Yongwei Liu

English 1121-D465

Assignment: seven point of peer on textual analyzation

Peer review: Jordan Clarke

Opener: follow the Author with the poem said and explanation the poem mean.

Thesis: it had that, need more sentence of your thesis.

3 subtopics: inverse of revolution.

Power.

Love with the use of setting and characters.

The third subtopic doesn’t mean is “true love”. You should follow your thesis.

Transitional phrases: No have it. Need add some.

Grammar: having the grammar problem, need to do more work.

Conclusions: when you doing the last paragraphs, you should follow the first paragraphs. Cannot same, but you can do similar.