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- Discussion 2: Line Breaks and Free Verse
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February 7, 2024 at 5:26 pm #92472
Jennifer SearsParticipantSee the instructions for this discussion board under Homework on this post:
February 11, 2024 at 2:42 am #92605
Borys SolorzanoParticipantI remain
With both and neither
At the same time
Not stating my position
Attempting to end the conflict,
I found myself
In between
Fighting both
February 11, 2024 at 1:25 pm #92607
Jaqai CherryParticipantTitle: “Missing”
It was a long day
The night sky was clear
I get a call
Her voice was serious almost chilling
“Have you seen your father” she says
I remember saying something
Reassuring that he’s fine
Fast forward another week
I see my father and he’s ok.
February 11, 2024 at 1:54 pm #92609
kelly GParticipantWho am I ? by KellyG
Identifying who I was ,
I struggled with.
MY mom is known
to put GOD and the catholic church first.
I struggled to tell my mom,
gay, I am.
February 11, 2024 at 2:33 pm #92610
Angelica TellezParticipantHe might have
made all his effort
towards creating
a safe space
for the child
to come to him with anything,
but it can all be trivial.
This difference,
however small it might be,
can be the start of a divide
between them.February 11, 2024 at 4:04 pm #92615
Anallely RomeroParticipantTitle: that day
unfortunately
he had to work
that day
so hopefully
it would be
a good surprise
Or
would it?
would we be
a disturbance?
Or
would he
be glad?
- This reply was modified 9 months, 1 week ago by Anallely Romero.
February 11, 2024 at 10:29 pm #92626
angelliParticipantwe were talking
sitting on the couch
I just told them
I cried
it was ugly crying
so while everyone was talking
dishing out their problems
as Jenna ortega screamed in the background
- This reply was modified 9 months, 1 week ago by angelli.
February 12, 2024 at 1:02 pm #92630
Selinee HerreraParticipantBlinking red lights
Loud sirens
A knot in my throat
Thinking of ways
To tell them
Their daughter was damagedThey who had spent years
Creating and molding
Their perfect child
Still
Their daughter was damagedFebruary 12, 2024 at 4:09 pm #92636
FiloParticipantTitle: The Departure
I was sitting on my bed
In my seaside house,
And my breath started to sound labored.Moving
Not only meant
Leaving the people I loved,
But before that,
It meant telling them about my departure
And that was the scariest partFebruary 12, 2024 at 4:50 pm #92641
hopemreiserParticipantSorry, everyone. I had no idea the formatting would look like that!
<p style=”text-align: center;”>”tych”</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>And</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>where</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>does that</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>leave me?</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Now they</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>are two</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>and I</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>am</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>one.</p>
- This reply was modified 9 months, 1 week ago by hopemreiser.
February 12, 2024 at 4:52 pm #92642
hopemreiserParticipant“tych”
And
where
does that
leave me?
Now they
are two
and I
am
one.February 12, 2024 at 5:00 pm #92646
AlexsiaParticipantWe make plans
after saying goodbye
for the last time.
For you
do not want
to listen.
February 12, 2024 at 9:02 pm #92653
cgeorgesParticipantFunerals were never on my agenda
Was this something to be happy about?
Was this something to be grateful for?
Or did that mean the time was near soon?
I remember the day I got the call
The news as cold as the brisk air
“Grandma died”
Three syllables I never expected to respond to
Now I have a funeral on my agenda
They were never my cup of tea
But hey, there’s a first for everything
Love you, grandma
February 12, 2024 at 9:05 pm #92654
cgeorgesParticipantThere’s a First for Everything
Funerals were never on my agenda
Was this something to be happy about?
Was this something to be grateful for?
Or did that mean the time was near soon?
I remember the day I got the call
The news as cold as the brisk air
“Grandma died”
Three syllables I never expected to respond to
Now I have a funeral on my agenda
They were never my cup of tea
But hey, there’s a first for everything
Love you, grandma
February 12, 2024 at 11:46 pm #92665
OluuParticipantTitle: Comparison
Comparison by English definition means a consideration or estimate of similarities or dissimilarities between two things or people. To me it means a ‘killer of joy’ And to my mom it means a golden ticket to win an argument
It’s infuriating Eyes start to swell
I want to tell her “ mommy, I’m on my own path and I’m…” My words deteriorate as my throat swells with frustration Tears fallAnd suddenly I feel like I’m 5
“Why are you crying Seyi?” “ I JUST want what’s best for you”
“ I don’t want you to be distracted. THAT’S ALL”Her words although meant with the best intent The words taunt me “ YOU don’t get it” plays over and over in my head Now in her warm embrace, able to breath
Eyes dry
I say “ Mom I’m doing well for
Myself.
My path.
My Life. Don’t compare me to someone in which you only know 1/16 of their life just because you have the insider on mineWith her coming to understanding the gold then starts to rust.
- This reply was modified 9 months, 1 week ago by Oluu.
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