After rereading the D.O.I I actually learned a few new things like who where the people who created and signed the deceleration of independence and also learning about the five persons committee and who were those people . Also finding out of why some states of were holding back when it comes to agreeing and finalizing the Declaration of Independence knowing the consequences of losing the revolutionary war . But they decided to push onwards knowing they need to fight and take the risks in order to actually gain their independence from Great Britain and king George . Even the founding fathers where especially Putting there lives on the line when they signed the D.O.I if the colonist lose the war they would’ve been held responsible for committing treason against Great Britain . But they knew that they wanted to push onwards with the D.O.I .  Also when reading I learned about a few new definitions and meanings . Like the abuse of power . Referring to how King George was abusing his power against the Colonist . Like forcing the Colonist to pay more taxes on certain goods like stamps , tea , sugar etc, . Also the colonist had no representation at all . Basically saying there’s is no taxation without representation . They had completely had no say what so ever regarding to Great Britain’s policies . This really motivated the Colonist to push for succession from England , but they were many risks they had to take but the outcome were they gained total independence from England.
Author: Michael
Difficulty Paper First draft of D.O.I
The birth of the United States Of America was based off the sole document that laid the foundation for the birth of the United States. The Declaration of independence described as big step forward for the original 13 colonies to push forward for in the fight for recognition from Great Britain and also from King George . As this whole cause for the push for independence was of King George’s conflicting policies which was the spark for the push towards independence . Also the fact of how much the founding fathers had to go through when it comes to facing and fighting a war against the most powerful country especially when facing the British Army. Some of these causes was due to totally not having any representation at all and also of the high taxes that was placed on many goods in the colonies which anger the colonist which would lead to revolt and succession from Great Britain. They calimed that King George was raging a ”cruel war against human nature itself violating its most sacred rights of life , liberty in the persons of a distant people who never offended him”.  Basically saying that King George was offering the colonist as scapegoats as an excuse for waging a cruel war. As this angered the colonists as this also motivated them to start considering writing the declaration of independence. Knowing the challenges that they will have to overcome in order to successfully defend their rights and there freedom .
Essay Revision Plan
I try to come up with ways to improve my essay and also trying to come with strategies that can also help me improve the structure of my essay.I know that I probably lacked behind on knowing and planning but I really want to go more in depth and give more important facts and opinions or maybe asking other students questions that relate to the education system asking for their opinions of what they think and putting it on my essay.  When I meant about more facts and more in-depth information I should also look up of what the education system has gone through ever since it was established and what does it take to fix any mishaps or problems this is the facts that I wanted to address. But I wanted to ensure that the revisions was up to date and that I wanted to ask questions and next time take people’s opinions into account as a way to revise my essay . Plus I know that there are gaps that I would need to fill in because there can some disconnection of the statement which I’m trying to prove . I really hope that I can improve my work and improve my writing skills that will make my easy more sufficient
250 Word Blog Post
The education system has been around for a very long time. The main objective for this system is to give students good quality education . In order for the students to earn that education they would have to go through various amount of courses and take a variety of exams that would test their learning capabilities. But what we are always wondering is that are we still getting good quality education we deserve? But I think the system needs to have an upgrade. As the system is very old and it needs to be either changed or needs to be updated. As when I read others work we can all relate to each other that the system needs to be changed. Im not saying the system is bad or terrible or anything like that my point is that there should be some other form of criteria that should be added to system that way the system is updated regularly. I know many people especially in NYC can agree the same thing too . You will every time hear something on the news commenting on the education system is out of date that there should be new topics or new criteria that should be added . Or possibly trying to update in a way to make the system more fair and that there should be more equal opportunities for kids . But overall we can all agree that the education system needs to change  or things needs to be added. As the system needs to be improved
Education Revision
There are many events that everyone had experienced before when it comes to education. I consider education as a gift because it really changed the point of view of students of how we view education and how it gave us many opportunities to look forward to in the near future. Opportunities such as taking a wide variety of courses , joining amazing and fun clubs , etc. My my years in school really thought me a lot of things that helpful and useful in life. Ever since I started school I wanted a nice education experience .
When I was started High School I knew that there was gonna be more opportunities for me take. High School is where education impacted me the most . I was able to make lots of friends that would help me along the way . But when I first entered I kept hearing lot about this test called the SAT at first I didn’t really know much about it as it was the beginning of my freshman year. Two years went by and I was in my junior year. I knew it was gonna get a little more challenging since the SAT was coming up and that was on everyones minds . But I soon as I realized next year was gonna be last year and looking back the education that i received was great overall I could explain it in many other ways. It was also good to be involved and do community service . All of my friends who studied with me could also agree . The countless hours of studying and preparing for those tests .Then came Graduation it made me look back from the beginning of my freshman year till now. It really made me realize that the things I learned will always be with me no matter what. Graduating from High School was a really a event that really impacted my education Knowing that I worked hard for 12 years even since first all the way up to now. Also knowing that college was just two months away. I was really happy with my high school experience and being able to earn my diploma for all of my hard work.
So the beginning of my freshman I didn’t really know what to expect honestly after making a lot of friends in middle school who which I still hang out with to this day . I had to start all over again but the only difference is meeting new people who are gonna be my classmates for the next four years. I mean I have to make new friends which of course every freshman wants to . So first day we were getting our new metro cards schedules and all other important paper work . So the first day had passed I did talk to some people, but I didn’t really consider them as new friends since its just the first day and that were getting used to being in a new school. But throughout out freshman year I did made lots of new friends which which they are all friendly of course. Now to my sophomore year Im still keeping in touch with the new friends that I made as we promised that we will help each other out .
But sophomore year was the year that I really opened up more to lots of people. All thanks to a club that I joined but it wasn’t just a club it was a team which I called them my second family as we treated each other like if we were brothers and sisters as everyday after our team meetings we would hang out or fooling around knowing that we were making memories . So then came junior year and oh man so many things that me and my fellow juniors had to deal with. Focusing more on our classes , studying for the SAT , preparing to qualify to become the next team officers for our senior year . So how did I studied for the SAT by attending Saturday SAT classes which I did find it pretty useful as they had teachers from other schools that would help us prepare. We even had to go through many SAT mock test which everyone did find it annoying well because it was mainly on Fridays but I guess it was kinda helpful. So the day of the SAT finally arrived and I gotta say and my fellow juniors could agree too we were really nervous like we were really sweating . But me I did kept my cool and stayed calm . But even though we practiced a variety of topics we just didn’t know what was actually gonna be on the actually test . So four hours has past and testing was over and we got scores and I guess I did okay but Glad we made it through . Now our officer training to become next years Team officers was almost done including the school year.
So after our end of the year celebration we just relaxed for a bit while preparing for regents . The regents were a breeze and then the end of our junior year knowing that Im about to enter my senior Year. So senior year was an amazing year I really had lots of fun and I really enjoyed it but even though it your last year you still had to focus on your classes . But without a doubt many memories were definitely made especially at prom and graduation the most it really made me look back my high school experience was an amazing one that I will never forget. So what Im trying to the new incoming freshman who are about to endure high school just know that there may be challenges ahead but know that your going have a fun experience and enjoy every moment and always take advantage of the education opportunities that they will offer you .
