Yongwei Liu
English 1121-D465
Assignment: seven point of peer on textual analyzation
Peer review: Jordan Clarke
Opener: follow the Author with the poem said and explanation the poem mean.
Thesis: it had that, need more sentence of your thesis.
3 subtopics: inverse of revolution.
Power.
Love with the use of setting and characters.
The third subtopic doesn’t mean is “true love”. You should follow your thesis.
Transitional phrases: No have it. Need add some.
Grammar: having the grammar problem, need to do more work.
Conclusions: when you doing the last paragraphs, you should follow the first paragraphs. Cannot same, but you can do similar.