Eve C ed narrative
- I really liked how she used her home language in order to write what his dad told her. This added more feeling to her narrative because it gave me a vision of how that scene must have been.
- Something I would like to incorporate in my narrative is the spacing she used for her dialogue in order to be easier to understand and not make it look too overcrowded. Also how she added obama’s text to make a connection to her story
- Her concrete details and how she added her feelings made it easier to understand her difficult situation and how she was able to be brave to continue her education and not give up
