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Author: Ismael
Revision 2 proposal
After writing about the history and contraversal views on the word ‘faggot’ to the LGBT+ community in unit 2, I’d like to make a much more detailed video about the history of the word, how it devolved into a slur to others, how it’s been fought to be removed as a derogatory term to describe a gay person, and how it is implemented in today’s culture. There would be a quick overview the history and creation of the LGBT+ community, including instances of riots, movements, and violence against the community, in order to gain a better understanding of the harmful implication the word has within the community. The point of the video is to show viewers the growing negative implication of the word, as certain hate groups try to keep up with the growing population within the LGBT+ community, and ways to help out against these groups.
Video essay
Draft(writing about art)
A Lot of games have come a long way from the 8-bit limitations of old consoles. Games like skyrim, **, and many other triple A games go as far as possible to reach as realistic as beautiful, creating scenic beauties that borderline too realistic. There’s no arguing that games have become much more beautiful over time, but a lot would argue if these are considered art pieces. Every game has some kind of an objective: defeat the enemy team, get to the end of a puzzle, save someone, or just get the most points out of anyone. Art though, dosnt have such a clear cut objective, more or less its purpose is to provoke some kind of emotion or reaction from an observer. With that, it’s easy to see the argument that most games themselves aren’t art, but just contain art. But does that mean that a game itself can be an art piece? Can a game provoke imagination and curiosity without holding the players hand and showing them how they should feel? Of course, there’s countless games that are meant to provoke emotions, but there’s few that can be considered works of art all by themselves.
Journey was created back in 2012 by ThatGameCompany, with the intent to create a game that not only made the player feel insignificant to their surrounding in order to have them explore the vibrant landscapes, but to go beyond the defeat/kill/win mentality of most other games. Outside of the name of the game and the ending credits, the entire game is void of dialog or writing, telling the story through map design, hieroglyphics, and paintings given to you by the echoes of those long lost. You start as a nameless hooded figure in a vast desert, surrounded by the ruins of a lost city. Through the ruins, echoed stories, and scattered pictures, you learn that the mountain that you’ve been drawn to walk towards since the beginning once gave the lands magic, the same magic that you use on your way through the game. The magic was used to nourish the land, the plants that grew, and the people that flourished from it. Over time, the people learned to harness this power, and created large and beautiful cities from this new power. Eventually though, as the city grew larger, and the land once used for food and life was now used for towers, the magic began to die out and fade. With the magic dwindling, a divide was created between the people over a hold of what’s left, and thus lead to war. Giant robotic monsters were created to fight and take what magic the other side held. In the end however, no one on either side survived, and the monsters still run free clearing the land of the life that once thrived. Over time the land was taken back by the sands of time, and what was left of the magic was used to to make you, the player. Further on you see your journey through the ruins, as if predestined, and at the end shows your defeat at the base of the mountain. Knowing this, you continue on through the frigid cold and pass the graves of those before you. As predicted, you reach the base of the mountain, and as much as you struggle through the roaring winds, the player collapses into the silent snow. As the screen fades from the white of the unforgiving blizzard, the echoes of the people who guided you come, and grants you your second wind, as you launch through the eye of the storm, past the robotic monsters, and through the fence clouds. As you break the clouds, you reach the peak, surrounded by the energy that once flooded the lands, and as you reach the end, your covered in light, as the game fades back into darkness.
Alternative success(revision 1)
Alternative success
Ask any college student about their time in school, and be met with shudders and groans of all the stressful memories of exams,projects, and books of essays from their â12 years of hellâ. The work might have been stressful and exhausting, but at the end of the day, it’s the only real way to success, or so we’ve been lead to believe. Maybe all that stress and anxiety wasn’t necessary for you to succeed, and might have even had an opposite effect on some students. Personally, I’ve seen every way a student has succeed in this system of education, and the most prominent method I’ve experienced and witnessed is through unethical methods like cramming and cheating. For every hard working straight A students, there’s just as much or even more students sneaking cheat sheets into exams, and it may be due to how our public education system is set up.
Public schools are used as a means to grant children a fair and fulfilling head start in life, with a clear path to a career, and as tech grew smarter and more complicated, so did the curriculums needed for careers. Befor, classes were taught at home, basic literature and an understanding in mathematics was all that was needed. But with advancement in technology and innovation, the standard for basic education grew with the time. With such a fast growing system, the pressure to succeed grew as well. Students now are expected to learn at a far greater rate than those of a couple generations ago, and as weâre taught to put our best into our work, sometimes our best just isn’t enough to reach such high expectations.
So why exactly would a student even consider cheating as an option? Well it might be due to the way schools put more value on actually succeeding than learning. In John Taylor Gatto’s article “Against school”, he raises the argument that “schools are meant to tag the unfit – with poor grades, remedial placement, and other punishments”. School has become a competitive environment made to weed out students based on how fast they can grasp information. With long school hours and piles of work, students are expected to sacrifice their already limited free time outside of classes, to accomplish what all those long hours of classes should have done. I’ve sacrificed my own health, coming into school on no sleep, stomachs flu, migraines, and more, all because of the value school puts into âfurthering your educationâ, where a single day of class is worth more than a week of pain and suffering. Students are also made to conform to a specific learning style that might not cater to their abilities. In math class, Iâd have difficulty understanding a problem or method during class. So I took the time afterwards to break down the problem further than my teacher would, using my own knowledge and understanding to figure out how to better see the problem. However, regardless of my answer, if I didn’t use the âcorrect methodâ to solve it, my answer was as good as wrong in the eyes of the school grading system.
So can students blame their failure on the teachers for not teaching them the right way? In most cases, no. Teachers are also victims to a flawed system. Theyâre also limited in time, expected to cater to classes of around 30 students, some covering multiple courses, which can average to almost 100 unique and individualized learning methods to prepare. Theyâre also graded based on the success of their students grades. Back in my old English class,usually a topic would be chosen for the class, based on assigned articles or novels. Then, the class period would be used to discuss this single topic in great details, while the teacher would include critical ideas and counter arguments, allowing allowing the class to not only explore concepts at a comfortable pace, but to use critical analysis in key arguments and topics without much help from the teacher. However, occasionally teachers were given unexpected visits from deans and members of the board of education to be evaluated on their performance. This changed the whole environment of the class, every talking point being driven by the teacher like a monotone orchestra, as if our thoughts on One Flew Over the Cuckooâs Nest was all the same. The class went from a vivid discussion on different views, to a simplified agree/disagree discorce.
Learning is a time consuming process, that requires unique methods of understanding to each person. Public schools have systematically made this process into a filtration system that, as Gatto stated, ââŚproduce mediocre intellects, to hamstring the inner life, to deny students appreciable leadership skills, and to ensure docile and incomplete citizens, all in order to render the populace âmanageableâ â. In my 12 years of school, learning and passing were two completely different concepts, and the time needed to learn was jammed with cramming and white noise knowledge. To pass was to put myself through unnecessary anxiety, leading to habits that still haunt me through my college years. To learn was to take what precious time outside of school there was to break down the vast information given into a fine and simple concept. With no change to the current system, an increase in school time, and an increase in the want for standardized testing, this method of learning will start to become an unreachable goal set aside for more competitive and uniform learning systems.
Article
With headlines such as ” murderer walks free after judge dosnt show up for 15 minutes” to their infamous in america” ‘no way to prevent this’ said only nation where this regularly happens”, it’s easy to see why people come for the satirical and cynical nature of the onion, but not much is said about the surprisingly well written, and in sometimes deadly accurate representation of our nature, of the articles themselves.
Even with fake quotes, edited pictures, and sometimes morbid or weird ideas, their articles are great for tricking gullible and naive readers. To poking at sometimes sensitive or redundant topics or just blatantly ripping at a disgusting or corrupt system, their ease of narrative shifting some reader to believe whatever come south their mouth, something that should be taken more often into opinionated articles or stories on events in more recent news.
Unit 2
When I was little, around 3rd grade, I was taught about curse words by my teacher scolding me for yelling âchopped up monkey dicksâ after a student dared me. I didn’t know what I said was bad, it just felt nice to say, and as a kid i wasn’t worried about the meaning of a word, only the feeling it gave me when I said it. So I continued to said it, loudly, repetitively, and in all the wrong time and places. Fast forward to last year, a friend of mine Katherine and I are leaving Comic-Con, exhausted and reminiscing over the fun experience. On our way out, a crowd was formed, blocking our only way out. Screams and chants of âGod hates fagsâ âFaggots go to hellâ and âA faggot is a sinnerâ was all we heard from the small group blocking the way, surrounded by police officers probably there to stop anything from getting physical. As we were slowly moving through the crowd, the chants got louder, the preachings were closer, and we can see more and more signs bearing that same disgusting word. I’m already exhausted and trying to keep my focus off the preaching and cursing, while Katherine was just about ready to fight the next asshole to call us a bunch of faggots one more fucking time, and I would have been completely behind it in any other case, but we both know it wouldn’t do any good to shut them up. It was definitely a shit stain on our experience, and was a hard reminder of how much hatefulness and disgust a single word can carry.
It’s not clear where the rodent term really came from directly, befor it became the slur used today it was commonly used for a bundle of sticks tied together for fuel. The word was then used as a slur for older women, used as a shorten from “faggot-gatherer” since older women would often make a living from gathering and selling wood. Its first apparent use as a gay slur was apparently in England, private school boys would call each others fags, which in ment doing a favor for an older classmate, in most cases sexual. Regardless of the origins of the actual word, the history of the word is where the real issue stems from. From offensive picket signs around pride rallies, to random casual conversations about a coworker’s friend, to the butt of an untasteful joke, the word has had a conflicting but overall negative connotation to it. From a term to describe a very âfeminineâ guy, it’s become more of a blanket term for homosexuality and different gender identities in general; similar to the word gay. However, unlike the word gay, it’s more commonly used as a derogatory term rather than a general description. Coming out in any way like gay to a close friend is suppose to be a great experience, but being called a faggot by the same friend can leave a harsher and more painful taste.
Similar words like âbitchâ and âniggaâ had been shaped through pop culture and communities normalizing the word to be more âpositiveâ from its original meaning. However, it’s hard to say whether faggot has had its edges completely shaved the same way. In schools, kids would call each other fags as a joke for not being manly enough, or just a bit too close to another guy. Go to a pride rally, or some cosplay convention like comic con and youâll definitely find a similar small group of westboro baptist church members holding up picket signs that read âgod hates fagsâ and âfaggots go to hellâ while screaming and cursing the words at random passersby like itâll change a fucking thing. Itâs been used to justify events such as stonewall, the arresting and killing of members of the LGBT+ in other countries, the murder of Mark Carson in Greenwich Village, and the attack on an Orlando nightclub. A quick google search can give you thousands of results for small but just as deadly attacks on innocent and unfortunate people. âThe fags had it comingâ or âwouldn’t have been so bad if they weren’t a bunch of faggotsâ littering online news article comments and posts about a recent murder, ridiculing or beating of another member of the LGBT+, using the word as a label for subhuman people whose lives are of less important than another based on their orientation.
There’s always the occasional party loving gay guy walking around pride with a sign that say âjust a faggot with a tambourineâ starting a crowd of people singing âToxicâ by Britney Spears while playing his heart out on that little tambourine. But besides those few and gone cases, there’s not enough âfaggot with a tambourineâ in the world to outweigh the years of abuse and innocent deaths tied to the word. Maybe when times are different and people aren’t kicked out of their houses or verbally lashed at for liking who they love, would it be easier to shape the word to fit with a more fitting time. In the meantime though, it’s best to use the word in small and considerate means. Pride might not be the same without âfaggot with a tambourineâ guy, but it might just be for the best that he gets a change.
Word
Faggot: derogatory word for homosexual.
In Defense of a Loaded Word
1.  Ta-Nehisi Coates, a black writer, who grew up with the normilization of such words as “nigga”, who learned the importance rights to name through his father’s many names.
2. Events such as Richie Incognito referring to his teammates as “half-niggers”, that then exploded to conversations about wether the word should be used, and by who.
3. The audiance in question is the black community, those who believe the way to remove the violent and evil background of such a word is either through full removal, or reconstruction and normilization.
4. The main take away from this is the importance of context to a word. Where Jewish people can joke around about someone being good with money being “a good jew”, the standard isnt held the same for black people to refer to themselves as “niggas”.
5. The article had a tone of concern, where a double standard of perfection is expected from the black community to not use said word unless expected to be treated as equals with it, regardless of context.
6. I do agree with his view of the word in most cases. However, from my personal experience, such words have special meanings based around community and time. As “nigger” was built around years of discrimination and hatred against colored people. While “nigga” has a somewhat diffrent implication, built on a culture of creation and community built against the old system.
A failing student’s last resort
The primary goals set on public schools is to grant children a fair and fulfilling head start in life, with a clear path to a career. At least that’s the initial goal, but as innovation grew, the need for workers and consumers came with, so schools became the perfect environment to nurture such gullible and manipulable groups. Having been through the whole spectrum of education, from the problem students to the honor classes, the path set by schools is not as advertised, and a proper education through these methods takes unique and almost disparaging techniques.
Education is suppose to be a slow and personal growth experience, and teachers are meant to make sure each and every student grows in their own ways. However, the current school environment is such a competitive field, with long hours of throwing information into students without proper care on whether it stuck, and so little time to retain this information. Students are expected to sacrifice their already limited time outside of classes, to accomplish what hours of classes should have done. In John Taylor Gattoâs article âAgainst schoolâ, he raises the argument that âschools are meant to tag the unfit â with poor grades, remedial placement, and other punishmentsâ. Those lucky enough to grasp concept fast enough were allowed to pass, while the rest were ostracized, labeled as a grade and nothing more. The need to pass over learning took over most, as most took to questionable methods of passing, from last second memorizing, to in most cases I’ve seen, some form of cheating.
For a student to fully understand new ideas, according to Robert leamnsonâs article âLearningâ, the key to true education comes from a balance of both understanding and memorization. However, schools set a much different requirement for all teachers, grading classes based on test scores instead of overall understanding. This practice may make it easy to grade several papers, but all it shows is a student’s abilities to memorize information then proceed to regurgitate it all onto standardized tests. In high school, teachers were occasionally observed during class times, to give overall grades based on teaching methods and average class grades. The teachers of course knew when these visits would occur and would set up before hand. On one of those days, an English teacher of mine was chosen, the ‘approved’ method he prepared for that day was such a drastic change from his usual classes. Usually, a topic was chosen for the class, normally from assigned article or novel for the class, then the class period would be used to discus this single topic in details, while the teacher would push for critical ideas and counter arguments, allowing the class to not only explore concepts at their own pace, but to use critical thinking in key arguments and proposals. This class period however, was completely driven by the teacher, the topic was chosen by the teacher as usual, but instead of breaking off into talking points, we were almost orchestrated by the teacher, thought by thought, as if our thoughts on one flew over the cuckoo’s nest was all in the same. The class went from a vivid discussion on different views, to simple agree/disagree discourse.
Gatto states that one of the actual basic functions of schools is to create conformity, âbecause its intention is to make children as alike as possible. People who conform are predictable, and this is of great use to harness and manipulate a large labor forceâ. If you donât solve a problem the way you were taught, regardless if you achieved the answer through your way, then you fail. This was a concept rooted into our brain, and although it seems necessary at younger ages to fully grasp simple concepts, it becomes redundant further on where free thinking and individual growth and understanding should prosper. When a math problem was taught in a way that wasnât clear or too complicated to understand, I would take time to figure out patterns in the problem, see how the outcome is created, and use the understanding plus my own thought process to make an easier and clear way to solve a problem. However, in most cases, the problems are made with predetermined methods of solution, where knowing the answer is only half the problem, memorizing the steps to take it is the main goal. This method of teaching leads to an inefficient method of learning, instead of a custom and critical method of education, students are taught to think uniformly, cutting out free thought, while those attempting to think critically were told their methods were inefficient.
Learning is a time consuming process, that requires unique methods of understanding to each person. Public schools have systematically made this process into a filtration system that, as Gatto stated, ââŚproduce mediocre intellects, to hamstring the inner life, to deny students appreciable leadership skills, and to ensure docile and incomplete citizens, all in order to render the populace âmanageableâ â. In my 12 years of school, learning and passing were two completely different concepts, and the time needed to learn was jammed with cramming and white noise knowledge. To pass was to put myself through unnecessary anxiety, leading to habits that still haunt me through my college years. To learn was to take what precious time outside of school there was to break down the vast information given into a fine and simple concept. With no change to the current system, an increase in school time, and an increase in the want for standardized testing, this method of learning will start to become an unreachable goal set aside for more competitive and uniform learning systems.