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Final ESSAY

Queenie Chau

ENG 2400

FINAL ESSAY

Empathy is the ability to feel another person’s pain and be able to place oneself into their shoes. The feelings of sympathy are present within empathy. However, there are also feelings such as guilt or shame from knowing the negative consequences of turning a blind eye. Redemption has many different perspectives. It is an act of restoring one self. However, redemption can be restored by oneself or by others, it is a term of open discussion. Empathy, honor, and redemption deal with decision making and feelings, which can be tied to ethics.

Within the Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe, the narrator explains his decision in killing the old man. The first signs that the narrator shows empathy is the quote, “I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him.” Although there is a chance it could be that the narrator was just preparing a marination before the finishing act, I believe that he did it out of empathy. The introduction of the story explains how the narrator actually loved the old man seeing as he was never wronged in any way by the man. The mixed feelings of compassion for the man along with the guilt of having planned a murder of an innocent leads me to believe that the narrator shows empathy in the last few days. My suspicions are further confirmed with this quote at a later part of the story, “I knew what the old man felt, and pitied him, although I chuckled at heart.”

The narrator follows through with the murder and proceeds to have no regrets while dismembering the corpse. When the three policemen arrive, he gives out the same calm composure, that is until the policeman overstayed their welcome. He has what we would call today anxiety. He starts hearing a heartbeat from under the floorboards and begins panicking. His thoughts raced until he blurted out his confession: “”Villains!” I shrieked, “dissemble no more! I admit the deed! –tear up the planks! here, here! –It is the beating of his hideous heart!”” As time passed, his guilty conscience overflowed, and therefore I believe he is seeking redemption by coming clean with his sins. The redemption he is seeking is from himself. The police officers never suspected of his crime, therefore he suppressed his wallowing self guilt until he couldn’t bear it. This ties to virtue ethics, where he had to take a stance on his own morals and come to a judgement himself.

Life of Pi showed the great inner battles that fought with morals and ethics. After Pi breaks his life long peace with animals, he apologizes. By showing empathy and grief towards the fish, it is in his subconscious defense to be convinced that it was for the greater good, his own survival. Therefore, he is trying to restore his own honor and redeem him, by himself. This ties to utilitarian ethics where the action he takes produces the most good, even though there are consequences.

 

EXTRA CREDIT: The shot represents  how Pi himself is the tiger and he is the reflection of Richard Parker. They are connected as one being.

Midterm Essay

Queenie Chau

Film Lit Midterm

Course 2400, Section 0552 (Prof. Scanlan)

October 2020

 

Rear Window & It Had to Be Murder FINAL DRAFT 

 

The film masterpiece “Rear Window” by the late film director Alfred Hitchcock is adored and presented by teachers across the nation. Hitchcock based it on Cornell Woolrich’s “It Had to Be Murder,” the short story obviously being impressive enough to influence a Hitchcock film and also be relevant for seventy years. Although “Rear Window” is supposed to be a parallel of the short story, Hitchcock created his rendition with his own touches to cater to his audience, thus there are similarities but also stark contrasts. Due to the personalized style but unchanged settings and overall plot, “Rear Window” is a traditional translation of “It Had to Be Murder.” Both plotlines star an observant man who spends his time watching neighbors through the window, which eventually leads him to suspecting one of murder. I will be analyzing Woolrich’s characters, settings, and plotline to Hitchcock’s execution in his film.

The start of both pieces involved the same setting of Jeffries looking out the window in a peeping tom fashion. The story explained his critique of his neighbors and fast stream of thoughts that changed from neighbor to neighbor. In the film, the viewer is given a perspective similar to his, the camera quickly focusing at each neighbor for him to analyze. “Rear Window” L.B. Jeffries had much to reveal such as his occupation, reasoning of his injury and isolation, and more of his outward personality. “It Had to Be Murder” Hal Jeffries’ name was barely revealed with his injury unknown until the end, and occupation kept a mystery. The protagonist is seen going through character development in the film as his distant attitude with his girlfriend gradually dissipated after she revealed her capabilities of her reliability. Lisa had a great impact on Jeffries’ growth and strategic thinking, whereas in the story, she was not even a character. The closest reflection of Lisa’s role from the film would be Sam,  Jeffries’ caretaker. Though both played part in aiding Jeffries’ missions, Sam did not give the fresh perspectives that Lisa provided Jeffries. Furthermore, L.B. Jeffries had a caretaker named Stella who along with Lisa, provided him a support system. Hal Jeffries worked on his own with Sam practically acting as his servant. This shows more eminent character growth within the film due to the influence of the women around him.

In the beginning, Cornell Woolrich wrote in great detail of Hal’s observations of the Thorwalds prior to any suspicion. This to me had shown foreshadowing of the message from the title. Because Hal did not spend as much time monitoring the other neighbors, it led me to believe that the Thorwalds held more significance than the other bordering people living in the building. On the other hand, Alfred Hitchcock directed the camera to pan around the subjects with ample amount of time for each. He took wide shots of each window to showcase the subject(s) inside their apartment. If the subjects walked across a larger area than the camera could capture, it would follow the subject’s movements and pan to wherever they went. It did not feel as though the camera, which was L.B. Jeffries’ point of view, spent too much time was spent on the Thorwalds, thus no suspicion was placed on them until further on. The distinct difference of bringing in the suspicion of Thorwald is clear between Woolrich and Hitchcock. However, similarly, when the build up of solid suspicion arose, both Jeffries jumped to the conclusion quickly, but doubtfully. 

The build up to the capture of the murderer Thorwald were both portrayed well for the reader and viewer to feel the suspense. In the film, Hitchcock provided purely diegetic sound. The sound of the telephone ringing, the frantic movements of Jeffries’, the footsteps of Thorwald approaching the doorway; they all contribute to the tension. Furthermore, the lighting in the scene was tremendously dark, this adds to the feeling of anxiety and danger. In the story it was described as, “Suddenly, death was somewhere inside the house here with me. And I couldn’t move, I couldn’t get up out of this chair.” The way Woolrich explained how Jeffries came to that realization gave me a clear grasp of the fearful situation, in which I believed Hitchcock portrayed very well in that scene. This further shows me how the rendition of “It Had to Be Murder” was traditioinally translated.

“Rear Window” and “It Had to Be Murder’s” masterminds behind both had represented the plot well. Jeffries was more quiet and conserved in the narrative, however it fits well with the text as the reader can see his thought process with his every action. Hitchcock took this version of Jeffries and applied character development so that he had opened up in the film. This provides an equally good plot since movies need more verbal attention and without his warming up, Jeffries would’ve left the viewer to wonder. Although it contrasts the running theme of film Jeffries becoming more communicative, the scene with Jeffries waiting for Thorwald only contained background audio. On the other hand, the text was filled with his racing fearful thoughts: “I proceeded to breathe adenoidally, like someone in heavy upright sleep.”  I believe Hitchcock translated this scene into film perfectly because even through the silence, Jeffries’ panic was captured loud and clear. Alfred Hitchcock encased Cornell Woolrich’s “It Had to Be Murder” perfectly through traditional translation. 

Essay One DRAFT

Queenie Chau
Film Lit Midterm
Course 2400, Section 0552 (Prof. Scanlan)
October 2020

Rear Window & It Had to Be Murder (FIRST DRAFT)

The film masterpiece “Rear Window” by Alfred Hitchcock is adored and presented by teachers across the nation. Hitchcock based it on Cornell Woolrich’s “It Had to Be Murder,” the short story obviously being impressive enough to influence a Hitchcock film and also be relevant for seventy years. Although “Rear Window” is supposed to be a parallel of the short story, Hitchcock created his rendition with his own touches to cater to his audience, thus there are similarities but also stark contrasts. Due to the personalized style but unchanged settings and overall plot, “Rear Window” is a traditional translation of “It Had to Be Murder.” I will be analyzing Woolrich’s characters, settings, and plotline to Hitchcock’s execution in his film.
The start of both pieces involved the same setting of Jeffries looking out the window in a peeping tom fashion. The story explained his critique of his neighbors and fast stream of thoughts that changed from neighbor to neighbor. In the film, the viewer is given a perspective similar to his, the camera quickly focusing at each neighbor for him to analyze. “Rear Window’s” L.B. Jeffries had much to reveal such as his occupation, reasoning of his injury and isolation, and more of his outward personality. “It Had to Be Murder” Hal Jeffries’ name was barely revealed with his injury unknown until the end and occupation kept a mystery. He, the protagonist, is seen going through character development in the film. His distant attitude with his girlfriend gradually dissipated as she revealed her capabilities of her reliability. Lisa had a great impact on Jeffries’ growth and strategic thinking, whereas in the story, she was not even a character. The closest reflection of Lisa’s role in the film would be Sam, Jeffries’ caretaker. Though both played part in aiding Jeffries’ missions, Sam did not give the fresh perspectives that Lisa provided Jeffries. Furthermore, L.B. Jeffries had a caretaker named Stella who along with Lisa, provided him a support system. Hal Jeffries worked on his own with Sam practically acting as his servant.
In the beginning, Cornell Woolrich wrote in great detail of Hal’s observations of the Thorwalds prior to any suspicion. This to me had shown foreshadowing of the message from the title. Because Hal did not spend as much time monitoring the other neighbors, it led me to believe that the Thorwalds held more significance than the other bordering people living in the building. On the other hand, Alfred Hitchcock directed the camera to pan around the subjects with ample amount of time for each. He took wide shots of each window to showcase the subject(s) inside their apartment. If the subjects walked across a larger area than the camera could capture, it would follow the subject’s movements and pan to wherever they went. It did not feel as though the camera, which was L.B. Jeffrires’ point of view, spent too much time was spent on the Thorwalds, thus no suspicion was placed on them until further on. The distinct difference of bringing in the suspicion of Thorwald is clear between Woolrich and Hitchcock. However, similarly, when the build up of solid suspicion arose, both Jeffries jumped to the conclusion quickly, but doubtfully.
The build up to the capture of the murderer Thorwald were both portrayed well for the reader and viewer to feel the suspense. In the film, Hitchcock provided purely diegetic sound. The sound of the telephone ringing, the frantic movements of Jeffries’, the footsteps of Thorwald approaching the doorway; they all contribute to the tension. Furthermore, the lighting in the scene was tremendously dark, this adds to the feeling of anxiety and danger. In the story it was described as, “Suddenly, death was somewhere inside the house here with me. And I couldn’t move, I couldn’t get up out of this chair.” The way Woolrich explained how Jeffries came to that realization gave me a clear grasp of the fearful situation, in which I believed Hitchcock portrayed very well in that scene. This further shows me how the rendition of “It Had to Be Murder” was traditioinally translated.
“Rear Window” and “It Had to Be Murder” are neither one better than the other, the masterminds behind both had represented the plot well. Jeffries was more quiet and conserved in the narrative, however it fits well with the text as the reader can see his thought process with his every action. Hitchcock took this version of Jeffries and applied character development so that he had opened up in the film. This provides an equally good plot since movies need more verbal attention and without his warming up, Jeffries would’ve left the viewer to wonder. Although it contrasts the running theme of film Jeffries becoming more communicative, the scene with Jeffries waiting for Thorwald only contained background audio. On the other hand, the text was filled with his racing fearful thoughts. I believe Hitchcock translated this scene into film perfectly because even through the silence, Jeffries’ panic was captured loud and clear. Alfred Hitchcock encased Cornell Woolrich’s “It Had to Be Murder” perfectly through traditional translation.

Coffeehouse #3

     One major difference between the written story and the film is the characters surrounding Jefferies. In the writing, he has a caretaker named Sam who would be his mobile accomplice. Within the film, he has two women in his life. One was a nurse named Stella and the other was his girlfriend Lisa. The film gives both women a generous amount of screen time in the beginning and also gives the viewer a better understanding of the protagonist’s personality in comparison to the reader. However, even with more visual cues provided, the writing allowed the reader to explore Jefferies’ critical thinking. Furthermore, it is known right away in the film as to why he is always looking out into the courtyard all day. He is seen with a cast on one leg and sitting in a wheelchair. It is also known of his occupation, which is photography. Within the writing, it was not known of what job he held and why he was wheelchair ridden. It was only briefly mentioned at the end when a doctor comes in and says that Jefferies could “take that cast off [your] leg now.”

     Minor differences within the written story and the film is that it seemed as if the neighbors each had their own story in the film. Each had their own close ups and follow ups and the attention that Jefferies gave them by the panning of the camera is apparent. The viewer’s point of view when Jefferies was looking out the window was wherever the camera shot. This gave the neighbors a larger role to the overall film whereas in the story, they were briefly mentioned and did not seem as important. In most of the short story, he had only regularly observed Thorwald. Another minor difference is that Jefferies seems to be more sociable in the film as he looks to both Stella and Lisa for their opinions and tells them details of his observations. Although Sam was involved in helping Jefferies, Sam was not looked towards for advice as much. There is one final difference to as what struck me as a similar quote was when Sam stated, “Anytime you hear one of them things, that’s a sign of death someplace close around.” To which Stella constantly claims she “smells trouble.” They both were the caretakers who foreshadowed the outcome of events through different wording.

Coffeehouse #2

I had been the manager for Ray’s Candy store for nearly a year. The outside has an old school new york look with it’s time showing all over the hardwood. The walls and storefront are painted bright green and a decent painting of Ray’s smiling face sits next to the store name. The small glass window for taking outside orders is locked open a few inches, letting a nice breeze come in.  Looking from the outside in, the white fluorescent lights in the store and white fairy lights strung about the windows look inviting. The bell jingles when the door is pushed open, and the smell of fried dough hits the nose. Right upon entry, there is only a small strip of standing space that would only fit three or four people laying down flat on the floor. Adjacent would be an equal in length blue countertop with metal lining the edges. The countertop is slanted so one must be careful when placing full drinks there. An obnoxious hot dog roller grill sits right smack in the middle of the counter, the sink being on it’s left but around two feet lower meaning workers have to bend to use it. Following the small strip of space and countertop, there is another even smaller strip of flooring followed by the back counter, where the bottom half of the wall is lined with mirrors and the top half bursting with color. The colors are from menu pictures and descriptions that were as old as a decade. They weren’t anything special, printed pieces of paper or hand drawn signs stating the prices of the best milkshakes, beignets, or fried oreos in the city. Open 24 hours a day, the shop owner Ray will be looking out the window and waving his hand, motioning at you to try out his delicious treats that he’s been serving for almost half a century.

Questions: Is Sam Jeffries’ caretaker? If he was only a mere caretaker why was he so inclined to do Jeffries every bidding that had nothing to do with his job requirement? What was Jeffries’ past so that Boyne took his word without doubt about an alleged murder?

Film-Lit Coffeehouse #1

This summer I had the opportunity to be apart of an amazing community of protestors for Black Lives Matter. It was a bold step for me since up until this June, the most I’ve done was sign a few petitions thought the years. After much research on police brutality against POC, specifically the black community, I felt a need to be apart of the impactful thousands of marchers. The personal stories and speeches were truly heartfelt and opened a deeper understanding for myself and my friends. With each protest I had attended, I researched more and more into statistics and studies. Without this world-wide movement, I would not be as knowledgable as I am today concerning the injustices and wrong criminalization that black americans face. I am glad I took the chance to participate in these protests as they will go down in history.

After reading both the “The Tell-Tale Heart” and “The Yellow Wallpaper,” I have grown to be more fond of Charlotte Perkins Gilman’s writing. Although “The Tell-Tale Heart’s” was enticing and easily digested, there was a possibility that the videos played during class helped my overall understanding. Trying to not let the prejudice sway my opinion, The Yellow Wallpaper was a more fulfilling piece. The constant change of the wallpapers description was very interesting. What gives this piece the win is the ultimate plot twist in the end, when the narrator had believed that she herself became the woman trapped in the wallpaper.Once the final paragraph is read, a reader can finally piece together the puzzle of all the underlying meanings. As her interest with the yellow wallpaper grew, her mental heath deteriorated. It seemed as though in the end she had placed herself in the imaginary woman’s shoes. I like this style of writing more as it seems more personable and leaves a reader looking for hidden messages and metaphors.