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outline for narrative essay

Natalie Clyne

Outline

Personal Narrative

 

1.Opener-

(A) – there are many struggles people face when migrating to a foreign country, such as culture acclamation, food and water

(B)- Thesis – some struggles may include, adjusting to the environment,        language and creating better future.

 

  1. Body
  2. A) Subtopic-Adjusting to the environment
  • The different seasons

 

  1. B) Subtopic- Language
  • Simple Communication

 

  1. C) Subtopic-Better Future
  • More career opportunities

 

Conclusions- Migrating to a foreign country have many struggles which include language, better future and adjusting to the environment.

 

peer review personal narrative

Natalie Clyne

Peer review

Personal Narrative

 

  1. the struggles of migrating from a different country.
  2. Yes thesis includes three subtopics
  3. Yes all three paragraph address a subtopic
  4. Could have include more transitional words
  5. Each paragraph contain a topic sentence
  6. Yes includes a good written conclusion.

the cave of forgotten dreams

Natalie Clyne

Summary

 

The Cave of Forgotten Dreams” by Werner Herzog

 

A group of people discovered a cave in Southern France. Beyond the natural beauty of the cave itself, it was renowned for its pristine cave paintings, the oldest known in the world dated at up to 32,000 years old. There is limited and restricted access to the cave to retain the pristine nature of the findings.

10 points of debate

Natalie Clyne

10 points of debate

Migrating to a Different Country

Cons

1.Stressful time-Life in a new country comes with its own set of challenges

2.Away from family and friends-distance can take a toll on relationships

3.financial burden- moving can be an expensive affair

4.involves a certain amount of risk- uprooting yourself from your current job in order to move abroad is a risky proposition

5.language-understanding other people language and accent.

6.culture-how easy would it be for people to adapt to new customs?

7.employment- jobs require working documents

8.medical issues-would I able to qualify for medical insurance?

  1. amenities – it’s hard when you are used to a certain standard of living.
  2. lifestyle -it is frustration when you have to change just to adapt to a different lifestyle.

outline for argumentative essay

Natalie Clyne

Eng 1101-D362

Peer Review

Argumentative Essay

 

 

1.Opener- workers rights has been an ongoing issue for many years.

 

  1. Thesis statement-Yes

 

3.Yes 3 paragraphs had its subtopics

 

  1. Transitional words- no and needs to include it

 

5.Topic sentence- Yes

 

6.General Edits- grammar needs to improve and too much space in between

 

  1. Conclusion- Yes

 

 

Narrative essay

Natalie Clyne

Eng 1101-D362

Prof: Guthrie

Essay 1

Revised

03-02-2015

 

 

 

The struggles of Migrating From a Different Country.

 

 

There are many struggles people face when migrating to a foreign country, such as culture acclamation, food and weather. Too often people base there opinion of a foreign country or books they’ve read or images they see just like in the movie “Coming to America”, not realizing that those images are often just the good part of America. That being said, there are many struggles that people may face when they actually migrate to a foreign country expecting what they have seen in movies and realizing that the reality it is not quite all that is was cracked up to be. Some struggles may include, adjusting to the environment, language and creating better future.

One of the struggle people face is adjusting to the environment, the different seasons dealing with the cold especially if you’re migrating from a Caribbean country like Trinidad that is always hot. It was very difficult for me at first cause I would cry every time I had to go to school because it is freezing cold especially waiting for the bus was one of my worst experience. Sometimes I would ask my parents if I can stay home they would tell me no, I hated the winter, also dealing with the different languages.

Another struggle is language, Language for me also was difficult even though I speak only English. Sometimes when I travel people tend to have a problem with my accent or I would not understand theirs. Even making simple communication like ordering food at a restaurant or asking for directions can be a difficult task if you can not speak the proper language. Is like being force to be some where, where you do not want to be. I didn’t understand the meaning of bullying until I experience it myself. As an immigrant I was bullied and laughed at. Everyone made fun of my accent when I spoke which made me feel insecure and uncomfortable of my environment. But there are many opportunities also.

Also another struggle is better future, even though its good but its also a struggle starting all over again. It is very hard to start over knowing you have completed your education back home but also it is good because some of the stuff that is taught here, were not taught in Trinidad. There are more career opportunities that people are able to choose from, such as furthering your education in masters, phd and doctorate and it does not matter of the age or disabilities.

In conclusion Migrating to a foreign country have many struggles which include adjusting to the environment, language and create a better future, which is a difficult situation. Is learning to become a whole new different person entirely, learning to adopt to the different changes even though we do not want to but we have to accept it.

summary free schools

Natalie Clyne

03-04-15

summary

 

Free Schools

 

The essay entitled “Free Schools by De Witt Clinton is about the importance of education among everybody. Clinton believes everyone should be educated and schooling should be free so the people of all wealth could be educated. The author blames the government of being selfish and evil towards unprivileged people. Clinton feels education will help develop a less ignorant government.

summary the money

Natalie Clyne

03-02-15

summary

 

“The Money” by Junot Diaz

 

The essay entitled “The Money “ by Junot Diaz is about robbery. They went on vacation to return to see their house has been robbed. Junot’s mother practically collapsed on herself. Junot remember that he had told his friends about where the money was, so he realized that his friends stole the money. Junot learned his lesson to choose his friends wisely

 

 

 

summary the Brooklyn bridge

Natalie Clyne

03-04-15

summary

 

 

The Brooklyn Bridge

 

The essay entitled “The Brooklyn Bridge” by Phillp Lopate is about how unique and beautiful the Brooklyn Bridge means to him. He tells us how many poets feel about the bridge like Alan Trachtenberg, who says “ For many Americans in 1883, Brooklyn Bridge proved to the nation to be healed of its wound of civil war and on its true course: the peaceful mastery of nature”. Lopate reminds us that the bridge is free plus its connection to Brooklyn to Manhattan and it is universal.

 

 

 

summary five minds for the future

Natalie Clyne

03-18-15

summary

 

 

 

 

Five Minds for the Future

 

 

Five minds for the Future by Howard Garner outline specific abilities that will be sought and cultivated by leaders which include disciplinary mind, synthesizing mind, creating mind, respectful mind, and ethical mind. Garner draws from a wealth diverse examples to illuminate these ideas, designed to inspire lifelong learning and also to provide valuable insights for those charged with training and developing organization leaders.