For the research revision essay, I will use my Lens Essay because I am more interest in finding how different technology influence people’s brain and the bad influence of technology do to the brain. This time I want to know it in a deeper way. For my lens essay, I know my writing have lot of shallow sentence instead of go Deeping down. Also, for the connection of Brain Plasticity cause people who using technology become addictive, I feel like I need more ideas to support that, and I will like to find more information to support me my claim. In order to do so, I have to come up with a scholarly question that I would like to pursue: what could be both cause and effect of Brain Plasticity do to our brain?