Opener: Ali has a opener

Thesis Statement with 3 subtopic: Ali has a 3 thesis statement with 3 subtopics

3 quotes from poem for each subtopic: Ali doesn’t have 3 quote from the poem for each subtopic

Transitional/Word/Phrase: Ali has some transitional words

Grammar:  Ali has some grammar convention

Conclusion restate thesis: Ali didn’t restate his thesis statement in the conclusion.