Alex Chao

Positive Points:

1. Alex had a good descriptive of each subtopic that he addressed in his thesis statement.
2. He used a quote from someone and cited it like he was supposed to.

Negative Points:

1. Alex needs to have better punctuation. Had a few run-on sentences.
2. The conclusion needed more to it. It was too small and his lead-out sentence didn’t tie into the paper.