Revision two proposal

I plan to revise my paper that we did for the unit 3 “Thank U, Next.” My original paper was a music review, where I reviewed the whole album and tried to convince people as to why they should listen to the album. For my revision, I plan to a video essay, where I analyze the music video to Ariana Grande’s song “Thank U, Next.” The music video has a lot of hidden messages and references that people might have not gotten when they first watched the video. With this, I plan to reach those who haven’t or who did watch the video but didn’t catch on. Some people may have thought that the video was a bit random and didn’t actually match what the song is actually talking about. But with this analytic video, it will be clear.