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Inquiry Based Argument & Research

Research as Discovery – Disrupting the Norm?

I take an interest-driven, curiosity-based approach to research instruction. My own research focus is on student interest as a driving mechanism of deep learning. Curiosity is the catalyzing drive.

Within the context of our Module topic, we begin by reading various source material (in a variety of genres) meant to augment understanding of our topic and to highlight a variety of perspectives. Then my students, from a place of curiosity, home in on a subtopic of interest, one which sparked particular questions in the reading annotation process. Students then undertake research to unravel some of those questions. They document in blog posts their interest, curiosity and questions, and the exploration for potential answers. The paper itself, as produced, is more about an advancement toward understanding, highlights the catalyzing text, the questions produced and why that information matters to the student. And then the student moves toward an articulation of a viewpoint based upon balancing the evidence. I think the most important part of that paper is what comes after the research, the student’s speculation of what how information unearthed creates valuable understanding, or perhaps, even more questions. Essai in French means “attempt” or “to try”. I think perhaps we have become so caught up in producing definitive answers (as cultivated in our own professional inquiries) that we have lost sight of the value of research which expands discourse and collaborative inquiry – the accent being more on generating authentic questions of value than on producing expected answers.

I think the hardest part of teaching research is helping students understand the value of their own critical questioning and how to activate that (often dormant) trait – to let their minds unravel their questions, target valuable inquiry, and to effectively pursue deeper understanding.

That being said, if you contrast what Graff and Kynard seem to assert about the disruption of traditional, deeply entrenched, research genre expressions, and then look at what we as researchers are expected to adhere to – the rigidity of our forms and vernacular, a divergence seems apparent. Afterall, it was drilled into us as grad students what constitutes research and research presentation. Academic writing in many colleges, especially Tier 1 schools (an elitist term, I know, yet set apart) the most revered form of academic writing, remains the traditional research paper, at least in exclusive Discourse Communities. The authority of our evidence is always scrutinized. On the other hand, a focus on self-evaluation, other than to consider classroom practices, is corralled to the memoir, or narrative essay. But to be published, we have our rules, don’t we, at least for the most part?

So, what do we teach our students? “Here is how stuffy academics write? But you may want to avoid that and stay true to yourself?” Or, do we say, everything depends on context and audience? What matters is providing deep critical insight, Or should we be looking to disrupt the most prevalent academic forms in which we immerse ourselves, as form of necessary revolt against an outdated template? Would we even be ‘allowed to’ – long enough to be heard and taken seriously?

Thinking with Takayoshi and Selfe about Multimodal Teaching

I think multimodal pedagogies are extremely valuable in our technophilic society. But I also think we have to keep in mind that students’ technological prowess or access to technology resources may either exceed or be vastly less than we might guess. Students are fluent in texting platforms and social media platforms, but I (re)learned while teaching remotely earlier in the pandemic that they don’t always know how to enable sharing or editing access in a Google doc, for instance, or that getting students set up on Open Lab can be an ordeal. (I now use Blackboard for my classes simply because students have default accounts on the platform, and I’m reluctant to bring additional platforms into my in-person teaching after semesters teaching remotely using combinations of Zoom, Open Lab, Blackboard, and Google Docs.)

While I myself have some abilities in word processing and data management platforms, I don’t feel well suited to teaching the use of platforms beyond the library’s research databases and word-processing software–much though I try to encourage students to create work in other platforms if they have outside knowledge. I have to admit, though, that I feel stymied by instances like a student last semester who made a video about skateboarding but I think his friend who helped film did most of the editing (the friend owned the camera). But maybe this is fine? This article’s suggestion that teachers hesitant about multimodal writing could let students choose modalities for their written work rather than teaching students how to use those modalities was encouraging to me, though–that I can definitely do.

Recently, I’ve been thinking about developing an assignment (maybe a version of 1121’s Unit 2 or 1101’s Units 2 and 3) where students research the neighborhood where they live or their family history (or maybe the neighborhood where they were born? but that could make site visits harder). I think it would be really cool to incorporate multimodality in such a project–urging students to photograph and film neighborhood fixtures, local denizens, record audio or video of interviews, film what they see as they walk down the block. In their tech surveys this semester, all my students (or at least those who completed the survey…) said they have smartphones, so they could film on their phones to keep the need for material resources down.

On “correct English” and “proper grammar”

I want to start off by saying I am a big fan of Bad Ideas About Writing, and in fact I use some of its essays in my classes. That being said, I had some issues about the presentation of ideas in these two essays for two separate reasons. In the first, about “correct English” I still struggle with the idea that this is the entrenched viewpoint in composition classrooms, at least urban ones. So, I suppose it would be important to know where the author bases her perspective. The article, for me, had the air of an Illuminati expose, without enough attention to context and various Discourse Communities. I also found it intensely ironic that an author could be advocating for a deconstruction of “white middle class” rhetoric, while advocating for her position in “white middle class” rhetoric. Ultimately, I do believe in exposing our students to a variety of discourse structures, recognizing full well that our students come to us with their own firmly entrenched discourse literacies which have value and should be acknowledged, cultivated, and integrated into rhetorical analysis.

In the second article, I felt that the concept of teaching grammar, again, has to do with the purpose of teaching grammar. I tend to focus more on the generation of ideas, as teaching grammar independently of contextual application is problematic. I also find that the more rules introduced tends to stifle expression. Again, I had a head scratching moment as the author obviously learned grammatical construction for rhetorical consistency, and I wonder what that said about her own experience, especially considering her own attention to grammar and syntax.

Both articles beg a return to the driving question related to our composition class practice – what is our purpose in providing instruction in writing? I think the current trend, unless one is living an isolated existence, is to help students communicate, either academically or across genres. I think we do a disservice to our students in academic settings, if we do not expose them to academic writing and its conventions, while recognizing that such is contextual. I think further the trend is to expose students to a variety of multiliteracies while our own students expand our own understanding of expression.

Research as Unending Conversation and as Process

When I teach research I tend to approach it both conceptually and practically, thinking through the latter as a way to anchor the former (since, as we’ve seen, students typically haven’t been introduced to the reasoning–the *philosophy*, if that isn’t too grandiose–behind research as a human endeavor, and instead treat it as yet another series of academic box-ticking exercises). I find that analogies with basic but universally meaningful activities work well. I’ll invoke, for example, conversation: “Imagine that you’ve just arrived at a party. The room is crowded, and you can’t say for sure how long people have been there, or whom you’re likely to meet. Everyone’s already formed their little conversational groups, with their drinks held in front of them and their elbows out, attention directed away from you. Your job is to find a conversation that interests you, gracefully enter it, and make a contribution that will somehow, however slightly, change its direction. When you leave later that evening, the party will continue indefinitely, but that single conversation will have been forever altered–just a bit–by your unique contribution.”

I find that this works well even at the outset of a course in explaining low-stakes assignments such as discussion posts, and that it then lends itself to reuse as we build toward longer, research-paper-style projects. Students all naturally understand what makes for a good conversation. They know that someone who simply parroted what another speaker had said or who expressed blanket disagreement without offering justification wouldn’t be considered a “good” conversational partner; they know that nuance and originality (not to mention some attention to rhetoric) are expected. When we move from concepts to specific assignments I like to break capital-R Research into at least four subsidiary “moments,” or cognitive moves. The first involves identifying a gap (we talk in 1101 about “curiosity” in this respect): where are the holes in our existing knowledge? Where’s the edge of the map? This is where intuition and even a sense of play can be important: I ask students to think about what they’re noticing, and why; to be sensitive to wrinkles and points of friction; to attend to hunches. The second step involves framing a specific, neatly bounded research question, to which I always attach at least three qualifications. A good question must be precise, practicable, and provocative. Our third step is the “methodology” discussion: where are you going next, what are you going to do, and how are you going to do it? Lastly, and once a nice big messy pile of information has been gathered, we ask ourselves about the best form (genre) in which to present our “new” knowledge. I explain that the classic undergraduate research paper is a very good genre (a very good form for its purposes), that its popularity is justified, but that it isn’t by any stretch the *only* way to present new knowledge.

At its best, this addresses the two principal shortcomings I’ve spotted in research-oriented courses: 1) students aren’t conceptualizing research in productive ways (or at all; this is the “why are we doing this and what’s the point” question); and, 2) students are hobbled by passivity (it’s been trained into them) and need to be prodded to take small, concrete steps consistently until they discover their own motivations.

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Several years ago, I attended a John Jay English Dept-sponsored event, at which J. Elizabeth Clark, an English professor at LaGuardia CC and fellow CUNY rhet/comp traveler, gave a wonderful presentation called “Digital Todays, Digital Tomorrows” at John Jay College. She discussed her passion for scuba diving and then compared the history of diving to education, specifically regarding evolving/changing modalities in educational technologies, composition, and research. She was pointedly critical of the teaching modes and methods prevalent in much– perhaps most– writing instruction today.
Clark began by sharing images of scuba diving equipment from previous decades, and emphasized technological advances in scuba diving equipment, and how these advances had dramatically transformed diving activities. She explained, for example, how by the 1970s, pressure gauges, buoyancy control devices, and single hose regulators had vastly improved and functioned much better, and had became the norm, along with other advances such as dive computers in the 1980s. While, of course, diving gear from the early 1900s would certainly still work, Clark insisted, rightly so, that she is not inclined to use that gear for diving. In fact, the history of scuba diving is incredibly interesting, and of course, along with each technological advancement, new methods of teaching and dive training have also been developed and used. Click here if you have a moment: History of scuba diving
This is not to say that diving (or research) is an utterly altered experience from its ancient beginnings. Current technological advances in scuba diving, though, have nonetheless changed much of how scuba divers operate nowadays. To imagine otherwise would be inconceivable. When she started to talk about research projects in her writing classes, Clark asked us why so many writing teachers and writing classrooms insist on discarding new technologies in ways that divers, for example, never would. It would be like diving into the depths in 2022 with 1914 equipment. It was a compelling argument, and reminded me of the many ways that education generally, and research methodologies in research assignments and the teaching of writing in particular, can rely on outmoded ways of operating, and can be much slower to change than, say scuba diving culture.
Multimedia, mash-up, genre-bending student research projects, if rigorously undertaken and clearly assigned, can be generative learning experiences for students. As long as we instructors set clear goals by creating concrete rubrics and have a clear vision of our primary learning objectives, it will make it much easier when it comes to providing feedback and assessing student work. Obviously, communicating our teaching goals to our students is of paramount importance. Distributing our rubric with the assignment is a good way to achieve this. By offering specific guidelines about the skills we want them to learn we will insure that students are clear about the assignment.

Teaching Research as a Step by Step Methodology

For me, the thought of writing a research paper triggers the emotional response of great excitement with an equal part of anxiety. Research allows my brain to probe and roam but this must be very guided process. Without proper guidance, you can easily get lost, lose the focus of your topic, or because of *too* much curiosity and what I find to be even worse in some instances, over-researching. This happens most when you are 30 chrome tabs into your research topic and realize that you have inadvertently began researching enough for a short novel instead of the 10 page research paper initially assigned. I sometimes see my students doing this when they update me on a biweekly basis to let me know that they’ve changed their topic for the final time this time and it can be difficult to try to curb their enthusiasm. However, they eventually understand that this is just part of a greater process that must begin with small steps that are built into the course.

I find that my students think in very binary terms of black and white when it comes to research but I try to share with them the sentiment that research can also be a tool of self-expression. Their topics are representative of their interests and perspectives which of course is how you find “yourself” in what you write. This can be difficult to convey to a classroom online and even in person. I can assure them that I can help them research a topic that they are interested in, I am met with looks of skepticism for quite some time until they get started and finally trust that I want them to write about their perspectives in conjunction with and on equal ground with the scholars in their field of interest. In this way, I hope they begin to view research as a project they should spend some time with. That is to say, this class does not encourage all-nighter, one-shot large assignments. This should in fact take some time since they are discovering intricate details about a specific topic while hopefully learning a little bit about themselves.

Some thoughts on research papers.

Teaching a research paper requires walking a fine line. The assignment must be challenging but if it is too difficult one runs the risk of losing half the class. Every class has a handful of motivated students who will succeed with a mere directing to academic sources. The challenge is to stimulate the rest of the class.
Just starting out on assignment 2 of the Model Class, I love the series of questions to get the students started: What I know a lot about is: What I’m passionate about is :What I start Googling when I have nothing better to do is :I would go crazy if someone told me I had to stop doing: What makes me really angry is: In the past I hadn’t personalized the research paper to this extent and look forward to seeing some success following these prompts. I like the idea of not disparaging google, but using it as a springboard.

So many students have a preconceived notion that the research paper is just quotes and explanations, not really an extension of their own writing. They have difficulty adding their own point of view. Perhaps having their topic be near to their heart, will allow them to add their style to the paper.

Research Paper Approaches

My approach to guiding students through producing Research Papers depends entirely on the class. When teaching first-year writing, I know that every stage of the process is going to be new to them, so I do a lot of scaffolding, assigning a lot of low-stakes writing and exercises (especially on quoting, summarizing, and citing ) leading up to the RP assignment. This gets students into the flow of engaging with sources, and learning how to explore a  theme via different genres. The exercises are always based on what we are all reading as a class. For example, I will take one paragraph of an assigned reading and turn that into a citation exercise where students need to respond to that plus an assigned video on the same topic and cite both, in a response, including their own reflections at the end.

I usually include as readings a combination of different genres of writing: fiction, journalism, essay, poetry – all touching on a content theme that the whole class is exploring. It might be the changing digital information landscape, or issues confronting out communities, like policing, education, or public health. Or it might be ideas we are exploring through fiction and poetry. I also like to include some video resources, as well, and sometimes visual art, depending on the class theme. As sources, the students draw from a combination of in-class sources and outside sources, all tied to a topic that they develop themselves, related to the ideas we are discussing in class. I find that by the time we get to the Research Paper,  they have already practiced a lot with the in-class sources in many rhetorical situations – discussion board posts, class discussion, personal reflections, and citation exercises. This helps them to understand the expectations for the paper. They use their own scaffolding work as a model for how to work with the sources they find themselves. This usually works well.

I try to use the Research Paper as an opportunity to for the students to explore different writing and information genres more in depth. It’s a way of developing their own responses to and ideas about what others are saying about the issues that are important to them.

Research as a Conversation

To me, research means identifying, evaluating, and joining the voices in a conversation. Students should learn what is meant by “discourse,” why a discourse is important, how it functions, and the specific avenues through which a given discipline’s discourse is conducted. This includes not only scholarly journals and research databases but the discourse as represented in lay journals and newspapers, colloquially on college campuses and in the non-academic world, in their own lives, and surrounding the real-world events that scholarly discourse attempts to analyze and interpret.

To this end, I try to empower my students to two specific ends. First, to understand that they get to decide which voices are relevant to them and, second, that by doing so they augment their own abilities to be part of a conversation and be heard. We don’t simply converse with authoritative voices in our work because it makes people more likely to believe our writing is worthwhile; we do it because engaging in the conversation makes us more authoritative, qualified, and interesting thinkers and writers.

Getting students to want to be part of a conversation is difficult, and I think the common thread in the two readings today is that it’s important to show students that there is a discourse surrounding whatever they are most interested in. I try to emphasize that research is simply a purpose-driven process of trying to learn more about what you naturally want to know more about anyway. Allowing students to find the greater import or value of things they’ve been conditioned to see as unimportant is a path toward greater investment in the research process. Guiding students past what they might consider frivolous to the deeper human meaning of recreational activites, artistic communities, etc., can be rewarding for them and show them that academic work is best seen as an extension of who they are, not some alien imposition from insular academics who want to transform them into professors. I find that the most direct way to do this is something along the lines of the “finding your beat” exercise questions in the 1121 syllabus. I’ve had a lot of success asking students what they naturally think about, care about, Google when they’re bored, and so on.

Difficulties of Teaching Research on a Campus with Minimal Wifi and Other Thoughts on Research Papers

In my own writing as an academic, “research papers” have often relied on secondary sources. I love the idea of having students do research on their own lives and have recently encouraged them to mine their text message exchanges or record conversations to find words or phrases to explore in writing for 1121’s Unit 1 “Portrait of a Word” assignment–but I could do well to follow my own advice. My 1121 students who focused on autobiographical material were much less likely to plagiarize (although I think the few who did mostly did so without realizing they were committing academic dishonesty). I would love more prompts like that in 1121 Unit 1 that help students reframe their own experiences as generative material to think and write about. While my dissertation research focused primarily on poetry and memoirs and critical sources about my literary sources, I have occasionally done research for more creative autobiographical writing by asking family members to fill in details for stories I don’t fully remember or wasn’t originally there for. Maybe this could be an assignment in an 1121-style and/or -level class: Profile an older relative; gather information by interviewing family members, freewriting your own memories, and reading through any written records you can find.

In my classrooms, I rely a lot on librarians’ workshops and annotated bibliographies to explain research. I’m interested in primary sources from students’ lives and sources from library databases much more than I am in what students find in the first page of Google results. But I don’t necessarily do a great job at this–my 1101 students last semester had a pretty hard time using library databases to find sources for their annotated bibliographies, despite the intense scaffolding of my course. This semester, I was pleased to schedule library workshops for my 1121 students in person, but when one section’s librarian was quite late and my students voted that another library workday to find sources with assistance would be helpful, the librarians told me that there were no available days my sections could use what seems to be the library’s one computer lab during our normal class meetings before my students’ research assignment is due. I’m a bit frustrated with that–it feels hard to teach online research, through the library’s databases or otherwise, given the extremely unreliable internet on campus. (I emailed NYCCT’s VPs about this last week, and was told that the wifi signal wouldn’t be amplified until next fall–so frustrating!)