The essay I am revising is the lens essay. My lens essay has a lot of details but not a lot of strong evidence. I feel like it could be better than what it is now, It is lacking a lot of important things. I’m not entirely sure how the lens essay is suppose to be like. The lens essay I am rewriting is how are video games addicting. I feel like this is a good topic because there is more than enough sources that you go about this topic. I want to write about something different instead of brain plasticity it could be about cognitive surplus.  I could show the benefits and the disadvantages about the use of addiction to video games. I still have difficulties about what I really want to write. The use if the internet has created people that become addicted to the internet. This could be a benefit because people who are addicted to the internet have a cognitive surplus of their time and use to release some of the stress they have or escape the reality that troubles them.