After looking at the revision made on my work I realized my strong and weak point when it comes to writing. I notice that I need to stay focus on a main topic and build on it. I tend to be all over the place in my writing and I need to be more chronological instead of bring information from all over the text. When I give too much information at once it causes the reader to be confused and possibly not understand the rest of my essay. I also, need a better understanding of rhetorical analysis. My interpretation of it was that I am to help the reader understand what Dr. King is trying to say indirectly. I was confused with this because I didn’t understand the references Dr. King was trying to make. It reflected in my writing but I did seem to done a good job explaining the overall points Dr. King was trying to make. I faulted when failed to explain the rhetorical choices he used. Without the revision I wouldn’t have noticed that I have a tendency to join complete sentence, confuse the reader and make careless grammar mistakes. The revision helped me realize that I’m good at collecting important information I just need to work on applying the right way and play close attention to my grammar. To overcome this obstacle I’m going to make a checklist that I can use to review my work and continuously reread my writing.