Mario hall

Paragraph 1- Introduction
In my introduction I will give the reader an idea of what happened in the book. I will most likely just give the reader a brief summary of the more important events without giving away any crucial details. The introduction is also where I will introduce my thesis statement that I will prove through my body paragraphs. The thesis statement will be the driving force for my entire essay.

Paragraph 2 – First body paragraph
In this paragraph I will use my first example that I got from the book to support my thesis. I will state the quote and where I found it. I will then explain how my quote ties into my thesis. My quote will also explain what concept from our classes that I will incorporate in my essay.

Paragraph 3 – Second body paragraph
In this paragraph I will use my second example from the text to support my thesis. Once again I will state the quote and put where I found it. I will then explain how this example ties into the thesis. The quote I give here will also incorporate the concept that I chose from my first body paragraph.

Paragraph 4 – Third body paragraph
In this paragraph I will discuss the concepts that I chose from one of our secondary readings. The concept that I choose will only help strengthen my thesis statement. If possible I will try to pick two of the readings.

Paragraph 5 – Conclusion
For the conclusion I will state my closing arguments and make sure that I reiterate my main points.

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  1. Hi Mario, it looks like you haven’t written your outline yet. Here you simply have a description of what an outline should include. Please work on developing an argument for this essay and then structuring an outline to support the burdens of proof set up in your thesis. This essay should be making an argument, *your* argument. Imagine that your reader would disagree with your overall claim, and each paragraph should be devoted to convincing them of your claims using analysis of the text and logical argumentation. If you stay focused on this goal, it will help you move beyond summary to analysis.

    LW

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