11) Partner’s new Audience for Paragraph #1 of Personal Narrative Essay

The new audience that I made for Anto, is someone that doesn’t know much about drastic change. I envisioned a character, that lives in a farm so they don’t have much interaction with the different cultures as opposed to someone that lives in the city. The reason I chose this character is because if the character does move away from the farm into the city, they would be completely lost and confused so by reading a version of Anto’s essay dieted towards him it might help him with the transition.