As a writer mistakes aren’t seen until you make some edits, even then you might not see any because it’s you’re writing. My peer edits have taught me that I no transition words and unclear statements. For example the beginning is hard to understand because it is hard to understand what is the main point I am trying to get across to the reader. Also I did not quote correctly, giving the page number from where I got this quote. I know that when I am writing I move very fast not thinking about the flow of my sentences. When I am writing to many thoughts are going on in my head I am thinking about every paragraph and what is going to be put into it. I know that I need to take one step at a time, which make writing much easier.  There are some positives in my writing, I give good quotes that goes along with what I am talking about. My grammar is decent. I have some things to work on but that takes practice and sometimes it is the inpatients that gets to me. There are many ways to help by asking teachers for extra help or seek out different tutors to get a general idea of what your specific writing style can be. I feel as if grammar and sentence structure is my greatest defeat when it comes to writing.  This is hard skill to work on but hopefully with some practice comes perfect.