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Final Essay Exam

Alicia Bajana

English 2400

12/17/2020

The Redemption, Honor, and Empathy of Man

         ” Rear window” is a 1954 American mystery thriller film directed by Alfred Hitchcock and a film adaptation of “It had to be Murder”. Rear Window is a film based on a temporality disabled man named Jeff Jeffries who spies on his neighbors as his past time. On the other hand, “Life of Pi” is a 2012 adventure drama film directed by Ang Lee and a film adaptation of Yann Martel’s 2001 novel. The Life of Pi is a film based in India; a boy named Pi was moving to Canada with his family and zoo animals when a horrendous storm sank their ship, making him the only survivor on an emergency boat with a Bengal Tiger, Hyena, Zebra, and Chimpanzee. Both films introduce empathy, the ability to understand and share the feelings of another; Honor, adherence to what is right or to a conventional standard of conduct and lastly, and finally Redemption, the action of saving or being saved from sin, error, or evil.

            In “Life of Pi”, the main character, Pi, goes through so many challenges starting with the scene where he is on the emergency boat and rescued some animals on board. At that moment, Pi saw something floating but later realized it was Richard Parker, a Bengal Tiger. Pi’s first instinct was to push him away, but his guilt and morals would not let him. Therefore, Pi rescued Richard Parker and brought him on board. Richard Parker and Pi empathized with each other throughout the film, for example, when Richard Parker was seasick and Pi helped him feel better by giving him fresh water and hunting for fish even though Pi was vegetarian. Both Pi and Richard Parker realized they needed each other to stay alive. The empathy between the two was so strong, Pi broke his code of honor as a vegetarian and committing a killing just so Richard Parker can have something to eat due to the lack of food at sea. Pi is a vegetarian; vegetarians are people who don’t eat meat, and sometimes other animal products, especially for moral, religious, or health reasons. Therefore, when Pi knew that if he didn’t fish then they both would have starved to death. Even though Richard Parker was an animal, he understood that without Pi, he would not have survived at sea.

           In “Rear Window”, Jeff Jeffries was a photographer who used his skills to spy on neighbors as his pastime while he recovered from a broken leg. Even though he was invading people’s privacy, the spying leads to a criminal investigation which was Mrs. Thorwald’s death. The Thorwald’s were a couple who recently moved into the neighborhood. They were a quiet couple but rarely seen. This brought attention to Jeffries in many ways. Jeffries had sensed something was up when he stopped seeing Mrs. Thorwald. He knew that a woman in love would not go anywhere without her husband because of his experience with his love interest Lisa. Lisa was a crucial element to the investigation because she looked for hints that Jeffries looked over and also gave a women’s perspective. For example, Jeffries was looking at Thorwald’s apartment and saw he was packing up all of Mrs. Thorwald’s clothes. He also noticed that Mrs. Thorwald’s wedding ring was under his possession. Lisa’s woman intuition arose because a married woman always carries her ring on her finger. Lisa becomes more intrigued with the investigation that she risked her own life to get real proof of the murder. She also knew that the one way to spend more time with Jeffries was by helping him get more evidence about the investigation. Therefore, Lisa snuck into Mr. Thorward’s house and looked over his luggage to see what he was hiding without knowing she was putting her life at risk. Lisa did not realize Mr. Thorwald was on his way back to his apartment when she was scavenging over his belongings and discovered her. Jeffries did not want to put his loved ones at risk, because he was a guy of honor. His first instant was to find a distraction for Mr. Thorwald to derail from Lisa and make him go to him. However, he redeemed this feature of spying by catching the killer and bringing justice to Mrs. Thorwald.

          Both Pi and Jeffries are men of honor that would put others first before themselves. They both redeemed themselves during the story by saving someone else’s life before their own. Pi knew that Richard Parker would need someone to take care of him and feed him so he would look past his morals to keep Richard Parker safe and sound. Pi felt hurt when Richard Parker left and didn’t look back, but he knew deep down that Richard Parker was alive because of him. Even though Richard Parker did not verbally express his appreciation, Pi could feel the gratitude coming from Richard Parker. On the other hand, Jeffries felt guilty for putting Lisa in danger, that he put his life in danger instead when he answered the phone call without knowing that it was Mr. Thorwald, the killer. Jeffries knew that moment he could lose Lisa and that is something he never wants.

In conclusion, the films Life of Pi and Rear Window displayed acts of empathy, redemption, and honor. This could be seen through the actions of the characters  Pi, Richard Parker, and Jeffries and Lisa. Pi empathized with Richard Parker in the act of keeping him safe and alive while at sea. Jeffries redemption for his sinful spying was by catching the killer. These pieces of film are a great example of what honor, empathy, and redemption are.

Final Midterm Essay

Alicia Bajana

English 2400

October 20, 2020

“It Had to Be Murder” vs Rear Window

 

“It Had to Be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich (1942) is a suspenseful and mysterious story about a man named Hal Jeffries, a temporarily disabled man, who spies on his neighbors as his past time but becomes involved in a murder investigation. Rear Window is the film adaptation of “It Had to Be Murder”. “It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich (1942) vs. Alfred Hitchcock’s Rear Window (1954) is a Traditional Translation because the text and the movie maintained the plot intact as well as the secondary characters that were important since they took part in the investigation. Lastly, the killer maintained the same in the reading as well as the film. Both works have similarities and differences that change the reader’s perspective and gives a new feel and appreciation to the short story.

One similarity is the murder of Mrs. Thorwald. This is the main plot of the story which puts intensity in the text and the film “The thought-message that sparked from the synchronization was: He’s done something to her!” (Woolrich). Like the movie, there was pitch silence while Jeffries just finished arguing with Lisa and 2 minutes later, the scream of a woman and shattered glass pops in. (Rear Window).  One difference is the accomplices of Jeffries in the investigation. In the text, Sam is portrayed as a single mid-age man with no family and comes around to take care of Jeffries. Unlike the film, they portray 2 accomplices which are Lisa and Stella. Lisa is the love interest of Jeffries which develops into a relationship towards the course of the investigation. Stella is the other accomplice but also has a close bond with Jeffries as a mother figure due to her age and her ways of taking care of Jeffries like a son. This similarity is important between the text and film because it is the developer of the story. In the text, the reader is able to feel the build-up of the suspense when Jeffries sends Mr. Thorwald the letter and Jeffries is able to see how his reaction proved his hypothesis about Mrs. Thorwald death (“Now here’s what I want you to do, and I want you to be slick about it. You take this, go in that building 525, climb the stairs to the fourth-floor rear, and ease it under the door. You’re fast, at least you used to be. Let’s see if you’re fast enough to keep from being caught at it. Then when you get safely down again, give the outside doorbell a little poke, to attract attention.”) “ It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich. In the film, the viewer is able to see and feel the suspense building up through camera angles, the diegetic sounds of the surroundings, and the focal point of Mr. Thorwald’s face when reading the letter. The scene started with silence while Jeffries was writing the note to Thorwald and then the diegetic sounds of Jazz and background sound incorporated the scene giving a hint of a thriller while Lisa was walking to Thorward’s apartment to push the note under his door. Then, the camera angles focusing straight at the face of Throward while he reads the letter builds up the questioning of the viewer (Rear Window).

The second similarity is the temporary disability of Jeffries that brought him to spy on his neighbors and later on be a key point in the discovery of Mrs. Thorwald body “The idea was, my movements were strictly limited just around this time. I could get from the window to the bed, and from the bed to the window, and that was all” (Woolrich).

The second difference is the neighborhood layout. This similarity is extremely important to the reader and view because it is the reason as to how the whole story happens. It’s due to his inability to walk that tracked him into spying on his neighbors and discovering the horrifying truth about a killing. The difference important because for the reader it’s an imagery effect when the reader is imagining how everything looks as if they were Jeffries. In the text, the layout is described differently with more distance between each building and super spacious but, in the film, Jeffries can see straight into Thorwald’s entire apartment. All the apartment buildings are facing each other like a box with a multitude of people leaving in each apartment. The view not only sees the layout but is able to compare it to the real lifestyle of a New Yorker.

The third similarity is Jeffries’s friend detective, Boyne, who helps Jeffries in the whole investigation. The third difference is the profession of Jeffries. In the text, he never mentioned his work or who he worked for but in the film, he shows and expresses his profession as a Photographer. This similarity was crucial in the text and film because it put all the pieces of the puzzle together and gave the plot meaning. Therefore, the differences were just as crucial to the film by giving a new feel to the scene. This new feeling of terror from Jeffries to the quick thinking raised the bar on the ending scenes. Jeffries not only used his photography tools to spy on Thorwald and also gather evidence but also used them to save his life at the ending scene when Thorwald came after him to kill him. This scene was suspenseful and terrifying due to the use of darkness, silence, focal points on Thorwald’s eyes, and camera angles when Jeffries dropped from his window.

The main theme of this story is death and love which are two opposite feelings for the reader and viewer to take in. In the text, the theme of death is showed from the beginning to the end including symbols like the cricket indicating the death of someone. While everything unfolded the reader was able to feel a constant emotion throughout the story. However, the changes in the film incorporated a second emotion and theme which was love. Love became the beginning and the ending emotions of the film but Death was intensified in the middle like the plot. This is due to the inserting of Jeffries’s love interest- Lisa at the beginning of the film to the middle where she was part of the investigation and risked her life to get evidence for Jeffries to the end when they become a couple and Lisa takes care of him.

In conclusion, while the film is traditional and follows the short story faithfully; there are important differences and liberties that the film takes that is not part of the short story, which includes; changes in characters, added characters, and gender changes, and changes in lifestyles. These differences stand out in the film and change the short story in different ways. The text and film have taught me how important it is for the producer to stay true to the text because the minimal adjustment can change the whole feeling and narrative of the story. Lastly, the lesson I learned from the text/film is to be aware of my surroundings because the enemy can be closer than you think and we don’t know who can be watching.

Midterm essay First Draft

Alicia Bajana

English 2400

October 20, 2020

“It Had to Be Murder” vs Rear Window

 

“It Had to Be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich (1942) is a suspenseful and mysterious story about a man named Hal Jeffries, a temporarily disabled man, who spies on his neighbors as his past time but becomes involved in a murder investigation. Rear Window is the film adaptation of “It Had to Be Murder”. “It had to be Murder” by Cornell Woolrich (1942) vs. Alfred Hitchcock’s Rear Window (1954) is a Traditional Translation between the text and the film. Both works have similarities and differences that change the readers’ perspective and gives a new feel and appreciation to the short story.

One similarity is the murder of Mrs. Thorwald. This is the main plot of the story which puts intensity in the text and the film.  One difference is the accomplices of Jeffries in the investigation. In the text, he is portrayed as a single mid-age man with no family and comes around to take care of Jeffries. Unlike the film, they portray 2 accomplices which are Lisa and Stella. Lisa is the love interest of Jeffries which develops into a relationship towards the course of the investigation. Stella is the other accomplice but also has a close bond with Jeffries as a mother figure due to her age and her ways of taking care of Jeffries like a son. This similarity is important between the text and film because it is the core of the story. In the text, the reader is able to feel the build-up of the suspense when Jeffries sends Mr. Thorwald the letter and Jeffries is able to see how his reaction proved his hypothesis about Mrs. Thorwald’s death. In the film, the viewer is able to see and feel the suspense building up through camera angles, the diegetic sounds of the surroundings, and the focal point of Mr. Thorwald’s face when reading the letter.

The second similarity is the temporary disability of Jeffries that brought him to spy on his neighbors and later on be a key point in the discovery of Mrs. Thorwald’s body. The second difference is the neighborhood layout. This similarity is extremely important to the reader and view because it is the reason as to how the whole story happens. It’s due to his inability to walk that tracked him into spying on his neighbors and discovering the horrifying truth about a killing. The difference important because for the reader it’s an imagery effect when the reader is imagining how everything looks as if they were Jeffries. In the text, the layout is described differently with more distance between each building and super spacious but, in the film, Jeffries can see straight into Thorwald’s entire apartment. All the apartment buildings are facing each other like a box with a multitude of people leaving in each apartment. The view not only sees the layout but is able to compare it to the real lifestyle of a New Yorker.

The third similarity is Jeffries’s friend detective, Boyne, who helps Jeffries in the whole investigation. The third difference is the profession of Jeffries. In the text, he never mentioned his work or who he worked for but in the film, he shows and expresses his profession as a Photographer. This similarity was crucial in the text and film because it put all the pieces of the puzzle together and gave the plot meaning. Therefore, the differences were just as crucial to the film by giving a new feel to the scene. This new feeling of terror from Jeffries to the quick thinking raised the bar on the ending scenes. Jeffries not only used his photography tools to spy on Thorwald and also gather evidence but also used them to save his life at the ending scene when Thorwald came after him to kill him. This scene was suspenseful and terrifying due to the use of darkness, silence, focal points on Thorwald’s eyes, and camera angles when Jeffries dropped from his window.

In conclusion, while the film is traditional and follows the short story faithfully; there are important differences and liberties that the film takes that is not part of the short story, which includes; changes in characters, added characters, and gender changes, and changes in lifestyles. These differences stand out in the film and change the short story in different ways. The text and film have taught me how important it is for the producer to stay true to the text because the minimal adjustment can change the whole feeling and narrative of the story. Lastly, the lesson I learned from the text/film is to be aware of my surroundings because the enemy can be closer than you think and we don’t know who can be watching.

Coffeehouse #3

The first major difference between the written story from the film is that Sam is a young man who was Jeffries’s accomplice but in the film, it is an old lady who just comes to take his temperature and clean around the house. She also has a really close relationship with Jeffries more like a grandson and grandmother relationship. She advised him about Lisa and how he should get marry or confirm his relationship with her.  The second major difference is Jeffries’s love interest makes an appearance and is part of several major scenes in the film but in the written story, Lisa was never mentioned nor referred to at any point. At the beginning of the film, Lisa has plans to do a romantic date for Jeffries since he can’t mobilize much. Jeffries’s interaction with Lisa is somewhat dry because he doesn’t show much affection towards her. He just keeps her around because she helps him and because everyone else is telling him she is a good catch. The relationship between the two will become stronger and they will be closer.

One minor difference between the written story from the film is that Jeffries is a Photographer. In the written story, his description of things gave the reader hints and assumptions that he maybe something from a detective to maybe a private investigator. The second difference is the neighbor’s descriptions. In the film, as per Jeffries’s description, there is The Torso girl which is a young ballerina dancer. Ms. Lonely Hearts is a lady who lives by herself and was so lonely that death was her friend. The Newlyweds are in the honeymoon phase and one that no one will ever forget. Ms. Hearing Aid is an artist of very odd and strange art. In the written story, Jeffries mentions a couple with two teen kids and A lady with a child and that was all he mentioned about his neighbors before the major event.

Coffeehouse #2

The one place I can describe greatly is the old apartment I used to live on when I first came to this country. It was a fifth story building, brick colored with the fire escape stairs poking out from the front windows of the building. The building was in between to other cream colored buildings with the same fire escape feature. There in a big glass door with a lock which makes the entrance of the building and to the right, there is an intercom with buttons and numbers next to it indicating the bell from each apartment. Once you go in, there are mailbox slots in the walls, 10 on each side totaling 20 apartments. Afterwards, there is a mini stair of 4 steps which leads to another glass door. This door is unlocked and when you open it, it will lead you to a long narrow hallway. Midway through the hallway, there is one apartment on each side. The apartment doors are all burgundy with gold numbers painted on indicating apartment # 1-20. On the end of the halfway, you will find two apartments next to each other and on the left side of the apartment, there is a stair going down of 3 steps which lead to the Emergency Door Exit. Above those 3 steps is the major stair leading up to the 2nd floor. This stair is located right above the Emergency stairs and left side from the apartments. This staircase is 10-12 steps long which goes up to every floor in the building. Each floor has four apartments; two apartments facing each other horizontally. The stairs went up until it reached the top of the building.

This apartment building has been my home for over 15 years and it is located in Astoria, two avenues down from Steinway, the most commercial Avenue in Astoria. The people and the environment is so quiet and peaceful.

 

Some questions I still have are, who was taking the place of Mrs. Thorwald on the farmland when they went to interrogate her about the trunk? What happened to Mr. Jeffries after Boyne found out that it was true his suspicious? Did he become a hidden spy or detective? What happened to Mr. Jeffries that left him immobile? What was the conviction of Mr. Thorwald for killing and cementing his wife’s body?

Film-Lit Coffeehouse Assignment #1

This summer due to COVID-19 I couldn’t do any of the traveling I had planned but one fun thing was that I got to spend more time with my family. We barbecue more and just had fun all together. We celebrated my cousin graduation from high school, my friend getting a promotion and my niece’s birthday. Another celebration was that I got a new job which helps me to get closer to my dreams of being a nurse one day. I made and keep making amazing memories with my loved ones especially with my nieces since they stayed with us for a month. I never knew how funny and mature they were until now.  The oldest which is 10 years old always calls me out on things when I try to make them eat their vegetables or soups. The younger is 8 years old and she is super hyper. She makes me feel old sometimes because she is non-stop! I try to keep up with her but my body can’t. I am definitely looking forward to  my Greece/ Italy trip next year and maybe a birthday trip to Cancun. If only COVID-19 would either be controlled or cured.

The two stories were full of suspense and curiosity. In the short story “The Tell-Tale Heart”,  the ending was predictable and very minimal in detail. In just 3 pages, the author was able to build suspense but not as scary I thought. It made me laugh at some points because it just did not make sense. There were a lot of questions unanswered .“The Yellow Wallpaper” on the other hand was filled with metaphors and lots of description. The tone of voice made it super creepy and very intense. The way she would describe herself, her husband and everything around her was just super scary.  I personally liked “The Yellow Wallpaper” because it is more realistic as to what people might go through when mental illness is present. Even though the story was long, it really attracted me and made me believe that this story was based on a true story.  For sure I would pick “The Yellow Wallpaper” over ” The Tell-Tale Heart any day because it made me want to continue reading.