final revision 2

Mia Carter

05-13-19

Professor Carrie Hall

English 1101

 

Life of a Mutt

 

When you see me do see a girl

Or do you see her looks  

You see a white girl

Thinking she has the privilege

That you have the right to stare

Looking closer thinking what is she

Is she this she that?

Little do they know

Feel like I’m being judged

My hair is crazy

I can’t tame it

It’s part of me

Being black

Doesn’t decide my heart

Being white

Doesn’t decide how I should be looked at

We don’t judge a book by a cover

So why do we judge

Everyone is unique

I’m mixed

Grow up thinking we are all equal

Being a mutt your never equal

To much of this

To little of that

Seen as dirty

Unwanted

Wrong

Life isn’t easy

Feels like you’re going down a rabbit hole

Will it ever end?

The staring

The comments

The names

They never stop

They hurt more and more

We need to put an end to it

Stop hurting each other

Love each

No matter what

 

 What It Means To Be Chicano/Chicana

The Last Supper of Chicano Heroes

      The painting is a re-construction of Leonardo da Vinci’s painting “The Last Supper”. The Last Supper is the final meal that Jesus shared with his 12 apostles in Jerusalem before his crucifixion.

Artist Burciago stated that his intentions were, “To portray the 12 Apostles dining on tortillas, tamales and tequila instead of bread and wine” ( 1988). The typical Mexican food that we already know of. But for those that don’t know, tortillas are made with water based dough which is pressed then cooked. Tamales are made of dough, which is steamed in a corn husk or banana leaf. They also vary from spicy to sweet but if you want to be basic you can have the plain ones that are made with just cheese. Tamales are typically made only on special occasions, whether it be a birthday party or a holiday but tamales never miss out on any family gathering . He decided to also replace the religious figures with 13 Chicano heroes when he was persuaded by students to mix humor with religion.

The creator, Jose Antonio Burciago, had also  polled a total of 200 Chicanos students and activists from the late 1960s to find out whom they considered the top 13 Chicano heroes . But not all the heroes had to be Chicano. In the painting the important historical figures included was Mexican general and politician Ignacio Zaragoza, legendary bandit who became a hero Joaquin Murrieta, American labor leader and civil rights activist Cesar Chavez along with Dolores Huerta, the father of Chicano theater Luis Valdez, La Virgen de Guadalupe,  revolutionary Che Guevara, Mexican artist Frida Kahlo, poet Sor Juana Inez de la Cruz, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.,  a leading figure in the Mexican Revolution Emiliano Zapata, Mexican American guitarist Carlos Santana and Death-La Muerte received enough votes to stand behind the lucky 13.

The 200 people that were questioned took important parts in Burciaga’s tribute “and to all those who died, scrubbed floors, wept, and fought for us” the reason for why I choose this picture. The quote pays respect to those that contributed to the Chicano history so that we would be able to have an identity and to those that brought about change to our society during that time. So that students could be encouraged to be biliterate, helping schools to promote bilingualism by providing medals and seals which is known as The New York State Seal of Biliteracy. It was signed into law by Governor Cuomo on July 31, 2012 and was introduced into my high school just last year. It’s important to realize that what we know as history is relevant to our life right now and helps us understand our society today . 

Cinco de Mayo

An important date that allow us as Chicanos and overall the latino community feel connected to our ancestors and represents the mixture of Mexican American culture is May 5th. Every year a Cinco de Mayo Parade takes place around Sunset Park which is located in Brooklyn or in Manhatten. The city is flooded with Mexican pride. That day I could walk out in green, white and red and not be the only one. According to Ph.D writer Felipe de Ortego y Gasca, “Cinco de Mayo is regarded by most Mexican Americans (Chicanos) as a day of commemoration symbolizing the strength of the human spirit in the face of overwhelming adversity”(2011). Cinco de Mayo is the day that commemorates a victorious battle that took place in Puebla, Mexico. Known as “La Batalla de Puebla” and not the Independence Day of Mexico . The celebration of Cinco de Mayo became among Mexican immigrants a way of encouraging pride in their Mexican heritage in the United States. Serving as a reminder that we are powerful despite the discrimination we face. That Cinco de Mayo is the day that represents unity. To be able to celebrate our pride, remember our roots, honor our traditions and remember where we came from along with our community. Therefore we shouldn’t be ashamed but rather proud of our backgrounds. As Chicanos we protect immigrants and Dreamers and we can fight against discrimination and racism not in a form of violence but rather showing that we can become doctors or lawyers and make a difference in society while remembering and honoring our ancestors.

                  Our Lady of Guadalupe                                         Our Lady of Guadalupe,  also known as the Virgin of Guadalupe, is an iconic symbol of Mexican Culture. She is depicted with brown skin, an angel and moon at her feet and rays of sunlight that encircle her. Her image was used as religious figure like god is used but during the Chicano Movement it was used for equality in the United States and as a visual representation of the fight for independence in Mexico, the farm workers struggle in the 1960s and as a symbol of justice. According to Raul A. Reyes an attorney and member of the USA Today Board of Contributors stated, “To the present day, Our Lady of Guadalupe remains a powerful symbol of Mexican identity and faith, and her image is associated with everything from motherhood to feminism to social justice”(2016). As a Chicana, it is our duty to keep our traditions alive and continue to support them. To me she is not only the mother of all men and women but she is a sign of hope and more than just a saint. Every year during the night of Dec. 11 on the vigil of her feast thousands of faithful come to the shrine to sing to the Virgin all over the world. On December,11 my family goes every year to The Church of Our Lady of Guadalupe and St. Bernard located in Manhattan, where many gather and wait on line to enter the church for a short mass where we honor and thank her for our family, health, the many blessings, and for being our hope in difficult situations. As I grow order she is one of the many beliefs I will carry throughout my life because she is important not only to me but to my community.

Works Cited 

  • “Why Chicanos Celebrate Cinco De Mayo.” Somos En Escrito
  • “Our Lady of Guadalupe Is a Powerful Symbol of Mexican Identity.” NBCNews.com, NBCUniversal News Group
  • Burciaga, Jose Antonio. “Cinco De Mayo–Some Uncommon Heroes for a Day Commemorating Heroism.” Los Angeles Times, Los Angeles Times, 5 May 1988

Response on music review

1) I think overall, you mentioned how my structure of this essay is different and that I don’t really need to say that certain scenes symbolize something. I think I worded it wrong but I guess I was trying to say what those scenes and colors meant to me in my point of view.

2) I was wondering what you meant by that I should attribute the Korean lyrics?

3) The feedbacks were actually helpful and I feel like it helped me understand better as to how my song/song lyrics should be like. When I writing the third paper I was aiming for a different structure and to not go all informative but a mix of everything. I’m just sort of struggling of making my revision at least 600 words. I do have a plan of including an interlude before the song so it sets the mood of what the song is going to be about.

For Thursday– LAST DAY OF CLASS BEFORE EXAM (and revision due!!!)

  1. If you missed class today, please read the comments on your music review and post a response with the following:
    1. A summary of what you think I said in my comments
    2. Any questions you had about my comments
    3. How you think you will use the feedback in my comments to finish your final revision and/ or to do your final exam!

REMEMBER THAT YOUR FINAL REVISIONS ARE DUE ON THURSDAY AT CLASS TIME. THEY MUST BE POSTED TO OPEN LAB BY 11:30. I’M SORRY, BUT I CAN NOT ACCEPT LATE PAPERS FOR THIS UNIT.

I WILL ALSO DISTRIBUTE THE ESSAY FOR THE FINAL EXAM IN THURSDAY’S CLASS!

revision 2

Mia Carter

05-13-19

 

When you see me do see a girl

Or do you see her looks  

You see a white girl

Thinking she has the privilege

That you have the right to stare

Looking closer thinking what is she

Is she this she that?

Little do they know

Feel like I’m being judged

My hair is crazy

I can’t tame it

It’s part of me

Being white

Doesn’t decide how i should be looked at

Being black

Doesn’t decide my heart

We don’t judge a book by a cover

So why do we judge people

Everyone is unique

Im mixed

Grow up thinking we are all equal

Being mutts your never equal

To much of this

To little of that

Seen as dirty

Unwanted

Wrong

 

Rough draft of revision two

Kristopher Baptiste

Carrie Hall

English 1101

May 11, 2019

In today generation kids are basically going to school just to be given unnecessary information that will not go no where in life. Parents should start taking action in trying to change this corrupted school system because teachers these days preferably the teachers in high school cause that’s where its really noticeable. Parents should go up to the school and talk to the principle about their child’s education because they are basically wasting there time coming to school and learning literally nothing that will help them in life. students should also stand up and say something about this problem before it gets even worse than it is right now. Students aren’t getting the proper education they deserve in today’s society. There are many ways that students can take the initiative to go out and get there education and there parents can do anything in their power to help and support their kids.

Since some teachers are lazy and would rather just give the students work without even caring if they did well or not. Also since teachers don’t like the fact they have to set up test, grade the test, create homework and also correct it, but the biggest problem of all is giving up there free time to help tutor students after school especially when they need it. Parents should go up to the school and talk to the principle about their child’s education because they are basically wasting there time coming to school and learning literally nothing that will help them in life. Parents should look for tutors that can helps there kids in the specific section of work they lack in instead of waiting for change. Parents can put there kids in after school programs where its a guarantee that their child they need. If there are parents that was well educated and have a degree can help their kids in the subjects there well educated in instead of relying on other people giving their kid false information.

Rough draft

Vase with five flowers

There are five flowers visible.
Why are the flowers in different stages?
Can it be life changes?
One flower has not bloomed.
May this be the start of childhood?
Innocence of what may come.
Now there is bright pedals.
Blind of the darkness in this world.
Learning from those before it.
Feeling the weight of aging,
And now the pedals are slowly diminishing.
Not yet to be retired.
The ovule has now fallen.
The water has been digested by others.
Is it time to go?
The flower has completely withered.
The sunflower has lived a full life.
Goodbye to those around me.

 

aurumn landscape

Autumn the season brings falling leaves, shorter days and long colder nights.
Umbrellas opening, caused by rainy dreary days
Transitions of spiritual movements and thankfulness traditional given on these days
Migrations of many birds and humans alike, to far away places craving long lost warmth
Unique traditions, a lot in family kitchens creating food and loving memories
Nurturing

Leaves are falling, creating showers of beautiful orange and yellow hues
Apple cider and pies with cinnamon can be smelled through the crisp air
Nature is so beautiful in November, showing the changes subtlety that we feel inside
Decorations galore, scarecrows are out and cornucopia are being made
Scarecrows are out scaring birds and playing which children
Chestnuts are roasting, corn maizes are opening and autumn fun is in the air
Autumnal equinox is brewing, Mabon is here !!
Pumpkin pies being baked with as much love as we can take, grandmas laughter is flowing in the kitchen chatter
Enjoy this time, because it won’t last. Trembler autumn goes by very fast.

 

 

 

terrace at night

Stars are shining,
the chitter chatter of soft spoken words can be heard.
Creating a feeling of togetherness while still being alone.

A barmaid seen pacing the isles
Of white tables aligned
Bearing food and drinks of all kinds

Yellow light is seen creating happy atmospheres
Creating life through colors
Making this a world of its own

The outside world can seem so,
Dark and dreary making you feel weary.
Cold and unloving in a late night light.

People laughing , plates crashing
I wonder if they know,
That he draws them in those shadows?

A cold breeze blows
Pine needles fall, yet,
Not one bats an eye.

It must be nice
To sit and eat under such a light
Of a terrace at night .