Revision Two
I plan on revising my unit three essay because I like the meaning of āchangeā and I feel I could go deeper into the topic. I want to change my unit three essay into something I have never done before so I would be transitioning into a news article that informs and shows change that kids can make to help the world. Iām trying to reach out to my generation (ages 18-25) Ā in which we could all help in any way or form. I want my readers to see ways they could give back to their communities that wouldnāt take much of their time and wouldnāt cost much. At the end of my revision I want my audience to feel the sense of change I felt when I saw Godās Plan by Drake. Godās Plan helped me develop and grow my understanding that thereās so much more to life than fancy cars, clothes, and jewelry.
