For Tuesday (and schedule until Unit Two is due!)

Hi everyone! A couple of things: if you are wondering what your midterm grade is, you can click “check my grade” at the bottom right of this page. There you will see the grade book, and you will see your midterm grade!

For Tuesday, Nov 5, you need to bring in first drafts of your reviews of your first two sources (300 words each.) Remember that you are writing a report to an imaginary committee. Your review of each source should tell your imaginary committee members: 1. what the source has to contribute to the question you are researching and 2. Whether it is a useful source (why or why not? Analyze the source for us) Look at the rhetorical analysis worksheets for help with this section if you get lost–there’s a copy of it below. BRING IN A PAPER COPY OF YOUR REVIEWS AND ALSO POST TO OPEN LAB BEFORE PROF. C’S CLASS ON TUESDAY. 

Please remember: keep your opinions to opinions about the source in question.

UPCOMING DEADLINES:

  • Thursday Nov 7: first drafts of reviews of your second two sources
  • Tuesday Nov 12: Rough draft of entire Curiosity Report (including intro, conclusion and bibliography
  • Thursday Nov 14: Final draft of Curiosity Report Due!!!!!

For Thursday

Hey everyone! Fun times at the library, right?

So, for Thursday, please find at least 4 new sources for your Curiosity Reports (this means you’ll have 6 sources total by this point) — PRINT THEM OUT and bring them to class on Thursday. Remember that you’re looking for sources that help you answer your question–so you want a wide array of voices. Also remember you’ll need 4 different genres for your curiosity report!

Again, you’ll need them PRINTED OUT— not on your phone. Also remember that homework is half your grade in this class– if you’re not doing your homework, you’re (in the words of Beyonce) playing yourself.

Tomorrow morning (Weds) I’m meeting with Elayne at 11:15 and Amaya at 11:30 in my office– Namm 511. I will also meet with Denisse at 2:00. See you guys then!

 

For Thursday

Hey everyone! Here’s your homework.

  1. BEFORE Thursday’s class, I would like you to post the question you want to investigate for UNIT TWO (The Curiosity Report) on the OpenLab. This should not be a yes or no question, but something you can spend a few weeks really investigating. It must be a question– not just a topic. So, if you’re interested in the issue of domestic violence, you might want to know:  why do victims stay in abusive relationships? or:  how does someone become an abuser? or: what resources are available for people who try to leave?  You will also need a copy of this question in class. It can be written by hand or printed out. 

If you’re stuck, take a look at the unit (UNITS tab, at the top of this webpage,) or do ten more minutes of internet research to see what you find!

2. Find at least one source (article, video, blog, Wikipedia post, standup routine, Ted Talk– the possibilities are endless!) on your topic. Try to find something useful to answering your question. Again, if you’re investigating why victims stay in abusive relationships, you might look for a statistical study or you might look for a blog by a person who was in an abusive relationship.  I don’t know how to tell you word length here because we’re looking at so many genres, but don’t be skimpy. No 50 word articles or 30 second videos (unless it’s a SUPER powerful 30 seconds.)

For Tuesday

 

 

Image of Frederick Douglass

Hey everyone! Your homework for the weekend is to read and annotate these excerpts from “What to the Slave is the Fourth of July” HERE. I will collect the annotations. This is short, but it’s not easy to read, so leave yourself a little time. 

Please also fill out the SOAPSTONE worksheet I handed out in class (the one with the monsters. If you lost it, HERE is an extra copy. I’m gonna collect this too!

In case you are interested, here is some background on the speech from TIME magazine.

I have posted the upcoming essay assignment under UNITS (UNIT TWO.) There’s no assignment yet, but start thinking about what topics or questions you’d like to investigate. So far, some of the things we’ve discussed in class are: Police violence (educating cops/ educating citizens/ screening), climate change, domestic violence, immigration, equal pay for genders and races, Empowerment of women, Gandhi—history of nonviolent resistance, history of DR, history of Haitian revolutions, lasting effects of American Revolution (both nationally and internationally), student justice, education, funding for arts education, Family/ Heritage, Albanian tradition, free speech in 2019, The two-party political system, the mental health system, gun violence/ gun control and prison reform. 

Keep in mind, if you start with a topic (like domestic violence, let’s say), you’ll need to narrow it down to a question to investigate. For example: Why do women stay in situations in which they’re being abused, or: what are the laws in place regarding domestic abuse, or: what is the correlation between mass shooting and domestic abuse (that is, since domestic abusers are much more likely to commit mass killings, are there any laws in place to restrict their access to firearms? Why or why not?) We will work together in class to come up with a good question for investigation.

For Thursday

Hey everyone! For Thursday’s class, please:

  1. Post your plan for rereading the Declaration on Open Lab
  2. Reread the Declaration (using your plan!) Remember, you can focus on one particular section, or reread with one guiding question in mind (“What do they mean by ‘justice?'” “What do they mean by ‘Independence?'” “How far are they willing to go for freedom?” “Why might some states have been reluctant to sign?”)
  3. On Open Lab write a response of at least 250 words in which you explain what you learned from rereading. If you like, you can also write what you’re still confused about. You may combine your plan for rereading in the same post (the plan for rereading doesn’t count toward the word count, but it doesn’t need to be a separate post.)

For Tuesday!

Hey everyone– hope you had a good 3-day weekend– our last weird weekend for a while. We DO meet this Tuesday!  And the homework for class is to read, annotate and write a difficulty paper (at least 250 words) on the First Draft of the Declaration of Independence HERE . Remember to read the crossed out parts, which are the parts that got deleted in the final draft. The final draft of the Declaration is HERE for your reference. I did hand these out in class, as you’ll recall. POST YOUR DIFFICULTY PAPER ON THE OPEN LAB BEFORE CLASS.

This is an important assignment– you’re not going to have to write a big long paper on the Declaration for Unit 2  (unless you want to) but you won’t be able to do your next paper if you start getting behind now! This is a very important step in Unit 2.

Also, remember what we read  about difficulty: “When we ask you to identify your reading difficulties, we are actually asking you to take notice of what you believe is hard to understand in a text.It might be hard to understand for different reasons– because it is perplexing, obscure, mysterious, remote, strange, unfamiliar, uncomfortable, disconnected, meaningless, confusing, ridiculous, contradictory, hypocritical, inconsistent. In other words, we urge you to take notice of whatever slows down or brings to a halt the physical activity of reading, leaving you mystified, wondering why, what how” (Salvatori and Donahue 2). I will also add, the difficulty paper should be much more YOUR words than those of the Founding Fathers!! 

 

(Below are some alternate cover possibilities to our revised book. We’ll talk about these in class)



Revision Due, Thursday Oct 10– Post online and bring paper copy to class!

Hey everyone! Just a reminder that your revisions of your education essays are due on Thursday on the Open Lab BEFORE Prof. Coughlin’s class on Thursday. Please also bring a paper copy to class. For guidelines look under “Units” (listed under re-vision.) It needs to be SUBSTANTIALLY changed, remember! And make sure you look at my comments on your previous draft (I posted them as a comment on your paper here on Open Lab!)

 

 

For Thursday, Oct 3– No class on Tues!

Who Cares Tv Show GIF by RuPaul's Drag Race S5 - Find & Share on GIPHY

  1. Print out, Read and annotate “So What? Who Cares?” HERE . Also, look at question #2 at the end of the reading. I’m not asking you to start revising quite yet, but start finishing the sentences they are asking you to finish (AFTER YOU READ THIS HANDOUT!)

That is, the authors ask you to “look over something you’ve written yourself” (in this case, I’d like you to look over your education narrative) and fill out the following sentences: “My point here, (that __________) should interest those who _________________. Beyond this limited audience, however, my point should speak to anyone who cares about the larger issue of ________________.”

Be thoughtful here. “Education matters” or “hard work pays off” are  kind of a broad and cliche points. Can you say something a little more specific to your piece, and to the experiences you personally have had in life?

POST THIS ON OPEN LAB BEFORE CLASS.

2. Also on open lab, please post your plan for revising your essay. This should be at least 250 words, so “I’m going to fix my mistakes” isn’t going to do it (and what are “mistakes” anyway?) If you plan to work on organization, what is your PLAN for organization (like what do you think your new structure will be? Where do you think you will begin the new draft? How will you take my comments into account? Who will be your new audience? What aspects of your character are you going to express as a writer? What is the occasion (or exigency?) You obviously cannot answer ALL of these questions. I’m not crazy. But these are some of the things you might think about.

Another thing you might want to put into your plan is your plan for your process. If you struggled with procrastination last time, what are you planning to do to combat that?

 

For Thursday

Hey everyone– great work on your presentations! These things are due for Thursday:

  1. First of all, fill out “collaborative evaluation form” for your groups
  2.  Read and annotate “A Talk to Teachers” by James Baldwin HERE and then write a “difficulty paper” of about 300 words. In a difficulty paper, you focus in one one or two passages that you find difficult or confusing (quote them!) and EXPLAIN in detail why you found them difficult or confusing (or upsetting or boring.) Try to get to the heart of where you found it difficult. Dig deeply! Be as specific as you can about what your mind was doing as you read those sections.

This is a low-stakes assignment, meaning I’m not grading you on your grammar, just on you getting it done and you putting thought into it!