ENG1141-E311 Intro to Creative Writing, SP2024

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  • Discussion 2: Line Breaks and Free Verse
  • #92668

    Cindy Espinoza
    Participant

    I’m not sure why the format got to messed up sorry everyone !

    She was ready

    Time changes

    After a long day

    Very dark, Feel

    The breeze

    All the lights

    Around

     

    She outshined

    All the lights

    After a long day

    She looked

    Ready

     

     

    #92669

    Cindy Espinoza
    Participant

    I’m not sure why the format got to messed up sorry everyone !

    She was ready

    Time changes

    After a long day

    Very dark, Feel

    The breeze

    All the lights

    Around

     

    She outshined

    All the lights

    After a long day

    She looked

    Ready

     

    #92670

    Oluu
    Participant

    Im sorry the formatting looks crazy guys! I tried my best to fix it up but it still looks crazy :(

    #92705

    Msdelacruz
    Participant

    Encompassing different spaces

    In our lives

    The emotions

    Were difficult

    To hide

     

    His presence

    Peaceful and refreshing

    The space

    Awakening fears of disconnecting

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    #92718

    ashley
    Participant

    I was super sad

    I couldn’t tell my mom about it

    I didn’t want her to ask questions

    or worry about me

    she later on noticed.

    #92732

    Melina Tlatelpa
    Participant

    <p dir=”ltr”>Her brain</p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Laying in a hospital bed </span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>The beeping lasted all night</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Doctors and nurses walking in and out of the room</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Crying trying to explain to grandpa what was going on</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Blood was detected in her brain</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Tears in his eyes</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>I hug him</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>”Everything is going to be okay with the medicine” I said.</span></p>
     

    #92733

    Melina Tlatelpa
    Participant

    Her Brain

     

    Laying in a hospital bed

    The machine was beeping all night

    The doctors and nurses walking in and out of the room

     

    Crying trying to explain to grandpa

    Blood was detected in her brain

    Tears in his eyes

    I hug him

    “Everything is going to be ok” I said

    #92744

    Kevin Chen
    Participant

    “A Special Time Indeed”

    Again,

    Seeded pristine ecstacy
    Commands innate artistic longevity.

    Thoughtless inclusions,
    Mindless execution,

    Inhibits nascent delight,
    Ensuing eventual demise.

    #92745

    Kevin Chen
    Participant

    For every mediocre piece,
    I am constantly reminded
    Of countless, fruitless attempts
    To achieve stellar satisfaction.

    All my pursuit has
    Left in its wake
    Were an insatiable longing
    And

    Pure,

    Perfect,

    Hatred.

    #92868

    ZhiYang Chong
    Participant

    Missing and Regret 

     

    Morning dawn, evening clouds, my thoughts always you.

    In every step ,every pause.

     

    Through spring’s blooms, winter snow, you’re all I wish to see.

    In awake and dreams .

     

    Moonlit nights, dusky clouds, my mind’s caught in your spell.

    In moving or still.

     

    Rain on blossoms, a solitude so deep, forgotten youth, missed chances.

    In memories we keep.

     

    #92874

    Naureen Asha
    Participant

    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Everything that</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>mattered to me,</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>felt to be a failure.</span><b id=”docs-internal-guid-abe43e98-7fff-b020-ca29-9e66bc775902″ style=”font-weight: normal;”></b></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>The dream</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>has turned into a</span></p>
     
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>“Disappointment”!</span></p>
    <span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”> </span>

     

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