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Jason Sajn “Letter to King”

Dear Mr. King,

I undoubtedly found your speech “I Have A Dream” one of true inspiration, however, what I found most powerful and intriguing was your religious allusion. Your knowledge and/or familiarity in the realm of politics was a strong factor in proving that you were a proud American but you also went the extra mile in making reference to religion, particularly the Bible. In your speech you reiterated the famous words “I Have A Dream” and you made it a point to incorporate this thought provoking statement, “All men are created equal” (406). In using the word “created” you were in essence helping many to see that there is a Creator. You also stated the expression “Glory of the Lord” and referred to everyone as “Children of God” (407). The point being that whatever our diverse make-up we all originate from the same Creator. This was a powerful approach because many who would hear your speech were those from the south where racism was prevalent. People from the south also highly esteemed the bible and as a result should had known better than to judge one’s skin color.

Your Letter from Birmingham Jail was a testament of your bravery and determination. Despite the harsh conditions of prison, you remained intent in reaching many hearts by means of religious allusion. Since you continued to allude to the bible I learned that you are a man of concrete faith. I appreciated your use of the biblical example of Shadrach, Meshach, and Abednego who were willing to stand up for what was right despite the consequences of being thrown to the lion’s (3). Similarly, you were exemplary in standing up for what was right no matter the consequences.

Illiana Cantu letter to king

Dear Dr. King,

In your speech “I Have a Dream” something that stood out to me most in your language was the use of repetition “we can never be satisfied… “(405) in response to those who devote civil rights asking “When will you be satisfied?” (405); as well as the metaphor, “we are not satisfied and we will not be satisfied until justice rolls down like waters and righteousness like a mighty stream.” (406) I felt this was powerful because it successfully provides a clear picture to the people who are unrealistic in the dire situation of the struggles that black people are going through including police brutality, far travel, unsafe, poverty stricken living conditions, and no one in power to fight for them.

The feature of metaphor exemplifies in your letter to Birmingham, on your explanation for the word wait “It has been a tranquilizing thalidomide, relieving the emotional stress for a moment, only to give birth to an ill-formed infant of frustration.” (2) I found it relates back to your speech explaining yet again the struggles of the black community in which their cry for help was constantly disregarded. The difference between your letter and your speech was that I noticed you sounded exasperated which is understandable considering the great lengths you underwent to promote peace and awareness for your people but in return you were put in a jail cell. Especially when you get critiqued and overlooked by these apathetic people who are in power. This is important to me because even today minorities, such as myself, I’ve had my fair share and witness of injustice, what’s fair for one race should be fair for all. Although we’ve come a long way, we’ve got more to go.

Roman Morris Letter to King

Dear Mr.King,

One powerful aspect of your speech was your repeated use of repetition throughout. However, the most important and effective use of repetition in my opinion was “I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed…I have a dream that every valley shall be exalted…together”(406-407). This was the climax of the entire speech. Your repeated use of “I have a dream” drove home the point that this is not something definite, like a plan. It stems from ambition, and you basically told your audience that the only way to achieve this dream is to act now and act together. I believe that when people are told of a plan, they assume it is definite and therefore many people will not act on it, thinking they play a small role. An example of this would be voting for our Presidents. Millions of people decide not to vote, thinking his/her role is insignificant. Where as an election like this past one, we saw they every single vote would have had a significant impact.

I noticed you also used this repetition strategy in your Birmingham jail letter. Your explanation of the daily struggles of black people and how white people do not experience the same experience, going from seeing “vicious mobs lynching your mothers and fathers at will” to name becoming “nigger boy John”(2), I believe really helped show these oppressors why blacks and their movements could no longer “wait”.

Homework for 2/22

Dear class,

Excellent work today. Below is the homework for 2/22.  Please make note that there’s no class on Monday, February 20.

  1. Read “Letter from Birmingham Jail” pp 1-3.  Some questions to guide your reading:

How does King define “nonviolent direct action?”

What is the main accusation that King is defending himself against?

What are the key differences between just and unjust laws, and why are they so important?

Who is King’s audience, and what is his attitude toward them?

Why do you think King waits till the bottom of page 3 to make his “honest confessions”?

2. Blog post #2 due Monday: letter to King, comparing “I Have A Dream” to first 3 pages of “Letter.”  

Your letter should have two parts: in the first part, single out one feature of King’s language in “I Have A Dream” that you found powerful, intriguing, or especially confusing.  It could be a repeated pattern, an image, an allusion, a metaphor, or a sequence of thought.  Whatever you choose, a) introduce the feature, b) quote the relevant passage, and c) explain yourself in as much detail as you deem necessary.

In the second part of your post, compare this feature to the language of “Birmingham Jail” so far.  Do you notice anything different about King’s language in this letter?  What are some important similarities?  Explain to Dr. King why  the difference, or similarity, is important to you as a reader.

250 words.

3. Bring BOTH “I Have A Dream” and “Birmingham Jail” to next class. Please note that unpreparedness will incur deductions from your participation grade.

 

Best,

Professor Kwong

Class schedule on Monday; pre-reading questions for I Have A Dream

Dear class,

Hope you’re enjoying your break from class.  Just a reminder that Wednesday will follow Monday’s schedule: we’ll start at 10 am and let out at 12:15.  As mentioned last week, you should:
1) upload a copy of Essay 1 to the appropriate Dropbox by 10 am Wednesday (Dropboxes—>Final Draft Dropboxes—>Essay 1 Dropbox),
2) have a physical copy ready at the beginning of class,
3) read ‘I Have A Dream,uploading images of any 2 annotated pages to the appropriate Dropbox ( (Dropboxes—>Annotation Dropboxes—>”I Have A Dream” Annotated Pages).  Here are the pre-reading questions:
-Why does King refer to Lincoln at the beginning of his speech?  How does Lincoln add power to King’s message?
-What are some images or metaphors that seem to repeat throughout the speech?
-What are some moments where you see King appealing to logic and reason?  Where do you see him appeal to emotion?
For Essay 1, please consult our notes from last class and the Assignment description to make sure you’re adhering to professional formatting standards.  I look forward to reading your work!
Best,
Professor Kwong