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Muhammad Abdullah

English 1121-D432

Professor Leigh Gold

Literacy Assignment

Essay #1

When you read a book, it’s like travelling to a distant world. You learn many new things while expanding your imagination. Unfortunately, I learned that the hard way. When I was in middle school, I didn’t think much of books. I thought books were boring and just for nerds. My shelves were filled with books but I never bothered to pick one up and spend the time to read it. I was too busy playing games on a computer or phone to notice how amazing reading books was. I also did not appreciate the fact that I was gifted with the skill of literacy while many others around the globe were illiterate and not so blessed. This all changed on the day my report card was delivered to my mother. I was failing in most of my akademik courses due to being preoccupied with technology. As my punishment, my mother grounded me and took all my electronics and only promised them back only if I improved my grades. My mother was aware of my distaste of reading so she had me read for an hour each day if I wanted to go play outside.

Thinking back to this, I appreciate my mother for doing this for me because it made me realize how amazing reading books can be. I started off my grounded days by reading J.K Rowling’s, “Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone”. I found the book so interesting that instead of reading for one hour a day I read for hours and hours. I was so taken in by the magical world of Harry Potter and enjoyed every single page of the book. It made me feel like I was actually there due to the imagery in the book. Some time passed and I started doing better in all my classes especially in english class. My vocabulary increased greatly and I actually felt intelligent for the first time, as funny as that may sound. My next report card was sent to my mother and it turned out that I was passing all my classes with high grades. As promised, my electronics were returned to me. As excited as I was to play games again, I did not spend much time on them anymore. I started going to the library more often and getting new books every two days. My mother helped me learn that books will increase your knowledge as well as make you more intelligent. They can also provide entertainment as much as an electronic device can.

Like I once was, I know that there are many people out there who do not enjoy reading, especially the youth. My advice is to give reading a chance. As much as you enjoy playing games on a screen you can enjoy reading a book as well. If things aren’t going so well in your life, reading books can be a way of escaping reality. I experienced this first hand. I wasn’t doing well in school and had all my electronics taken away from me but reading helped me solve both of these problems. You can start off by reading a page a day. It can even be a couple of lines from a book but you have to start somewhere. Gradually, start increasing the amount every day with the goal of completing the book in mind. Soon enough you will find yourself feeling more confident to tackle difficult texts as well as understanding complex ideas. Of course, you will not be able to do this if you do not appreciate reading. Just remember that there are many people in the world who are not able to read and that you are blessed and should take advantage of that.

With that being said, my motto is, “Literacy is a blessing so take advantage of it because many people are not as blessed as you”. If you do come across someone who is illiterate one day, try to teach them how to read and write or even teach them a couple of words. Reading has been in this world far longer than technology so it must be given more importance. You can even read on your phone or any electronic device but there is nothing that compares to the feeling of reading an actual book. Seventeen percent of the world can not read or write so we must appreciate our blessings and start reading books more often.

 

Muhammad Abdullah

English 1121- D432

Professor Leigh Gold

Writing Reflection Questions

Before class, I had an idea of where I stood in terms of writing capabilities. I feel like I have gotten better as a writer and learned to structure my paragraphs and transition between them smoothly. The most challenging writing experience I faced was choosing a genre topic for my genre project. First I wanted to do something relating to science fiction but then I changed it to phone reviews. I just couldn’t make up my mind. My strengths as a writer as I mentioned are structuring and transitioning between paragraphs as well as using different tones whether it be formal or informal. To improve my writing, I believe I need to work on brainstorming my ideas before actually writing an essay. Also I need to start adding more reliable quotes to back up my claims. I noticed my writing has improved in terms of vocabulary. The professor defining different words on the board has really helped with that. I found the genre project to be most useful in understanding writing because it allowed you to gather various sources and learn from all of them in different perspectives. I don’t necessarily have a specific type of genre I enjoy. I like reading anything that contains valuable knowledge and information.

Repurposing my genre helped me with my writing by giving me a different way to shape my writing to give it more appeal. My genre was phone reviews so for my step 5, I created my own phone review but had it turned into a parody. Reading can also impact your writing. The kind of reading you do impacts your writing greatly because you tend to implement what you read into what you write. For example, if you read something informative, you can display what you learned from that reading in your own writing. I believe that writing is a process. You can not become a good writer without practice just as you can not get a good job without a degree. You should approach writing with an intent to learn because there is always room for improvement. I believe writing is a way to express oneself. When you write, you are not bound by limitations and you can share your language and ideas freely. Writing can also be a way to preserve your legacy. None of us will live forever and when we do die, our writing will live on and people will remember us through it. 

Writing is important in my life because it is a way to express myself. Whether it be a speech, a class essay, or even a text message. I am expressing myself right now through this paper. In the future, I want my writing to improve and I want to use it to get good grades in all my future courses. Back in highschool, I wasn’t the best writer. I used to struggle to complete essays and my vocabulary wasn’t that great. I used to use very basic words repeatedly making me sound illegitimate. Now I have improved very much as a writer. Sometimes I look back at my high school essays and laugh thinking that it couldn’t be me who wrote them. All in all, this class has been a great learning experience for me and has helped me develop my motto regarding reading and writing: “Literacy is a blessing so take advantage of it because many people are not as blessed as you”.

 

Multimodal Project- Multimodal Project

Muhammad Abdullah- Genre Essay

Muhammad Abdullah

English 1121-D432

Dr. Leigh Gold

Genre- Phone Reviews

Essay #2

Everyone has a phone nowadays, whether it be an Apple iPhone, a Samsung, or even a Nokia. It is approximated that 52.7 percent of the world population owns a phone that can access the internet. Taking that into account, phone reviews are now more important than ever. Most people usually go ahead and purchase the newest phones only because they are “new” and have the “latest technology”. Well, that isn’t the case all the time. This is where Phone Reviews come in handy. Phone Reviews are important because they inform a person about a phone they are looking to buy. Phone Reviews go over certain aspects of a Phone such as battery life, appearance, hardware, software speeds, camera, durability, price, etc. Phone Reviews have been coming out for quite a while and have gained popularity when the first smartphones started releasing. Anyone can make a phone review but it isn’t very likely that many people will see it. Popular sites that publish phone reviews include, CNET, Phone Arena, The Verge, Digital Trends, and Tech Radar. One of the most popular Phone Reviewers is Linus Sebastian better known as LinusTechTips. He was born in Canada and has around 8 million subscribers on Youtube and is known to be honest and show no bias in his reviews. To make his reviews accurate and top notch, he uses the phone for personal use for a few weeks to a month to give the best possible review.

Phone reviews are typically targeted at consumers who want to learn more about a phone before actually purchasing it. Like any other expensive item, it is definitely important to learn all about the item itself before investing money. Most phone reviews start off by introducing whichever phone they are reviewing. They go over pros and cons and usually give it a rating out of 10. Also, most phone reviews have a section under the actual review which allows the customers and readers to share the opinion on the phone before or after purchasing. This is important because it gives the perspective of different people, allowing you to make the best decision you possibly can. Another important aspect that most phone reviews incorporate is the concept of comparing the phone to a previous phone or another popular phone. For example, to review the camera quality of the phone, the reviewer will usually put a side by side photograph taken by both phones to clearly show the difference in camera quality. This is important because say you are making an upgrade from an old version of an iPhone to a new one. You can see the difference in the quality of the photo by observing a side by side comparison.

One phone review in particular that I read was the iPhone X review by Rado Slavov. This review is featured on Phone Arena, a popular phone review website. Slavov starts the review off by comparing the iPhone X to previous iPhones, establishing the fact that the iPhone X has a new and improved model. With all the new improvements, the price will be high. Slavov then addresses the controversy surrounding the phone. Apple chose to remove the home button on the iPhone X and make the phone fully touch screen. Slavov states, “With the X, Apple is taking a lot of risks and introducing a lot of firsts”. That is certain because it is definitely a huge risk to remove the iconic home button that has been present throughout the generations of iPhones. Moving on, Slavov proceeds to talk about the design, specs and the camera of the iPhone X. Personally, this review was important for me because it convinced me to not purchase the iPhone X. Although the camera and speed of the X is exceptional, I would prefer my iPhone with a home button. This review is significant because it does not show a bias. The phone is introduced as is and the reader is only told about the details of the phone. The author does not try to persuade the reader to purchase it or not. The decision belongs to the consumer.The language that the author uses is an important factor in publishing phone reviews. The most common language that is used in most phone reviews is a formal tone. The formality of the reviews establishes the authenticity and legitimacy of the authors work. If this language isn’t used, the reader is likely to disregard the review due to thinking that the author does not know what he is talking about.

In conclusion, Phone Reviews are important nowadays since Phones are such a big part of society. Phone Reviews allow the reader to learn all the information about a phone that the brand does not share with them. Of course, the brand will always tell you the good side of the phone and never share the bad side with you. Since most phones are such a heavy investment this day in age, it is important that we get that best for what we pay.

Works Cited

– Slavov, Rado. “Apple IPhone X Review.” Phone Arena, PhoneArena, 8 Nov. 2017, www.phonearena.com/reviews/Apple-iPhone-X-Review_id4441.

– “Global Mobile Phone Internet User Penetration 2019 | Statistic.” Statista, www.statista.com/statistics/284202/mobile-phone-internet-user-penetration-worldwide/.

– “Linus Tech Tips (Linus Sebastian) Wife, Net Worth, Wiki, Height, Age.” Heightline, 8 May 2018, heightline.com/linus-tech-tips-linus-sebastian-wife/.

– Stein, Scott. “IPhone XR Review: The Best IPhone Value in Years.” CNET, 10 Nov. 2018, www.cnet.com/reviews/apple-iphone-xr-2018/.

– Seifert, Dan. “Samsung Galaxy S10 Plus Review: the Anti-IPhone.” The Verge, The Verge, 1 Mar. 2019, www.theverge.com/2019/3/1/18245446/samsung-galaxy-s10-plus-android-phone-review-price-specs-features.

– “Google’s Pixel 3 Is a Hair Away from Pocket-Sized Perfection.” Digital Trends, 11 Mar. 2019, www.digitaltrends.com/cell-phone-reviews/google-pixel-3-review/.

– Lumb, David. “Nokia 9 PureView Review.” TechRadar, TechRadar The Source for Tech Buying Advice, 1 May 2019, www.techradar.com/reviews/nokia-9-pureview.

– “IPhone 8 – Technical Specifications.” Apple, www.apple.com/iphone-8/specs/.

Step 5

Phone Review: Apple iPhone 8 Plus

I currently own an Apple iPhone 8 plus. It’s price begins at $699 for a 64gb model. The LED is 5-5 inches so it has a pretty large screen. The iphone 8 plus has a 12 megapixel camera and is also water resistant. The 12 megapixel camera can shoot very clear pictures and is also capable for live pictures, The phone also shoots 4k video making it a viable option to record high quality videos. The battery life on the iphone 8 plus is fairly decent. It can last you about 13 hours with internet use. Although this is an average battery life, the iphone 8 plus can charge up to 50% battery life in half an hour. This is impressive and very useful. The iPhone 8 plus has built in touch ID sensor that can recognize your fingerprint relatively quickly. One bad thing about the phone is that it does not have a conventional headphone jack. Only specific apple headphones can be connected used with the phone. Another con is that the whole phone is made of glass so it is really easy to crack the screen or camera. This can be solved with purchasing a durable phone case that can take impact. All in all, the Apple iPhone 8 Plus is a phone with different pros and cons. I presented them to you now it is your decision whether or not you would like to purchase it.