Author: Dkaran
Revision Two: Draft
Unit Three: Citations
Can Drake Make a Difference?
Deonarine Karan
Professor Carrie Hall
English 1101
April 30, 2019
Did you ever give back to the community or donated for a good cause? If you were financially stable would you give back to the people in need? When I outgrew clothes that I canât wear anymore I would usually gather everyoneâs clothes that they donât wear and donate them to the less fortunate. When I was younger and didnât use to finish my food my mom would use to tell me kids in Africa would love to have what you have. At the time I didnât really know the meaning behind that statement but as time passed I see kids all around the world is not as fortunate as us and donât really have the opportunities that we take for granted. Many teenagers in this generation care more about materialistic things like name brand clothing and shoes rather than whatâs important in life which is happiness. I use to hate when my friends use the phrase âMoney canât buy happinessâ, because they would say if you have money you could buy anything in the world you want. But as I matured and got older itâs true you could buy anything in the world but you canât buy yourself happiness. I rather be happy than rich because money could take so far before you realize thereâs more in life than just money.
In Drakeâs album Scorpion, two songs stood out to me the first one was âGodâs Planâ he had a million dollar budget for his music video rather than him buying fancy clothes, chains, and cars to show off he give back to the community that was a selfless act. Drake video for âGodâs Planâ was the most important thing he have ever done in his career. Drake started off the video giving cash to people in the streets, giving toys to kids, surprises a family with a brand new car, and gave a student a scholarship to college. In one scene, he takes a hotel maid on a shopping spree and pays the bill for a store full of people buying groceries. Drake also donates money to a high school, gives a student a full ride to college, and signs a check to a womenâs shelter. âDrake himself seems to be part of the gift, with shots of him sneaking up and bringing a fan to immediate tears presented just as lovingly as when he hands the same shocked fan a wad of moneyâ (Puckett 2018), meeting your favorite artist canât be compared to all the money in the world because they are someone you idolize. On my nephew six birthday we gathered some family members to buy food and refreshments to give out at church and at a elderly homes. Regular six year olds would rather receive money or toys on their birthdays but my nephew had everything you could possibly imagine. So showing him different values by giving back to people that donât really have much would make him have a giving mindset from young.
Another song from Drakeâs album Scorpion, that stood out to me was âNice For Whatâ, it was a song for women around the world no matter your size or color. Drakeâs âNice For Whatâ song included Lauryn Hill song Ex-Factor which represents a person that has a strong but unpredictable influence. Drake also included Big Freeda which shows a strong message because sheâs a transgender woman that experienced a lot of hatred. The video had strong and independent females like Olivia Wilde, Misty Copeland, Issa Rae, Jourdan Dunn, Tracee Ellis Ross, Tiffany Haddish, Yara Shahidi, Zoe Saldana, Letitia Wright, and Michelle Rodriguez. âNice For Whatâ supports many women moments like the #MeToo movement which is a moment against sexual harassment and assault. âSo for Drake to have not only produced a song about an unbothered woman doing her and living her best life, itâs a shocker, but a welcome oneâ (Alese 2018), it always takes one person to make a change in this case itâs Drake showing respect to females that they deserve. âWorkinâ hard, girl, everything paid for; First, last phone bill, car note, cable (Alese 2018),â showing womanâs work ethic by putting their responsibilities first. âThatâs a real one in your reflection, without a follow, without a mention.â showing you donât care about others opinions by having self appreciation. Especially in a generation where people go straight to social media like Instagram, Facebook, and Snapchat to get peopleâs attention.
Drake releasing âGodâs Planâ and âNice For Whatâ shows growth and change in the world that everyone needs to value what they have and treat women with the respect they deserve. It doesnât matter how small you contribute to world it all starts somewhere with you. On the other hand, many artists in this generation degrades females rather than lifting them up and putting them on top where they belong. All females around the world should be empowered, after all we all came from a strong and independent women that we admire and love. We need more leaders like Drake to spread the message of giving and equality.
Works Cited:
Alese, Whitney. âThe Deeper Meanings behind Drakeâs âNice For What.ââ Medium, Medium, 11 Apr. 2018, medium.com/@TheReclaimed/the-deeper-meanings-behind-drakes-nice-for-what-f97a5d979f21.
Puckett, Lily. â5 Religious Leaders Weigh in on Drakeâs Version of Godâs Plan.â The FADER, The FADER, 27 Feb. 2018, www.thefader.com/2018/02/23/drake-gods-plan-religion-leaders/amp.
Revision Two: Proposal
Revision Two
I plan on revising my unit three essay because I like the meaning of âchangeâ and I feel I could go deeper into the topic. I want to change my unit three essay into something I have never done before so I would be transitioning into a news article that informs and shows change that kids can make to help the world. Iâm trying to reach out to my generation (ages 18-25) Â in which we could all help in any way or form. I want my readers to see ways they could give back to their communities that wouldnât take much of their time and wouldnât cost much. At the end of my revision I want my audience to feel the sense of change I felt when I saw Godâs Plan by Drake. Godâs Plan helped me develop and grow my understanding that thereâs so much more to life than fancy cars, clothes, and jewelry.
Reading Skills by Jessica, Zevanya, & Deo
Unit 3
Can Drake Make a Difference?
Deonarine Karan
Professor Carrie Hall
English 1101
April 30, 2019
Did you ever give back to the community or donated for a good cause? If you were financially stable would you give back to the people in need? When I outgrew clothes that I canât wear anymore I would usually gather everyoneâs clothes that they donât wear and donate them to the less fortunate. When I was younger and didnât use to finish my food my mom would use to tell me kids in Africa would love to have what you have. At the time I didnât really know the meaning behind that statement but as time passed I see kids all around the world is not as fortunate as us and donât really have the opportunities that we take for granted. Many teenagers in this generation care more about materialistic things like name brand clothing and shoes rather than whatâs important in life which is happiness. I use to hate when my friends use the phrase âMoney canât buy happinessâ, because they would say if you have money you could buy anything in the world you want. But as I matured and got older itâs true you could buy anything in the world but you canât buy yourself happiness. I rather be happy than rich because money could take so far before you realize thereâs more in life than just money.
In Drakeâs album Scorpion, two songs stood out to me the first one was âGodâs Planâ he had a million dollar budget for his music video rather than him buying fancy clothes, chains, and cars to show off he give back to the community that was a selfless act. Drake video for âGodâs Planâ was the most important thing he have ever done in his career. Drake started off the video giving cash to people in the streets, giving toys to kids, surprises a family with a brand new car, and gave a student a scholarship to college. In one scene, he takes a hotel maid on a shopping spree and pays the bill for a store full of people buying groceries. Drake also donates money to a high school, gives a student a full ride to college, and signs a check to a womenâs shelter. âDrake himself seems to be part of the gift, with shots of him sneaking up and bringing a fan to immediate tears presented just as lovingly as when he hands the same shocked fan a wad of moneyâ (Puckett 2018), meeting your favorite artist canât be compared to all the money in the world because they are someone you idolize. On my nephew six birthday we gathered some family members to buy food and refreshments to give out at church and at a elderly homes. Regular six year olds would rather receive money or toys on their birthdays but my nephew had everything you could possibly imagine. So showing him different values by giving back to people that donât really have much would make him have a giving mindset from young.
Another song from Drakeâs album Scorpion, that stood out to me was âNice For Whatâ, it was a song for women around the world no matter your size or color. Drakeâs âNice For Whatâ song included Lauryn Hill song Ex-Factor which represents a person that has a strong but unpredictable influence. Drake also included Big Freeda which shows a strong message because sheâs a transgender woman that experienced a lot of hatred. The video had strong and independent females like Olivia Wilde, Misty Copeland, Issa Rae, Jourdan Dunn, Tracee Ellis Ross, Tiffany Haddish, Yara Shahidi, Zoe Saldana, Letitia Wright, and Michelle Rodriguez. âNice For Whatâ supports many women moments like the #MeToo movement which is a moment against sexual harassment and assault. âSo for Drake to have not only produced a song about an unbothered woman doing her and living her best life, itâs a shocker, but a welcome oneâ (Alese 2018), it always takes one person to make a change in this case itâs Drake showing respect to females that they deserve. âWorkinâ hard, girl, everything paid for; First, last phone bill, car note, cable (Alese 2018),â showing womanâs work ethic by putting their responsibilities first. âThatâs a real one in your reflection, without a follow, without a mention.â showing you donât care about others opinions by having self appreciation. Especially in a generation where people go straight to social media like Instagram, Facebook, and Snapchat to get peopleâs attention.
Drake releasing âGodâs Planâ and âNice For Whatâ shows growth and change in the world that everyone needs to value what they have and treat women with the respect they deserve. It doesnât matter how small you contribute to world it all starts somewhere with you. On the other hand, many artists in this generation degrades females rather than lifting them up and putting them on top where they belong. All females around the world should be empowered, after all we all came from a strong and independent women that we admire and love. We need more leaders like Drake to spread the message of giving and equality.
Works Cited:
Alese, Whitney. âThe Deeper Meanings behind Drakeâs âNice For What.ââ Medium, Medium, 11 Apr. 2018, medium.com/@TheReclaimed/the-deeper-meanings-behind-drakes-nice-for-what-f97a5d979f21.
Puckett, Lily. â5 Religious Leaders Weigh in on Drakeâs Version of Godâs Plan.â The FADER, The FADER, 27 Feb. 2018, www.thefader.com/2018/02/23/drake-gods-plan-religion-leaders/amp.
Unit 3: Rough Draft
Can Drake Make a Difference?
Deonarine Karan
Professor Carrie Hall
English 1101
April 12, 2019
              Did you ever give back to the community or donated for a good cause? If you were financially stable would you give back to the people in need? When I outgrew clothes that I canât wear anymore I would usually gather everyoneâs clothes that they donât wear and donate them to the less fortunate. When I was younger and didnât use to finish my food my mom would use to tell me kids in Africa would love to have what you have. At the time I didnât really know the meaning behind that statement but as time passed I see kids all around the world is not as fortunate as us and donât really have the opportunities that we take for granted. Many teenagers in this generation care more about materialistic things like name brand clothing and shoes rather than whatâs important in life which is happiness. I use to hate when my friends use the phrase âMoney canât buy happinessâ, because they would say if you have money you could buy anything in the world you want. But as I matured and got older itâs true you could buy anything in the world but you canât buy yourself happiness. I rather be happy than rich because money could take so far before you realize thereâs more in life than just money.
            In Drakeâs album Scorpion, two songs stood out to me the first one was âGodâs Planâ he had a million dollar budget for his music video rather than him buying fancy clothes, chains, and cars to show off he give back to the community that was a selfless act. Drake video for âGod’s Planâ was the most important thing he have ever done in his career. Drake started off the video giving cash to people in the streets, giving toys to kids, surprises a family with a brand new car, and gave a student a scholarship to college. In one scene, he takes a hotel maid on a shopping spree and pays the bill for a store full of people buying groceries. Drake also donates money to a high school, gives a student a full ride to college, and signs a check to a womenâs shelter. âDrake himself seems to be part of the gift, with shots of him sneaking up and bringing a fan to immediate tears presented just as lovingly as when he hands the same shocked fan a wad of moneyâ(Lily Puckett 2018), meeting your favorite artist canât be compared to all the money in the world because they are someone you idolize. On my nephew six birthday we gathered some family members to buy food and refreshments to give out at church and at a elderly homes. Regular six year olds would rather receive money or toys on their birthdays but my nephew had everything you could possibly imagine. So showing him different values by giving back to people that donât really have much would make him have a giving mindset from young.
            Another song from Drakeâs album Scorpion, that stood out to me was âNice For Whatâ, it was a song for women around the world no matter your size or color. Drakeâs âNice For Whatâ song included Lauryn Hill song Ex-Factor which represents a person that has a strong but unpredictable influence. Drake also included Big Freeda which shows a strong message because sheâs a transgender woman that experienced a lot of hatred. The video had strong and independent females like Olivia Wilde, Misty Copeland, Issa Rae, Jourdan Dunn, Tracee Ellis Ross, Tiffany Haddish, Yara Shahidi, Zoe Saldana, Letitia Wright, and Michelle Rodriguez. âNice For Whatâ supports many women moments like the #MeToo movement which is a moment against sexual harassment and assault. âSo for Drake to have not only produced a song about an unbothered woman doing her and living her best life, itâs a shocker, but a welcome oneâ (Whitney Alese 2018), it always takes one person to make a change in this case itâs Drake showing respect to females that they deserve. âWorkinâ hard, girl, everything paid for; First, last phone bill, car note, cable (Whitney Alese 2018),â showing womanâs work ethic by putting their responsibilities first. âThatâs a real one in your reflection, without a follow, without a mention.â showing you donât care about others opinions by having self appreciation. Especially in a generation where people go straight to social media like Instagram, Facebook, and Snapchat to get people’s attention.
            Drake releasing âGodâs Planâ and âNice For Whatâ shows growth and change in the world that everyone needs to value what they have and treat women with the respect they deserve. It doesnât matter how small you contribute to world it all starts somewhere with you. On the other hand, many artists in this generation degrades females rather than lifting them up and putting them on top where they belong. All females around the world should be empowered, after all we all came from a strong and independent women that we admire and love. We need more leaders like Drake to spread the message of giving and equality.
Citations:
Alese, Whitney. âThe Deeper Meanings behind Drake’s âNice For What.ââ Medium, Medium, 11 Apr. 2018, medium.com/@TheReclaimed/the-deeper-meanings-behind-drakes-nice-for-what-f97a5d979f21.
Puckett, Lily. â5 Religious Leaders Weigh in on Drake’s Version of God’s Plan.â The FADER, The FADER, 27 Feb. 2018, www.thefader.com/2018/02/23/drake-gods-plan-religion-leaders/amp.
Unit 3: Quote
             If you give back to the community should you look out for a reward? âOn Ebro in the Morning, DJ Peter Rosenberg called the video into question explicitly, arguing that Drake’s charity seemed to serve him a little too much, which didn’t line up with their shared tenets of Judaismâ, (Lily Puckett) which seems like Drake gave back to the community just to be in the spotlight. I disagree with DJ Peter Rosenberg because Drake could of easily spend the money on a fancy music video with expensive cars, clothes, and jewelry like every other rapper. But he wanted to spread joy and happiness to his fans by giving to people who donât really have that much. I think DJ Peter Rosenberg feels that way because rappers in this generation are prone to show off the diamonds in their chains, watches, and the grills in their mouth instead of spreading positivity and giving for a change. When people see someone they know giving back and doing something for the community that brings positivity they feel offended because they know thatâs the right thing to do but they waited  on someone else to make the first move. When Drake was ether taking people shopping or giving someone money for their college tuition you could see the sincerity in his eyes and the tears of joy in his fans. It doesnât matter the way you give back but it matters how you do it. For example, Drake meets everyone in person to give them the money in their hand with a big hug which shows his real character because he could of easily donated the money and be free of the hassle.
Citation:
https://www.google.com/amp/s/www.thefader.com/2018/02/23/drake-gods-plan-religion-leaders/amp
Unit Three: Rough Draft
Deonarine Karan
Professor Carrie Hall
English 1101
April 12, 2019
Can Drake Make a Difference?
              Did you ever give back to the community or donated for a good cause? If you were financially stable would you give back to the people in need? When I outgrew clothes that I canât wear anymore I would usually gather everyoneâs clothes that they donât wear and donate them to the less fortunate. When I was younger and I didnât use to finish my food my mom would use to tell me kids in Africa would love to have what you have. At the time I didnât really know the meaning behind that statement but as time passed I see kids all around the world that is less fortunate than us and donât really have the opportunities that we take for granted. Many teenagers in this generation care more about materialistic things like name brand clothing and shoes rather than whatâs important in life which is happiness. I use to hate when my friends use the phrase âMoney canât buy happinessâ, because they would say if you have money you could buy anything in the world that you want. But as I matured and got older itâs true you could buy anything in the world but you canât buy yourself happiness. I rather be happy than rich because money could take you so far before you realize thereâs more in life than just money.
            In Drakeâs album Scorpion, two songs stood out to me the first one was âGodâs Planâ he had a million dollar budget for his music video rather than him buying fancy clothes, chains, and cars to show off he give back to the community which was a selfless act. Drake video for âGod’s Planâ was the most important thing he have ever done in his career. Drake started off the video giving cash to people in the streets, giving toys to kids, surprise a family with a brand new car, and gave a student a scholarship to college. In one scene, he takes a hotel maid on a shopping spree and pays the bill for a store full of people buying groceries. Drake also donates money to a high school, gives a student a full ride to college, and signs a check to a womenâs shelter. âDrake himself seems to be part of the gift, with shots of him sneaking up and bringing a fan to immediate tears presented just as lovingly as when he hands the same shocked fan a wad of moneyâ(Lily Puckett 2018), meeting your favorite artist canât be compared to all the money in the world because they are someone you idolize. On my nephew six birthday we gathered some family members to buy food and refreshments to give out at church and at a elderly homes. Regular six year olds would rather receive money or toys on their birthdays but my nephew had everything you could possibly imagine. So showing him different values by giving back to people and the community you grew up in which would result in having a giving mindset from young.Â
            Another song from Drakeâs album Scorpion, that stood out to me was âNice For Whatâ, it was a song for women around the world no matter your size or color. Drakeâs âNice For Whatâ song included Lauryn Hill song Ex-Factor which represents a person that has a strong but unpredictable influence. Drake also included Big Freeda which shows a strong message because sheâs a transgender woman that experienced a lot of hatred. The video had strong and independent females like Olivia Wilde, Misty Copeland, Issa Rae, Jourdan Dunn, Tracee Ellis Ross, Tiffany Haddish, Yara Shahidi, Zoe Saldana, Letitia Wright, and Michelle Rodriguez. âNice For Whatâ supports many women moments like the #MeToo movement which is a movement against sexual harassment and assault. âSo for Drake to have not only produced a song about an unbothered woman doing her and living her best life, itâs a shocker, but a welcome oneâ (Whitney Alese 2018), it always takes one person to make a change in this case itâs Drake showing respect to females and what they deserve. âWorkinâ hard, girl, everything paid for; First, last phone bill, car note, cable (Whitney Alese 2018),â showing womanâs work ethic by putting their responsibilities first. âThatâs a real one in your reflection, without a follow, without a mention.â showing you donât care about others opinions by having self appreciation. Especially in a generation where people go straight to social media like Instagram, Facebook, and Snapchat to get people’s attention.
            Drake releasing âGodâs Planâ and âNice For Whatâ shows growth and change in the world that everyone needs to value and show how to have and treat a female with the respect they deserve. It doesnât matter how small you contribute to world it all starts somewhere with you. On the other hand, many artists in this generation degrades females rather than lifting them up and putting them on top where they belong. All females around the world should be empowered, after all we all came from a strong and independent women that we admire and love. We need more leaders like Drake to spread the message of giving and equality.
Citations:
Alese, Whitney. âThe Deeper Meanings behind Drake’s âNice For What.ââ Medium, Medium, 11 Apr. 2018, medium.com/@TheReclaimed/the-deeper-meanings-behind-drakes-nice-for-what-f97a5d979f21.
Puckett, Lily. â5 Religious Leaders Weigh in on Drake’s Version of God’s Plan.â The FADER, The FADER, 27 Feb. 2018, www.thefader.com/2018/02/23/drake-gods-plan-religion-leaders/amp.
Sonnyâs Blues by James Baldwin
In James Baldwinâs âSonnyâs Bluesâ, he shows how music is a distraction that takes away suffering, addiction, and feeling alone. In James Baldwinâs âSonnyâs Bluesâ, the passage that was relatable to me was on page 45, the second paragraph because a song to you could have a totally different meaning to someone else. Every song has a meaning but itâs up to you to find the one that you can relate to. âAnd even then, on the rare occasions when something opens within, and the music enters, what we mainly hear, or hear corroborated, are personal, private, vanishing evocationsâ, shows something that the musician is feeling that we canât because thereâs something they are feeling that we canât ever feel. âBut the man who creates the music is hearing something else, is dealing with the roar rising from the void and imposing order on it as it hits the airâ, many artists deal with pain through their music which heals a piece of them and their music is reaching out to others showing which shows them they are not alone. When Iâm feeling stressed out or just want a break from the world I put my headphones on and close my eyes like nothing is around me. Music is a art form that comes in different shapes and sizes no matter where your from we all listen to the same art. Music brings everyone together no matter your background or race.