[Lauren hau]

What I enjoyed about this writing was the personal stories and facts about the writer because they introduce themselves and this gives the reader a feel for who they are. Though it seemed as though the writer didn’t organize his thoughts or make a point. This leaves the reader confused as to what exactly the essay is supposed to be about. The writer jumps from one topic to another without smooth transitions. The essay did not match the title and it seemed to be more about the writer rather than Zayn Malik following his path.