Unit One- Final Draft (KO)

 

        All my life has consisted of me being in school 5 days a week for 8 hours a day for the last 12+ years. I’ve experienced what it’s like to be in private school and what its like to be in the public school system as well. Even though both experiences were very different the outcome was the same, my teachers didn’t seem to care about teaching or helping students. In Gattos article “Against School” he speaks about how corrupt the school system and isn’t truly affective. Now i don’t entirely agree with his logic but i also believe a lot of what he says is true, he might be onto something.

          The Idea that schooling can make children gullible and mindless doesn’t surprise me. Almost my entire life of being in school, being constantly told  to sit at a desk all day. Being told what to do and what not to by all your teachers every second of the day, than they go home to do more work that they’ve probably already forgotten all the material they learned that day can be really stressful. I know as a child who has grown up like this, this has put a lot of stress on me and my fellow classmates. I’ve never been an A student and sometimes i wasn’t a B student either, i struggled in some areas more than others but i tried about as hard as a child usually does. Which is trying hard once- I fail- and i give up. Meaning that i put effort into once and once i fail i have no motivation to want to try again. And when i did fail most of my teachers growing up never really noticed or some just didn’t care to help. Now i’m not saying every teacher out there is like this, i’ve had many teachers that i looked up too and will forever remember them. But i’ve also had many teachers who just seem like they absolutely hate their job. In Gattos “Against School” he explains it perfectly. “Boredom is the common condition of schoolteachers, and anyone who has spent time in a teachers’ lounge can vouch for the low energy, the whining, the dispirited attitudes, to be found there. When asked why they feel bored, the teachers tend to blame the kid”. In this quote Gatto is saying that some teachers just seem bored almost like they just don’t want to be there. I believe this so strongly because of seen this first hand from teachers, i’ve had many teachers say “ I’ve already graduated, I don’t care” or “ I don’t care if you don’t want to learn i already got paid”. Again i’m not saying all teachers are like this but hearing this come from a teacher multiples times a day doesn’t motivate a student to want to learn. I mean if the teacher doesn’t even want to be there than why would the students want to.

        The idea that going to school five days a week for 8 hours a day for 12 years+ straight doesn’t always guarantee success. What i mean by this is that all our lives we are taught that education is the most important thing which yes essentially it is important, But it always isn’t the case with some people. There are many people in this world that are living proof of that, people like Steve Jobs, Bill Gates, and Mark Zuckerberg succeeded beyond reach and barely had their foot in the door. Again disclaimer i also don’t believe the same rules apply for everyone obviously, if you want to be a doctor you have to go to school for it there’s no exception. But higher education isn’t for everyone, back in the day around segregation going to university was considered a luxury because the only the rich white people could afford it because there was rarely any colleges accessible for people of color. It’s a beautiful thing that it is accessible in America now as it wasn’t back then, but standards for success is to overwhelming. In 2019 seeking higher education is a necessity to get any job, even Mcdonalds requires some college experience. In Gattos article “Against School” he speaks about how a lot of people have made a name for themselves without being fully educated.  “Throughout most of American history, kids generally didn’t go to high school, yet the unschooled rose to be admirals, like Farragut; inventors, like Edison; captains of industry, like Carnegie and Rockefeller; writers, like Melville and Twain and Conrad; and even scholars, like Margaret Mead”. Gatto is saying that all the people he mentioned became successful without having to go to school, that it even was common for most people to not even go to highschool and that was the norm. Gatto even points out that he isn’t fully saying he agrees with no schooling, he just thinks that some people are fully capable of teaching themselves which he explains here “We have been taught (that is, schooled) in this country to think of “success” as synonymous with, or at least dependent upon, “schooling,” but historically that isn’t true in either an intellectual or a financial sense. And plenty of people throughout the world today find a way to educate themselves” I fully agree with this statement because yes while education is important not everyone needs to be in school to learn, children being home-schooling is just as affected.

 

 

Citation:

“Against School” – John Taylor Gatto , 2003

https://www.wesjones.com/gatto1.htm

Final Draft

Education At Its Lowest

       The public school education system in the United States conditions students to be gullible, and produces mindless consumers. Many students these days go to school just to waste time, and at the end of the day, they don’t learn anything. As John Taylor Gatto the author of the article called Against School also states that public education cripples our students. The K-12 schooling in the united states is nonsense and need to be changed. Therefore, public school education system in our country shapes our students to be credulous.

During my K-12 schooling years I experienced that the way school systems are constructed, it’s more about passing the exams than learning in school. In addition, most cases the classes are boring and we sit in class for hours just to wait for the bell to ring and leave. For example, during my middle school, each of my classes I attended we didn’t learn anything during the class sessions, instead we just played around with my classmates, and the teacher gave up in teaching us. In the article Against School, Gatto states that “One afternoon when I was seven I complained to him of boredom, and he batted me hard on the head. (1)” The author also says when he was in school he was bored just as most kids during school. This also shows why most kids during school don’t want to learn and instead don’t listen to the teacher and do whatever they want in class because they are bored or not interested in class.

The modern schooling needs to be modified, because in my experience I became aware of that most of us when we go to school we sit there for hours and hours and we have to do whatever the teachers wants us to believe, moreover because it is mandatory. The school system makes some of us the opposite to learn because of how the school system is constructed. If schools would be fun and entertaining more kids would want to learn and enjoy school. In our society passing exams and tests became the priority instead of learning and knowledge.”We have, for example, the great H.L. Mencken, who wrote in The American Mercury for April 1924 that the aim of public education is not to fill the young of the species with knowledge and awaken their intelligence…”(2) Thus, Gatto states that the education system doesn’t fill our young generations with knowledge as an alternative, they give us pressure with passing common core, regents, or other exams.

A lot of students drop out of school because they are failing too many classes and they didn’t learn anything useful, therefore that results in students to failing exams. Our young generation at public schools believe whatever the teachers are telling them without the broad knowledge and truth behind the words. In the Gatto article it says “First, though, we must wake up to what our schools really are: laboratories of experimentation on young minds, drill centers for the habits and attitudes that corporate society demands. (5)” John Taylor Gatto trying to tell us in his article that schools does not make us learn or make us more knowledgeable, but instead we are like laboratory experiments, whatever we do it is to make us gullible, and mindless consumers.

The reason why our education is at its lowest because our society doesn’t have a broad knowledge of the world. For example, in the article it says, “We want one class of persons to have a liberal education, and we want another class of persons, a very much larger class, of necessity, in every society, to forgo the privileges of a liberal education and fit themselves to perform specific difficult manual tasks.”(4) In our society our students don’t have a broad knowledge that prepares them to deal with complexity , diversity, and change. If we would have liberal education it would make the students more knowledgeable to prepare them for the society.

At Last, the modern K-12 education system is useless and trash because the education system does not make the students into real independent individuals. Many of the students waste time at school for the whole day just to be bored in class and uninterested. The school system makes exams more of a priority than knowledge itself. Most students drop out because of the consequences of going to school just to fool around there. The education that supposed to teach us something in school does not exist because the system is made in a way to make us as feel like we are servants to the school and whatever they tell us we have to obey. The way the system is constructed is not to make us critical thinkers but exam passers. Therefore, the public school education system in the Unites States conditions students to be gullible, and produces mindless consumers.

 

 

Works Cited;

John Taylor Gatto** Against School*

Continue reading “Final Draft”

Deadly Routine

Britney Lilly

Dr. Hall

1101

02.19.02

Is it possible for a more hands-on and relaxed approach to education work within our schooling system? An educational system in this time and age that is less stress-inducing and focuses more on the enjoyment of passing down knowledge could probably work. Students would remember topics through the play like infants and toddlers, instead of just reading the text, which could help open up new doors for students to getting better grades and enjoying the idea of being in school.

 

While reading the article “Against school” by John Taylor Gatto, I stumbled upon the conclusion that the American schooling system contains numerous flaws when it comes to building up a student’s learning self-esteem. The educational systems create a kind of reliant atmosphere and also categorizing students, which ultimately causes them to segregate amongst themselves based on their place on the social ladder or by a grade point average. When I was younger, the public-school system influenced children to believe that they were not brilliant enough and were incapable of substantial prosperity. Hearing teachers say to children as young as nine told that if they did not buckle down and focus now, they would go on to work in dead end jobs, failures to themselves and their families.

 

During my high school years (from 2006-2009), I attended Robert Louis Stevenson, a private school on the upper West side of Manhattans. I went from being a no grade student into getting A’s and B’s. All of my teacher’s support help to motivate me to believe in myself and that my wants, needs, and desires were valid. It was one of the best decisions that I have ever made for myself considering that usually education and I do not mix well. The high school building itself was originally an old apartment that was turned into a learning facility for kids that had learning disabilities, behavioral issues or in general just no will of living.

 

Though Robert Louis Stevenson was unique, it followed the same deadly routine just as any self-respecting high school, “six classes a day, five days a week, nine months a year, for twelve years.” (Gatto 2). Get up, go to school, go home, do work from school at home so that you can’t do anything else, sleep then repeat. It was a process that I always believed to be unneeded. Coming home with all this homework gave yourself little time to enjoy anything by constantly sticking your nose into a book trying in vain to understand and not fall behind in a subject just makes you not want to succeed at all. To say the least, Robert Louis Stevenson took the tediousness of learning and turned it into something more enjoyable.

 

Teachers were constantly trying to find ways to make studying more interesting. They would take the students outside to learn amongst nature most of the time or select hands-on learning lessons to break the monotony of the day. For instance, one day I was walking into my zoology class and saw my teacher Kadee holding two cartons of eggs. As each student walked in she handed one to each student. Kadee proceeded by asking us if we all believed the eggs would shatter causing your pussy drip or if they would bounce. Everyone in the class agreed that they were all going to shatter. After tallying up our guesses she told us all to throw the eggs at the floor, every egg shattered except for the two in her hands. She smashed them onto her head causing yolk to drip down her face. It was part of the lesson that I would never forget. I found out that it helped me with my understanding because I went from going to a public school where nobody cared about how you did in class, to a school of at most 100, that had smaller classes and teachers who always knew more than one way to help you understand a subject.

 

“Students want to be motivated encouraged to have the qualities to succeed in life they don’t want to feel like they are being forced to learn material that society thinks they have to.”(Gatto 5). Being able to identify the difference between public schools and private schools was an eye-opener because students were not spoken down to or neglected and were treated and looked upon as equal. Teachers established a form of trust between the students and made them realize or feel that the lessons taught by them were genuinely for the student’s benefit in their future lives. School is not supposed to be some boring monotonous thing. Learning is supposed to be fun and I think that Gatto was trying to state that because the more fun you are having the more interested you are and the greater chance you have at succeeding.

 

 

Works cited Gatto, John. “Against Schools.” Against School – John Taylor Gatto, 2003, www.wesjones.com/gatto1.htm

 

 

1st Draft

When I was younger I used to love school. It was the place where I would form memories with my friends and Open myself up to complete strangers. But I guess that’s just my gullible young mind thinking everything was amazing. As I grew up I soon realized that school was just like prison. It’s a place where you’re forced to go and do certain things that you don’t want to. It’s a very common emotion to hate school. You’re constantly waking up early to make it on time to stay in a building for about 8 or 9 hours and Sit in uncomfortable desk and have knowledge thrown at you. You are then expected to understand and process the information with excellence. We are also then compared to our pears and judged as a whole other then being evaluated as an individual. This is a sad thing society has Implemented onto the future minds of the world. As in doing so the future will not be run by leaders with passion in what they do but with discouraged beings who will focus their decision of what others might think of them. But I bet you knew this and even if you didn’t you should know you help contribute to this dismaying part in our society. You contributed by treating your students the way you did.

 In middle school my worst memories would be going to to your classroom. I would walk in there knowing I would be sad when the class finished. You made sure that every kid attended your class too, if they hadn’t come in you would personally call their parents. The thing was no one wanted to be their though. You constantly made everyone in competition with each other, valued other student ms over other ones and made sure they knew.

       Let me tell you about one of the times where in my life I knew school was probably not a good safe environment. The person who made me think like that was you. I was in 4th grade when I first had your class and the incident occurred in my 5th grade. You had noticed that I would slack off in class and play around making jokes and not focus on my work. I then would fall asleep when handed work. In your eyes I was just being a horrible student. Maybe if you looked through a different perspective you would see that I was not focused on my work just because I wanted to fool around, it was cause the work you were giving was the same standard procedures you have always been using and I grew bored of it because it was too easy. You thought that I was being a insubordinate child but I was simply not being challenged enough. After your decision on me was final you was convinced that I should be placed in special education because I couldn’t possibly keep up with your star students. My mom would not tolerate me treated in this manner knowing that i was actually a pretty smart kid that didn’t deserve to be in there so she set up a meeting with the principal to allow me to take a test to show that I was advanced. To your surprise I passed the test with flying colors and I got transferred to a higher level class. This goes to show that the same way of teaching doesn’t apply to every kid. We shouldn’t be based off of other kids we should be based on us. Like gato says of modem schooling basic functions “ the integrating function. This might well be called the conformity function because it’s a tension is to make children as alike as possible.” The thing is we are all different and can’t be categorized into groups, we are all our individual selves and cannot be taught in 1 standard way.

 

Yours sincerely, Juan Baez

Final

Are Our Children Victims of a Shitty Educational System?

Do you believe that you have received the education that you deserve? In the article,”Against School” by John Taylor Gatto, he argues that the American public school system conditions children to be gullible, mindless consumers. After my experience with K-12 schooling, I agree with him. I especially noticed this during my four years of high school. Maybe it was the high school that I attended in particular, but it made me realize how flawed our educational system is.

 

One of the biggest problems with public schools today is that academic performance is declining, particularly in urban areas and among disadvantaged populations. My high school is an example of this. My school actually had three other schools in the same building and the one I was attending just so happened to be the worse one. Why? I believe there are so many factors that contributed to this school underachieving. One of those factors was actually mentioned in this article; boredom.

As Gatto himself put it,”boredom and childishness were the natural affairs in the classroom.”(1) Boredom comes as a lack of engagement and causes students to become inattentive. How can you learn something new if you aren’t engaged in the process? Then the problem is that many times teachers can’t see past the behaviors that indicate boredom. Instead of examining the environment and the activities, they begin to assign negatives to the students. This only causes more stress and doesn’t eliminate the problem at all. This leads to cheating and skipping class which were both very popular in my school. We are conditioned to believe that boredom in a classroom is normal. But is it really? Well, what can be done to change that? The answer is in this article. “We could encourage the best qualities of youthfulness – curiosity, adventure, resilience, the capacity for surprising insight – simply by being more flexible about time,texts, and tests, by introducing kids to truly competent adults, and by giving each student what autonomy he or she needs in order to take a risk every now and then.”(1)

Another factor has to be the teachers that we had in that school. We had teachers who simply didn’t care, lacked knowledge in what’s supposed to be their area of “expertise”, or just simply couldn’t conduct a class. This was one of the major problems in this school. Especially when you had teachers sleeping in class, playing inappropriate videos in class, using derogatory words towards students, etc. With this happening, why would students behave if the adults couldn’t either?  

Gatto points out numerous times that there is a difference between “education” and “schooling.” “Schooling” is something that is mandatory and requires a deadly routine of six classes a day, five days a week, nine months a year, for twelve years. “Education” has more room for autonomy. Gatto raises the question of  “Why, then, do Americans confuse education with just such a system?”(2) The American school system that in Gatto’s opinion, conditions kids to be mediocre intellects, to have no leadership skills, to obey reflexively. Where I don’t completely agree with Gatto is where he states, “We have been taught in this country to think of ‘success’ as synonymous with, or at least dependent upon ‘schooling’ but historically that isn’t true in either an intellectual or a financial sense.”(2)  I do believe though that as boring and redundant as it may be, it is necessary to give our children an education that will hopefully improve their lives. That’s why it is important to provide some change. Gatto gives the examples of Carnegie, Twain and Farragut among others as successful people who did not finish high school. While similar examples from today’s society such as Bill Gates and Steve jobs who did not complete college, these are rare cases that are not relevant to everyone. We live in a more complex world that requires greater and broader knowledge to succeed. It is no longer possible to be successful like Edison by just inventing a light bulb and not all who drops out of high school or doesn’t go to college will get lucky like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs. Nevertheless, I believe that the major concern here is why there hasn’t been anything done to reform the school system. There should be no reason for graduates to feel as if they have wasted the last fifteen years of their life with pointless busy work.

In conclusion, the point is that we have to recognize the flaws in our educational system so that our future children don’t fall victims to this problem. One thing that I know for sure is that I don’t want my kids to feel how I felt when I started college. I felt like I was cheated. We can say with certainty that parents, families, and communities are as much a part of the educational process as are children, teachers, and staff.

 

Works Cited

Gatto, John. “Against Schools.”, 2003

 

Unit One: Final Draft

What if we were Given an education not schooling?

We are trapped in a society that if we have no education people look down upon us and treat us unfairly. What if sport cars, fancy jewelry, and clothing was a way to make society work hard in school in order to be successful?

Through my experience, Elementary school and Middle school was a easier time but when high school started it was a whole different ball game it was equal behavior between students and teachers but as the days, months, and years progressed things started to change. I went to Richmond Hill High School in Queens which had many mixed reviews, more bad rather than good. My experience there wasn’t actually bad like they were perceived to be. But there is always that one teacher that gave up and doesn’t care about teaching anymore and takes it out on the students. Many teachers don’t enjoy their jobs because students are focused on passing the class and not really caring about learning but you can’t blame us we are afraid to fail in this society so we have to turn to cheating to succeed. It seems that Richmond Hill High School was perceived to be a horribly bad school and that all the students that went or go there is mischievous and looking for trouble rather than knowing who we really are. Many teachers get the wrong perception of students of how they look and dress because it tells them more than they really know. Students usually get treated and judged upon by who they surround themselves with  rather than knowing them.

In his article “Against School”, John Taylor Gatto point of view shows how the American schooling system seems childish. John Taylor Gatto thinks he can bring out the best qualities in students by giving them a reason to make decisions and take risks from time to time rather than teaching them the basic information they already know. According to John Gatto, the key problem of schooling is boredom which raises a question, “Do we really need schooling?” Gatto informs the readers that students would be interested in learning if they were given an “education” and not“schooling”. The American schooling system seems more like a daily routine which doesn’t help kids develop and grow, to some they feel forced to go to school rather than following their true dreams. John Gatto believes the American schooling system is made for profits for the economy. The main reason schooling was made was to train everyone to be the same. The schooling system manipulates us by determining our social roles. Kids are being fed with necessary and unnecessary information and they are not thinking on their own.

          John Taylor  Gatto makes a distinction between “education” and “schooling.” The difference is that “schooling”is something that kids have to do for twelve years, and five days a week for nine months and “education” is only if a kid really wants to (2). Is it possible that George W. Bush accidentally spoke the truth when he said we would “leave no child behind” (2), students want to be motivated to be encouraged to have the qualities to succeed in life they don’t want to feel like they were forced to learn material that society thinks they have to. We suppress our genius only because we haven’t yet figured out how to manage a population of educated men and women (5), which shows the solution that we should be able to manage our life ourselves rather than depending on anyone. We could encourage the best qualities of the youthfulness- curiosity, adventure, resilience, the capacity for surprising insight by being more flexible about time, texts, and testing (1), these methods would be more meaningful for a students learning life span that would help them grow, develop, and succeed.

       On the other hand, Robert Leamnson article “Your First Job” informs his audience on the difference between the two components of learning and understanding. “So it is that we can understand something quite clearly, and some time later not be able to remember what it was we understood” (3) which shows we didn’t keep the information we learned because we feel like we don’t need it in everyday life. For example, if you watch a movie or show and time passes, you would remember what you watched because it had a real life scenario that affected you or it had a meaningful experience. “The reason something must be said about so commonplace a thing as the classroom is that too many students see it incorrectly and so they waste a highly valuable occasion for learning” (3), many students see the classroom like a jail cell that has you locked away from society with no place to move or be free. In other words there’s no space for a student to spread his wings and fly independently and show their true worth.

          They need experiences to keep succeeding in life, and the only way to gain this knowledge is to learn about life, to see and experience how to manage them in life. In conclusion I agree with Gatto’s and Leamnson’s argument because I believe that most students can relate to their points about education in their articles “Against Schools” and “Learning”.  

Citations:

Gatto, John. “Against Schools.” Against School – John Taylor Gatto, 2003, www.wesjones.com/gatto1.htm.

Leamnson, Robert. Learning . 2002, www1.udel.edu/CIS/106/iaydin/07F/misc/firstJob.pdf.

 

essay (final draft)

 

                School-Nuturing Growth, or Zombies?

 

          The ideas and principles of schooling have been around almost as long as civilized humans have been walking the earth. The majority of people would most likely tell you that schooling-education in general is a must if you are looking to live and lead a “normal” productive life. In the article, “Against School” by John Taylor Gatto, he deviates from this way of thinking, and argues that school is ultimately a waste of time. Gatto even goes as far to say that school turns children into “gullible, mindless consumers.” I do not agree with this idea for several reasons. Let me explain why.

The first reason why I don’t think that school conditions students and children to be “mindless, gullible consumers”, is the fact that just about everyone who has made it out of high school knows how much hard work, and dedication it takes to get through it all-with passing grades at that. In the second paragraph, on the very first page, Gatto makes a claim about how the school system has affected not only the quality of life for students, but teachers as well. “Teacher are themselves products
trapped inside structures even more rigid than those imposed on the children.”(1) A lot of students could probably tell you how true this quote may seem. But, what many fail to realize is that teachers are thee for a reason-they enjoy teaching! It is true that not all teachers are built the same. Of course there are teachers who could care less what, or who, or how they’re teaching. But, for Gatto to make such a broad assumption that all teachers are “bored” and “trapped” would be insulting to a large majority of teachers, who take pride in knowing that what they are teaching can change peoples lives. In my senior year of high school, my AP English teacher was a prime example of that. We studied the work of Shakespeare, as well as classic books, such as “The Great Gatsby”, and “Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe. We learned about structuring essays, and the different types of essays that could be written. She showed us countless methods and ways to strengthen our reading, writing, and comprehension skills. My AP English teacher was a living example of one reason why John Gatto’s claim about the school system is false.

Another reason why I disagree with Gatto’s claim about public education “crippling” children is that the school system is not at total fault. For every “bored” or “trapped” teacher, there are countless more students that feel the exact same way. In the article, “Learning (Your First Job)” by Robert Leamnson, he makes a very important point about learning. “
Learning is not something that just happens
You cannot be ‘given’ learning, nor can you be forced to do it.”(1) This quote may just be the most obvious quote in existence, but it is also the most overlooked. The reason the public school system does not work for everyone, is that not everyone has the want, or will to succeed. Therefore, not everyone will succeed. CUNY is a public school system, for graduates of high school. I find the biggest difference in “types” of people is noticed when you go to college, from high school. In high school, a lot of people are there because they legally need to, its mandatory. This reflects in their attitudes, and obviously their grades. In college, however, there is a substantial increase in the number of students who actually want to learn. They are there to benefit themselves. That desire, is the driving factor that pushes most to their limits, and to ultimately accomplish their goals.

The last reason why I disagree with Gatto about the public education system is the fact that Gatto’s word should not be taken at face value. We have already seen the broad generalizations made by Gatto about teachers, how products of the public education system are “gullible, mindless consumers”. Gatto makes yet another generalizing statement regarding school, and its overall purpose. “
School is meant to determine each students proper social role
As in ‘your permanent record’”.(4) Now here is where we really get to see the immense claims Gatto is making. Gatto seems to have created a conspiracy theory, conspiring against the public education system. Though a “gutsy” move, once you realize that what Gatto is essentially saying is that schooling determines where you will be in life, socially. Not the individual. He also is saying that your permanent record somehow has a huge help in this decision, I think most would agree that that is not a very sound statement to make.

In conclusion, Gatto’s various outlandish claims about school turning kids into zombies, are in fact unjustly found. It involves conspiracies, and statements masked as facts, but in reality are based on a total bias. A  bias that goes against the public education system of today, as well as all of the people who were, or are currently enrolled. Like I mentioned in the introduction, schooling and its principles have been around for a very long time. It has produced some of the greatest, and influential minds ever to have lived. If the school system was as detrimentally corrupt and broken as Gattos claims it to be, then we literally would all be zombies; truly the living dead. I find school to be a lot like life-whatever you make it out to be.

Unit 1 Final Draft

 

Nina Darbonne

Dr. Carrie Hall

English Comp 1 1101-D355

21 February 2019

Pocket Guide to Fending Off Consumer Zombies in School Systems

In current society, it is so commonplace being urged to buy the latest products whether its a phone, laptop, footwear, clothes, or gaming paraphernalia; that people rarely bat an eye at the steady stream of advertising we encounter at every turn. Advertising constantly assaults individuals with the message “you need the newest features.” Despite having fully functional items, they suddenly become obsolete as soon as the new edition hits the shelves. Are these unavoidable waves of consumerism so deeply imbedded in our culture that it affects our youth in schools? Is the education that is presumed to take place in the school systems being usurped by institutionalized brainwashing to mass produce a society of “gullible, mindless consumers?”

The most reliable source to answer these questions would be the two groups that spend the most time in the school systems, students and teachers. Based on my experiences, the entire school system is not flawed. Society creates problems which trickle into schools and teachers are then expected to make an effort to combat the issues that arise. Conversely, according to John Taylor Gatto public schools are failing the mission. John Taylor Gatto, an award winning teacher in New York, ended up leaving the profession bitter and jaded. Gatto’s article “Against School,” berates the public school institution criticizing the founding intentions and effectiveness of producing educated individuals. Gatto writes, “School didn’t have to train kids in any direct sense to think they should consume nonstop, because it did something even better: it encouraged them not to think at all. And left them sitting ducks for another great invention of the modern era – marketing.” (Gatto 4) Schools do not specifically promote children to be consumers, however they encourage them not to be discerning. Then leaving impressionable minds defenseless against the onslaught of advertising. Public schools may not be conditioning students to be consumers, its rampant in almost every aspect of society; however schools can do more to prepare children to become competent functional adults.

John Taylor Gatto taught in the New York City school system for thirty years. He grew to believe the public school system hinders children as opposed to educating and preparing them to be responsible, productive adults. Gatto identifies his major gripes with the public school system in his article “Against School.” Some of the concepts Gatto mentions in the article I previously never gave much thought to and took for granted. Gatto mentions in the article, “1. To make good people. 2. To make good citizens. 3. To make each person his or her personal best. These goals are still trotted out today
 as a decent definition of public education’s mission.” (Gatto 2) Based on this information, the public school system should aim to mold each young mind into morally good people that strive to achieve their best and are productive members of society upon graduation from high school. At the age of eighteen, approximately the same age many complete “the twelve-year wringer,” many aspects of the world transform and opportunities open up to individuals. For instance, eighteen marks the age when people are considered legally adults with the capacity to make their own decisions and be held accountable for said decisions and actions, enlist in the military, and the ability to vote is available. Personally, I never attended public school. However, through my experiences in Catholic schools I feel the parochial educational institutions I attended have strived to instill the objectives of the public education’s mission in their students. This was done through requiring volunteer work, stressing the importance of the Golden Rule (“Do unto others as you would have them do unto you”), and rewarding good behavior and academic success while conversely reprimanding negative behavior and poor academic effort. The academic institutions I attended ensured we were aware of current events through a myriad of assignments that emphasized news articles while excluding sports and celebrity tabloids.

To be gullible is to readily believe something without questioning the source or soundness of the information. If a school’s goal is to merely force feed students information without them giving further thought to the material the teachers are providing; mindless gullible behavior is being fostered. In my school experience, I encountered several teachers that sought to keep the classroom interesting and students engaged by challenging students to fact check in order to possibly correct the teacher for various incentives, the chance of getting extra credit or a gift card was more than enough to capture the attention of the entire class. On several occasions, I found myself reeled back into lessons after zoning out giving more thought to impending lunch over the “golden nuggets of wisdom” tumbling out of my teacher’s mouth. I can recall the moment in my education that sparked my curiosity and effectively tethered me to Science. An interest that made obtaining my Bachelor’s of Science in Biology truly a labor of love. Sophomore year of high school, my Chemistry teacher converted lab class into a veritable fireworks display conveying the whimsical applications of the Science.

The schools I attended made efforts to combat consumerism by banning fad objects from being brought into the classrooms. This spanned from yo-yos and tamagotchis to G shock watches. In conjunction with uniforms, materialism was discouraged and uniformity was promoted.

Dr. Robert Leamnson wrote “Learning (Your First Job)”, which describes the components of the learning process (understanding and remembering) and several methods to aid this process both in and out of the classroom. Many of Leamnson’s learning strategies ring true. Leamnson writes, “You cannot be ‘given’ learning, nor can you be forced to do it. The most brilliant and inspired teacher cannot ‘cause’ you to learn. ” (Leamnson 1) A good teacher can not force a student to learn it is the student’s responsibility as well. Conversation is not one sided neither is the learning process.

A person’s achievements are not based solely on their educational background but their motivation and perseverance are major components. That being said, some careers, such as medical doctor, require substantial schooling that would seem unattainable without the “twelve-year wringer” as a adequate base to build upon. School systems, teachers in particular can help spark curiosity in a given subject by escaping the humdrum routines. Whether it’s bringing the lesson to life in new and unexpected ways or offering incentives to ignite passion in the material. Consumerism is practically unavoidable; however stressing the importance of schoolwork and morality may be enough to keep the “gullible, mindless consumers” at bay in schools.

 

Works Cited

Gatto, John T. “Against School.” Against School – John Taylor Gatto, wesjones.com/gatto1.htm.

Leamnson, Robert. “Learning (Your First Job).” MA, Dartmouth, Dec. 2002.

Final Draft

Zevanya

Carrie Hall

English 1101

21 February 2019

Laboratories of Experimentation on Young Minds

In today’s time, due to our advanced technology and forever growing economy, society has managed to convince some students into thinking that school might not be as necessary as we all thought. We have people making money just by eating in front of a screen and posting it on YouTube as well as people sacrificing themselves just for the sake of “views” and “good content.” Seeing people like this will bring about the question of “why then do we need education when we can do the same?”

According to Gatto, “we have been taught (that is, schooled) in this country to think of “success” as synonymous with, or at least dependent upon, “schooling.”(2) I strongly agree that being schooled does not guarantee any form of success towards students. On the other hand, this does not serve as an excuse to throw away your chance of getting the education you deserve. Like any typical schools, I too experienced the deadly routine, “six classes a day, five days a week, nine months a year, for twelve years.”(Gatto 2) I agree that at first I never understood why I had to go through this system, it seemed like I had to go to school just to fit in with the other Indonesian students.

As my school adopted Singapore’s education system, we also followed the Cambridge examinations curriculum. In this system, we were taught solely based on textbooks and worksheets, although, I do not entirely agree with this method of teaching as it creates a closed discussion on other possible answers and theories. Nevertheless, the school was still known to excel students in academics and human skills. We were taught advanced mathematics, chemistry, biology, and physics during the eighth grade. Later, during the ninth grade, we were split into two majors: business and science.

The reason why our school had to split the students into two majors was to give them the opportunity to focus on which majors they felt could be beneficial for their future major in college. Regardless, both majors had exams almost every three weeks and would usually be six to seven pages thick. None of our teachers made it easy. They made sure we experienced “deep learning, the kind that demands both understanding and remembering of relationships, causes, effects and implications for new or different situations.”(Leamnson 4) Thus, our exams contained only essays and short answers, by short I mean five to six lines.

As stressful as this sounds, and I have even shed some tears due to the stress, I cannot deny that my school was what helped me survive my current challenge which is college. Not only did they help students excel in academics, but they also promoted fund-raising events to help the less fortunate. We would visit orphanages and hold talent shows where the students themselves would put on small shows like singing or acting. We would also come to school earlier to make packaged meals for the kids and staff. It was also the school’s idea to chip in a few extra changes from our pocket money to donate for families living in the villages that needed assistance for giving their children a chance of receiving a proper education.

In Indonesia, numerous children around the age of five to thirteen are unable to receive an education. They had no choice but to help their parents earn money by selling water, tissues, and cigarettes. Also, you would find numerous kids on the streets in Jakarta playing the role as an unofficial parking ranger. Keep in mind that the government does not pay these kids, they receive their income from small tips from people riding cars, motorcycles or trucks. Around four years ago my mother’s company held a volunteer work trip. My mother asked around ten kids what their future goals were and every one of them replied the same, they all wanted to go to school, wear uniforms and learn something.

It broke my heart to hear that these kids only wanted something so simple but was something most of us took for granted. Gatto states that “your children should have a more meaningful life, and they can.”(5) Although I did not receive this from a public school and indeed private schools are not on the affordable side, I am living proof that going through the “deadly routine” benefited me, in a way, in the long run. I matured sooner than most people my age, learned to appreciate more for what I have than what I do not and apply what I learned in high school into college and the real world.

In conclusion, students should start thinking about education as an investment for their future. Although Gatto describes public schools as “laboratories of experimentation on young minds, drill centers for the habits and attitudes that corporate society demands.” my school was more similar to a laboratory that ran tests on students to upgrade them into a better version of themselves by putting us through infinite challenges and diverse settings related to the real world. There is a famous idiom in Indonesia that says “Bersakit-sakit dahulu bersenang-senang kemudian” which directly translates to “No pain, no gain.” As the prominent philosopher Robert Leamnson puts it, “learning is not something that just happens to you, it is something that you do to yourself.” We cannot expect the best and most fortunate outcomes if we do not put effort into achieving them.

Works Cited:

Gatto, John Taylor “Against School”

Leamnson, Robert “Learning(Your First Job)”

For Thursday: Final Drafts Due!!

Hey Everyone! Your final drafts of your essay are due on Thursday. Remember that papers are due by 11:30 AM (the beginning of class.)

Please contact me if you have questions! Also, please note that Aaron Barlow will be doing tutoring in his office tomorrow from 10-3. He is in Namm 503.

Also, please note that I will no longer tolerate sleeping in class (or the appearance of sleeping.) If your eyes are closed and you are not doing the in-class writing tasks, you are a distraction to me and to your colleagues and you will be asked to leave (and counted as absent.)