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- Discussion 2: Line Breaks and Free Verse
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February 12, 2024 at 11:59 pm #92668
Cindy EspinozaParticipantIām not sure why the format got to messed up sorry everyone !
She was ready
Time changes
After a long day
Very dark, Feel
The breeze
All the lights
Around
She outshined
All the lights
After a long day
She looked
Ready
February 13, 2024 at 12:02 am #92669
Cindy EspinozaParticipantIām not sure why the format got to messed up sorry everyone !
She was ready
Time changes
After a long day
Very dark, Feel
The breeze
All the lights
Around
She outshined
All the lights
After a long day
She looked
Ready
February 13, 2024 at 12:10 am #92670
OluuParticipantIm sorry the formatting looks crazy guys! I tried my best to fix it up but it still looks crazy :(
February 13, 2024 at 2:31 pm #92705
MsdelacruzParticipantEncompassing different spaces
In our lives
The emotions
Were difficult
To hide
His presence
Peaceful and refreshing
The space
Awakening fears of disconnecting
- This reply was modified 9 months, 1 week ago by Msdelacruz.
February 13, 2024 at 6:44 pm #92718
ashleyParticipantI was super sad
I couldn’t tell my mom about it
I didn’t want her to ask questions
or worry about me
she later on noticed.
February 13, 2024 at 11:32 pm #92732
Melina TlatelpaParticipant<p dir=”ltr”>Her brain</p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Laying in a hospital bedĀ </span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>The beeping lasted all night</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Doctors and nurses walking in and out of the room</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Crying trying to explain to grandpaĀ what was going on</span></p>
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<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Blood was detected in her brain</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Tears in his eyes</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>I hug him</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 2.4; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>”Everything is going to be okay with the medicine” I said.</span></p>
February 13, 2024 at 11:36 pm #92733
Melina TlatelpaParticipantHer Brain
Laying in a hospital bed
The machine was beeping all night
The doctors and nurses walking in and out of the room
Crying trying to explain to grandpa
Blood was detected in her brain
Tears in his eyes
I hug him
“Everything is going to be ok” I said
February 14, 2024 at 7:30 pm #92744
Kevin ChenParticipant“A Special Time Indeed”
Again,
Seeded pristine ecstacy
Commands innate artistic longevity.Thoughtless inclusions,
Mindless execution,Inhibits nascent delight,
Ensuing eventual demise.February 14, 2024 at 7:41 pm #92745
Kevin ChenParticipantFor every mediocre piece,
I am constantly reminded
Of countless, fruitless attempts
To achieve stellar satisfaction.All my pursuit has
Left in its wake
Were an insatiable longing
AndPure,
Perfect,
Hatred.
February 22, 2024 at 1:53 am #92868
ZhiYang ChongParticipantMissing and RegretĀ
Morning dawn, evening clouds, my thoughts always you.
In every step ,every pause.
Through spring’s blooms, winter snow, you’re all I wish to see.
In awake and dreams .
Moonlit nights, dusky clouds, my mind’s caught in your spell.
In moving or still.
Rain on blossoms, a solitude so deep, forgotten youth, missed chances.
In memories we keep.
- This reply was modified 9 months ago by ZhiYang Chong.
February 22, 2024 at 11:44 am #92874
Naureen AshaParticipant<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Everything that</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>mattered to me,</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>felt to be a failure.</span><b id=”docs-internal-guid-abe43e98-7fff-b020-ca29-9e66bc775902″ style=”font-weight: normal;”></b></p>
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<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>The dream</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>has turned into a</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>āDisappointmentā!</span></p>
<span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Ā </span>
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