My analyzation of student examples in specifically based on “Proud African Muslim” by Amadou Diallo.
- The first thing that caught my attention was her mentor quote. Her quote was spoken by her grandma, whom she admires very much, in a
Category: Analysis of Student Example Education Narrative
Analysis of Student Example-Christi
Bithiah Boham Ed Narrative
1.He didn’t use run on sentences.He went straight to point and had very specific descriptive details.
2.His paragraphs aren’t very long but gave specific scenes that correlate to his topic and don’t have details that don’t …
Analysis of Student Example – Davina
Meryam Abdullah Ed Narrative
- Meryam uses dialogue in her story to help readers visualize the scene in her story.
- Meryam gives plenty of concrete specific details so that readers can continue to understand what the story is about.
- Meryam had
Analysis of Student Example-Brianna M.
- Category: Adrian Coree “What Happens When You Apply yourself”.
- There was alot of dialogue in the reading.I will have a good amount of dialogue in my narrative to make it seem real.
- The reading made me feel like i
Analysis of Student Example – Amit Darmalingum
Adrian Coree
- The essay includes specific details that make the narrative vivid. For example, the description of the tech office with shelves stocked with computer parts, the monitors displaying recordings, and the cramped workspace paints a clear picture for the
Analysis of Student Example – Said Babaev
“The Power of Sports” by Bithiah Boham
- A ‘feel-good individual progression through sport’ tale. Although Bithiah struggled to transition, she succeeded when a space opened for her on the women’s volleyball team. These changes had spill-over effects that expanded into
