Jonathan Valencia

February 16, 2016

ENG 1121- D465

Assignment: Outline of Personal Narrative Essay

 

Outline

1. Intro

Opener – “Haters don’t really hate you. In fact. They hate themselves because you’re a reflection of what they wish to be.” – anonymous

 

Thesis – Through out my life I was given good and bad names but the one that stands above the rest was the Golden Boy this name would involve my older brother, money and the hate I would receive from family members, the neighborhood, and students from high school.

 

1. Body

 

1. Older brother Diachi

–     How the name golden boy relates to us.

• What he taught me at a young age.
• Why the people never showed respect.

 

1. Money

• How I achieve my money
• Resell
• Profits over school
• How my brother taught me how to make money

 

1. Hated and Disrespected

• Treated differently
• Insults and look downed upon
• Rumors
• Not invited to family parties or included in school activities

 

 

• Conclusion

Summary of essay if I have over come these problems or how I dealt with them