The most difficult part of writing this message was what to write. For a persuasive message I know I have to capture the readers attention in the introduction. I kept thinking over and over what can I write that would make the reader to keep reading. I felt the best part in my message was the information on what they are getting out of our intern. I informed them of skills and knowledge of City tech students in my field.

As I was writing I noticed I had issues who I was writing as. I became confuse about if I was a student writing to the company or Dr. Rita and I believe that showed up in my writing as well. This is what I feel I need to work mostly on.  So in my revised message you could be able to tell more if a student or Dr. Rita was writing.