to the fact thinking about if they do something they want to it might be bad and making there dreams and hopes disappear.

13) Seven Point of Peer Review for Personal Narrative Essay

Jonathan Valencia

February 28, 2016

ENG 1121- D465

Assignment: 7 points of peer review

 

Partner: Farjana Shati

 

  1. Opener – “Failure is the pillar of success” my physics teacher Mr. Dabashish told to me during my freshman year in high school.
  2. Thesis w/3 subtopic – Stepping out of my confront zone was challenging and a constant struggle, especially as an introvert with lack of experience in group work or presentation in my life entire life last spring that was a frightening and heartbreaking experience however time and motivation has helped me to overcome my fear of standing in the spot light.
  3. 3-subtopic paragraph –¶1 group work, ¶2 frightening and heartbreaking experience, and ¶3 motivation.
  4. Topic sentences –¶ 1 – Certainly, I am an introvert and on top of it have lack of experience in group work and presentations. , ¶ 2 – Sadly, my presentation in geometry class last spring was terrifying and nerve – racking. , ¶ 3 – In spite of going through such a heart breaking experience I was able to over come my fear through constant motivation.
  5. Transitions – Transitions are use in the first sentences of each body paragraph of each subtopic.
  6. Grammar Conventions – Missing word between sentence for example first sentence of subtopic paragraph 1 between it and have missing I in-between. Or using word that doesn’t belong in the sentence like using have instead of had.
  7. Conclusion w/ thesis restated and lead-out – Restates thesis sentence and last sentence about her ideal world.