Natalie Clyne

Eng 1101

Peer Review

Konstantin Solokhin

1. Konstanin has an opener.
2. He has thesis with three subtopics.
3. He starts every paragraph with a subtopic.
4. Citation is right, but he needs to work on it more.
5. Grammar needs to be corrected.
6. He could add more transitional words.
7. He uses quotes from four resources.