Having someone check your work for mistakes you could’ve made is a great thing. This doing such, can help you improve in certain areas such as Grammar or even help you give the reader a better understanding of what you are writing about. From the reviews i received about my draft there’s places where i can definitely improve such as getting to my point faster and not give extra information (background) about a certain person or thing because it wouldn’t matter in the situation. In My draft  i was also showed that i need to make what my topic is about because i am writing about a lot of things at the same time. I also realized i missed the main assignment because i didn’t choose one rhetorical choice from my choice of readings and most importantly i didn’t make clear which reading i chose to write about between “Dream” And “Jail”.  i must also cite where i am getting my information from such as quotes i might be using or things like that. A positive thing this process shows is that i have knowledge on my readings and i am familiar with a lot of the rhetorical choices king makes which can help me a lot when i decide which one to focus on for my final draft. There’s a lot of huge improvements i must make to my essay be successful and succeed in this assignment.