1) I think overall, you mentioned how my structure of this essay is different and that I don’t really need to say that certain scenes symbolize something. I think I worded it wrong but I guess I was trying to say what those scenes and colors meant to me in my point of view.
2) I was wondering what you meant by that I should attribute the Korean lyrics?
3) The feedbacks were actually helpful and I feel like it helped me understand better as to how my song/song lyrics should be like. When I writing the third paper I was aiming for a different structure and to not go all informative but a mix of everything. I’m just sort of struggling of making my revision at least 600 words. I do have a plan of including an interlude before the song so it sets the mood of what the song is going to be about.
