Jaouad Mouao

1. He gave a good opener with a quote from Dylan Thomas
2. His thesis was clear and the topics are lost love, memories and death.
3. In his subtopics, he is discussing the two poems “Annabel Lee” and “The Raven.
4. You can tell where the paragraphs change topics, but could have been separated more.
5. His transitions were good. Could use better transitional phrases.
6. Most grammar and conventions were good, minor punctuation issues. Quotations were used and placed correctly.
7. The conclusion did restate the thesis and flowed through into the lead out sentence. The lead out sentence did involve the two poems and their comparison.