Anto Sabu
Two Positives:
-He used a great opening quote by Socrates that perfectly connects to his personal experiences of trying to fit into a new life while still being held by the past.
-Anto perfectly implements all of his subtopics from his thesis into the body paragraphs, therefore fulfilling his “promise” to the reader.
Two Negatives:
-There are many grammar and spelling errors
-Anto needs to work on transitioning from one paragraph to the next
