Analysis of Student Example- Carlos v.

Adrian Coree on “What Happens When You Apply Yourself?”

  1. He made his sentences short but very informative, without writing too much and not missing important events. Also giving us the important background knowledge that comes together little by little.
  2. As I continue reading, most of my questions were answered and it’s more of showing us than telling, it gives the reader a clear structure to follow.
  3. The development into how at first he didn’t know much about technology nor was he interested but as he continued to proceed academic, there was more progression into what would eventually be his passion.

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