[Ting Chin]

1. Cite images on slides, try to use primary sources for images
2. Make bullet points on slides larger so audience can read them
3. More archival image research would have been beneficial
4. Don’t call a man a “dude.”
5. Instead of listing every fact you found, edit the facts you present to only the ones necessary to convey research
6. Would have liked to see the citations for the newspaper clippings on the slides
7. Presentation could have been better organized, it was difficult to follow your train of thought