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Final Draft

 

Latefah Walker 

Professor Scanlan 

October 29th, 2020

English 2400-Film and Literature 

Midterm Final Draft 

“Rear Window” and “It had to be Murder”

The film “Rear Window” by Alfred Hitchcock created in 1954 is an adaption of the written work “It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich created in 1942, the depiction of the film is a traditional translation, based on Linda Cahir’s 3 definition of translation. The film and the written work both share the same basic plot line. A man by the name of Hal Jefferies who is suffering from some ailment is in his apartment and at night he peeps out his window and watches his neighbors. He is very observant which is how he later discovers that one of his neighbors Lars Thorwald has murdered his wife Mrs. Thorwald. It is now his mission to expose Thorwald for the murderer he is and bring justice to Mrs Thorwald. The plotline is the same but the details of the two adaptations, some small and others not so small has changed and that truly is what sets the film and the written work apart.  

The two adaptations have many similarities and differences, the similarities are not to be overlooked but the differences are what really sets the two works apart .  Starting off the two are very similar in that their is a murder committed by the same character Lars Thorwald and the victim is the same as well his wife Mrs. Thorwald. Another similarity is that Jefferies is suffering from an ailment that keeps him in his home and all he is left with is peeping on his neighbors as well as discovering that a murder has occurred. These similarities are the basic plotline and what makes the two works traditional translation. 

The work’s differences are very noticeable, the first big difference is Stella and Lisa, they’re new to the show, in the reading Stella was a man by the name of Sam and Lisa didn’t exist. Sam being a woman named Stella is hard to overlook and that changes the role of the caregiver from that portrayed in the reading. Lisa being included in the story changes it the most, it changes the feeling of Jefferies as well as major scenes. Jefferies is no longer some creepy old man that spies on his neighbors, that is sick, house ridden, lonely and has no visitors like the reading makes him out to be as shown on the first page “ Sure, I suppose it was a little bit like prying , could even have been mistaken for the fevered concentration of a Peeping Tom. That wasn’t my fault, that wasn’t the idea. The idea was, my movements were strictly limited just around this time.  I could  get from the bed, and from the window, and from the bed to the window  , and  that was all.” Instead the film makes him out to be someone still vivacious, perceptive, and not down for the count. The major scenes that Lisa changes was the note scene for one, in the reading the caregiver Sam is the one to sneak into the apartment of Thorwald and the one to deliver the note as well but in the film, Lisa, Jefferies love interest is the  one to deliver the note as well as the one to sneak into the apartment. The most major differences in that particular scene is when Lisa and Thorwald have their unexpected encounter and he nearly kills her, but the point I want to focus on specifically is how the director used lighting to show that something sinister is happening, when Lisa is confronted by Thorwald the light is on and they’re just talking there is no sign of danger yet, but when Lisa is about to be attacked and potentially killed the light turns off and it’s dark and there’s only shadows and the sound of Lisa screaming for help, but then the cops come to the rescue  the light turns on and Lisa is safe. That usage of lighting  reinforces the saying  that things go bump in the night, that only bad things happen when it’s dark. The lack of lighting gave it a sinister appeal. Not only was this scene excluded from the reading, the lighting of the scene sets it apart from the reading, it gives the scene a suspenseful and intense feeling. 

 Another difference is Jeffries whole career, in the reading Jefferies career is never mentioned but in the film he is a photographer. His career in the film played a major role in his investigation as well as his survival. The usage of his photography equipment is what assisted him through his investigation. In the film you see Jefferies looking through his lens to watch Thorwald and what he’s doing as well as gaining knowledge on what crimes and sinister things Thorwald is plotting. His equipment also saved his life when he really needed it. Towards the ending of the film when Thorwald finds out that Jefferies knows that he’s a killer, he shows up to Jefferies apartment and attacks him, the director uses a multitude of things to set the mood of the scene, such as lighting, close ups, and sound. The term that is to be focused on is sound,  diegetic sound to be exact, the sound of the lightbulbs, and the flash sounds. Jefferies has a pack of lightbulbs  and one of his equipment that holds the lightbulbs he uses it to defend himself. He implements his equipment in that when Thorwald shows up and is coming at him he puts  a lightbulb in and flashes the light to disorient Thorwald. The sound of the bulbs hitting the metal as Jefferies fumbles to put the bulbs in as well as the sound of the bulbs hitting the ground in the dark, is very suspenseful, it creates so much tension in the scene, you pray that he’s fast enough to get the job done and stay safe. His career played a major role in his survival. The difference in his career  in the fim and reading helped add a suspenseful addition to the film that the reading lacked. 

Lastly the usage of close ups is implemented a lot in the film, the scene in particular is the scene that was mentioned previously, which is when Thorwald comes to attack Jefferies. The director in that scene used a close up on Thorwald that carried a sinister vibe, it caused the audience to see Thorwald for the villain he truly is. The director used lighting and camera work in this scene, there was no lighting and the director zoomed in so close that you could only see Thorwald’s eyes. Like diegetic sound in the last difference that was made between the film and reading, the use of close up also adds a sense of suspense and tension that the reading lacks.  

In conclusion although the film and reading are a traditional translation, and that  means they are very similar the differences such as Lisa, and his career added an intensity to the film that the written work lacked. The work of this traditional translation proves that minor changes as well as visual representation truly makes a difference in the effect that a reading and film will have on its audience.  

 

 

First Draft (Midterm)

Latefah Walker 

Professor Scanlan 

October 22nd, 2020

English 2400- Film and Literature 

Midterm First-Draft 

“Rear Window” and “It had to be Murder”

The film “Rear Window” by Alfred Hitchcock created in 1954 is an adaption of the written work “It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich created in 1942, the depiction of the film is a traditional translation, based on Linda Cahir’s 3 definition of translation. The film and the written work both share the same basic plot line. A man by the name of Hal Jefferies who is suffering from some ailment is in his apartment and at night he peeps out his window and watches his neighbors. He is  very observant which is how he later discovers that one of his neighbors Lars Thorwald has murdered his wife Mrs. Thorwald. It is his mission now to expose the Thorwald for the murderer he is and bring justice to Mrs. Thorwald. The plotline is the same but the details of the two adaptations, some small and others not so small has changed and that truly is what sets the film and the written work apart.

The two adaptations have many similarities and differences, the similarities are not to be overlooked but the differences are what really sets the two works apart and makes it a traditional translation. Starting off the two are very similar in that their is a murder committed by the same character Lars Thorwald and the victim is the same aswell his wife Mrs. Thorwald. Another similarity is that Jefferies is suffering from an ailment that keeps him in his home and all he is left with is peeping on his neighbors. The differences are very noticeable, the first big difference is Stella and Lisa, they’re new to the show, in the reading Stella was a man by the name of Sam and Lisa didn’t exist. Another difference is the way that Jefferies investigated the murder, such as the note scene and his whole career playing a major role in his investigation as well as his survival. Lastly the sounds in the film and the lack of sound in the written work was a big difference for me, yes i know in literary works there is never sound and you go off of the author’s tone/mood but the two felt different to me because if the added sound in the film as well as the tone/mood that the characters portrayed. 

In conclusion the film and written work are very similar but the differences added an intensity to the film that the written work didn’t have and truly made the adaption of the two works a traditional translation. 

Literary term

Digetic sound and non- digetic sounds

Lightening 

Shots- close ups

 

 

 

CoffeeHouse #3

I noticed a few differences between the story and the film some were major and some were minor. One major difference I noticed was that Sam the caretaker wasn’t there, well not the way he was portrayed in the story. In the film “Sam” was a woman and older woman. I thought this was a major difference because in the story Sam assists jefferies in catching Thorwald for killing his wife, so i’m deducing that, that scene will either be cut from the movie or someone else would do it because I don’t think that the female caretaker will be as compliant as Sam. Another major difference is that Jefferies has a significant other, I say it’s a major difference because in the story they make him out to be an old, lonely man that has no one and all he does is stalk… I mean watch his neighbors but no in the film he has a girl, who keeps him entertained and I just thought it was major because in the story the vibe of Jefferies wasn’t the same as the movie I felt like it was 2 completely different people. Although I’m sure there are other major differences between the story and film, those are just the ones I noticed and thought were important to me. Moving on to the minor differences, one minor difference would be that Jefferies in the film worked as a photographer which would explain why he likes to watch people and why he is so observant and all the things the story mentioned. It’s different from the story because in the story they never mention his job. I say it’s minor because the story never mentioned his job so there isn’t much of a difference because you don’t know his job from the story. Another minor difference would be that in the story I thought that Jefferies was an old unattractive man, like senior citizen, like retiree all that but when I watched the film jefferies is not a senior citizen, he seems late 40s to early 50s and he’s attractive and seems to still be kicking it and doing his thing. I was just surprised at how he looked. 

Coffeehouse Post #2

A place I know really well, is probably every Barnes & Nobles I’ve ever been to but the  one I’ll mention is the one on Court St. It’s the one that has the most sentimental value to me. So when you first walk up to it there are two french doors and in the glass you can see another set of doors but in between those doors there are tables full of books, whichever new or popular books that are going on at the moment. So after you pass that and actually walk into the store there are books everywhere, on tables and shelves and stands, every literary person’s dream. The first floor I’ve never paid much attention to because my genre is not on the first floor, it’s on the second floor. So you go up the escalator and when you get off there are two sides one that is more kids related and the other is for teens and adults. My side is the teens and adult section more specifically the romance section. There are very big windows that show the outside as well as the store balcony. My section has 3 rows of romance teen books and each section has different sub genres. There are the paranormal/mystical books, then there’s the realistic romance books. Then there are the adult romance books that follow the same shelving order. Those rows are always secluded and there’s floor space on the left side to sit and read. I consider it my favorite place because I can spend literally 3 hours and have it feel like it was only 3 minutes. I love my Barnes & Nobles trip.

 

When reading “It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich i had some questions but the questions i still had after reading were, what happened to Jefferies because in the end they mentioned he was a  cast?, How old is Jeffries?, What was or is his profession because he has a good eye?, who was the woman that opened the trunk if Mrs. Thorwald was dead?

 

Film-Lit Coffeehouse post #1

The winter before this summer started me and my family had made travel plans to go to our country of origin Guyana, and celebrate me and my sisters bday, but due to the world pandemic that was put on hold. Instead for this summer I spent most of it hanging out with my family and had a small celebration for our bday. I also got into a new author, someone I’ve been introduce to before but wasn’t used to  her writing style so I stopped reading her books after the first book. Now I can positively say that I love her and she is one of my favorites. I guess I had to give it sometime and growth for me to full appreciate her work. Then the Covid cases began to drop and the public began to open up, so me and my sisters decided to do a small trip to Atlantic City, which was really fun and a breath of fresh air from everything that was occurring.

After reading the two stories “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allen Poe  and “The Yellow Wallpaper” by Charlotte Perkins Gilman I noticed some similarities such as, they were both dealing with mental illnesses. There was also differences in how they handled their conditions such as,  the guy from Edgar Allen Poe’s story killing the old man and the woman in the other story getting “help” from her family. So my choice would have to be the “The Tell-Tale Heart” because reading it was just so suspenseful I loved it because it brought so much excitement, it made me wanna finish reading it. The other book didn’t bring me much excitement, it felt too monotone, their wasnt  much happening or I felt like their wasn’t much happening. I now this will sound super weird and I know it was the premise of the book and the story needed it but I hate when books are super descriptive, it bores me and its almost like its forcing me to skip to get to the part where the story picks up and the action and drama is happening. I did give this book a chance because it wasn’t a personal reading, and did have some interesting thoughts  while reading I didn’t like how the family, especially her husband who supposedly loves her was so dismissive to her condition it felt so disheartening considering the outcomes that are possible when you have a mental illness and you are feeling unheard. I also wondered all in the beginning if the wallpaper was a representation of her and her mental illness. Don’t get me wrong this story isn’t a bad story it just isn’t my kind of story.