The essay that I would like to revise is my Lens essay. I would like to add more information to each paragraphs and revising one more time will make me find errors that would be corrected. I would also like to write a strong controversy In the essay. Furthermore, I would like to specify and give more evidence for each weak paragraph. I also needed more time to organize my thoughts to write a well developed essay. I need to do more research about my Exhibit that connects to my lens.