So far my work is in progress for the instructional manual. I have some brainstormed ideas for how to play the violin. Such processes that I have included is what type of violin you should buy, what comes with the violin set and so on. Also will add to my manual how to play the music notes on the violin, how to hold it in a certain position, and even give an example of a song such as “Twinkle Twinkle Little Star” for beginners to understand the concept. As I put down these ideas I really think it will turn out as lengthy than I thought it would be. Overall, I’m excited in creating this manual with my knowledge in playing the violin, and can help others to play as well.

In my opinion, I think I need help in writing a persuasive summary or essay. In other words, I need improvement in my writing that actually makes sense. The introduction is what I need guidance to, My thesis statement needs improvement so that it can overall fit in with the body paragraph of my writing. I think in order for my writing to be good, I need to practice grammar issues, and learn from an individual that can assist me for the better of future knowledge in writing.

The three readings were very descriptive in creative writing. It gave me a visual of the concept behind the history of the Middle Ages. A lot of new perspectives while reading these three readings. Unlike the history books I learned in previous classes, the reading was persuasive enough to entertain me or a reader like myself. Gave me new concepts on how to better write whether in an essay. The metaphors in the readings especially gave particular meaning and supported the point on what the author is trying to say.