English 1121 Journey

Positive

  1. He was able to think about his topic from the top of his head.
  2. He has a good sense of what his narrative essay is about and what he’s suppose to talk about to connect to the reader.

Negative

  1. He did not have a thesis, sub-topics, well written conclusion, etc. he did not meet the requirements.
  2. His narrative essay doesn’t have a clean transition throughout the whole essay.

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