9) 2 Positives and 2 Negatives for peer critique of Personal Narrative Essay

Jonathan Valencia

ENG1121-D465

03/07/2016

Assignment: Two positive and negatives

Partner: Farjana

Positive

Nicely done transitions in every subtopic paragraph
Good introduction and quote

Negative

Common errors and spelling mistakes
Essay was a little to long

The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

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The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.