Analysis of student example – Aneyah S

”The power of sports” by Bithiah Boham.
1. I Like how this author makes sure to describe everything so we get a full image of what happening. Like how she carefully described her schedule and the way her friend looked.

2. I also Like how she talks about how volleyball was able to motivate her since being in a new school. I think that was an excellent choice to write about.

3. I Like her conclusion I feel like it’s very motivating especially for someone who may relate to this.

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