Natalie Clyne

Eng 1101-D362

Peer Review

Argumentative Essay

1.Opener- workers rights has been an ongoing issue for many years.

2. Thesis statement-Yes

3.Yes 3 paragraphs had its subtopics

4. Transitional words- no and needs to include it

5.Topic sentence- Yes

6.General Edits- grammar needs to improve and too much space in between

7. Conclusion- Yes