Dear class,

Thank you for your hard work today.  I hope you leave armed with constructive feedback for your revision process.  Please remember that, if you didn’t finish the paragraph for the second essay you read, you need to send that paragraph to your partner over the weekend, so that they can attach it to the back of their final draft (along with the other required documents).

As mentioned in class, break your revision process down in to the 4 step process.  At each step, cross-check your writing against your feedback.  For Step 1, you’ll want to especially check your peer review partner’s answers to Question 1; for Step 2, you’ll want to check their answers to Question 5; for steps 3 and 4, consult the rest of their feedback.

-NOTE ON SPRING BREAK! Your break lasts from April 10 through April 18.  There is no class on Monday, April 17!  Instead, we will meet at the Ursula K. Schwerin Library (Atrium, 4th Floor) on Wednesday, April 19 for a library session.  We will also have a make-up day on Thursday, April 20, starting with Lab at 10 am.

-I’ve decided to extend the deadline for the Lens Essay Final Draft.  Please note that the Final Draft will be due on Monday, April 24.  Make sure you turn in a hard copy and upload the electronic copy.

-Enjoy your break!